Desert Blade (STORY) Pt1

[D Trent]

And, as promised, the next chapter (San Clore) is up. I've edited the existing two posts, adding another A/N and the next chapter.
Feedback on the Desert Blade, Lance and Sidney's relationship, and Seth, are greatly appreciated.

Enjoy.

[D Trent]

So I've decided, if this story doesn't reach 150 (approx. 25 more) views before it dies out (AGAIN), then I'll pack it up. It's been great just sharing a few pages with ChickenSmoothie, and I've really enjoyed it. But, if I do leave this story, then I'd like to say a massive thanks to the readers, and especially those who've commented on it. ^-^

[Mirry]

I think this has some real potential! I'd love to read more!

[WhoLocked]

aw...sad day...

[D Trent]

I think this has some real potential! I'd love to read more!

Thanks

I am still writing the story, whether or not I post it up here, but it just takes a bit of effort with the formatting and everything (i.e. italics mainly).

[Mirry]

That's understandable. I have the same problems, mostly with making it look 'presentable'.

[D Trent]

Next chapter (AFFECTIONATE) is up! Wrote most of it on my phone, which seemed long and tedious (especially with the lack of spell-check).
Now, I have no idea what sort of genre you guys like reading. If you'd like to comment with some sort of description, I'll see if I can bend the story towards the most popular genre.
Other than that, uh... I'm busy for a couple of weeks, so I might not be able to write as fast. But otherwise, enjoy! Criticism is appreciated.

[Mirry]

That's wonderful! I love it! You did an amazing job.

[D Trent]

That's wonderful! I love it! You did an amazing job.

Thanks again, Mirry ^-^

[4ever.a.1Directioner]

wow that is a goood story. if it was in a book i would deff buy it!!!