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by bodie » Tue Jun 21, 2011 4:13 pm
Shimmerleaf wrote:*sigh* I have a dead Semi-Lit RP that died before it started, but it possibly has a chance of being revived. I have gotten two forms since it died... One was very nice, semi-lit, and will be accepted if the RP starts back up again. The other... well, I'm in a bit of a dilemma. Here is their form:
Non-Literate Person in a Semi-Lit RP wrote:Name:******
Gender:female
Rank:cub

Personality:very sweet and intelligent.also, very flirty(like keara was with kouvu XD)
Appearance (optional):golden with light blue eyes and some brown spots on her fur all over.
History (optional):she was born in the pride.....thats it really....0-o
Family (cubs, mother, etc.):mother died protecting the pride.
Flaws:she always is thinking of killing something or maybe just serveirly harming it...
Example of a paragraph you might write about your character:***** ran after the others and tryed to catch up, but couldnt.she sighed.she would never be as fast as the others.
{Obviously this is a Lion RP.}
Here is a list of flaws, some of which I had to change, such as the name, to post on here.
-Name was not capitalized.
-NOT SEMI-LIT!
-No capitalization or grammar or correct spellin.
-Character makes NO sense.
-Does not follow my rules. I specifically said a paragraph is between four and eight sentences. What do they give me? 3 I-don't-know-what-to-call-'em's.
So, this is clearly not semi-lit. Makes no sense, either. But I only have me and two other people as members in the RP... what do I do?
Ask the person who posted that to look at the other forms and try again
goodbye kurloz
cs won't forget u bb
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by Shimmerleaf » Tue Jun 21, 2011 4:17 pm
So, I told the first person, the obviously semi-lit person, that they were accepted, and the illiterate posts:
Illiterate trying to join my Semi-Lit RP wrote:what about me?

So I reply:
Me wrote:{I would like you to please read the rules, other's forms, and perhaps the title of the RP.}
Was that too harsh?
My lights are OFF!
I walked across
An empty land,
I knew the pathway like the back of my hand
I felt the earth
Beneath my feet,
Sat by the river and it made me complete
Oh, simple thing
Where have you gone?
I'm getting old and I need something to rely on
So tell me when
You're gonna let me in,
I'm getting tired and I need somewhere to begin
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by sealsnoot » Tue Jun 21, 2011 4:18 pm
Shimmerleaf wrote:So, I told the first person, the obviously semi-lit person, that they were accepted, and the illiterate posts:
Illiterate trying to join my Semi-Lit RP wrote:what about me?

So I reply:
Me wrote:{I would like you to please read the rules, other's forms, and perhaps the title of the RP.}
Was that too harsh?
Perfect, I'd say.
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by bodie » Tue Jun 21, 2011 4:20 pm
Wolfe:. wrote:Shimmerleaf wrote:So, I told the first person, the obviously semi-lit person, that they were accepted, and the illiterate posts:
Illiterate trying to join my Semi-Lit RP wrote:what about me?

So I reply:
Me wrote:{I would like you to please read the rules, other's forms, and perhaps the title of the RP.}
Was that too harsh?
Perfect, I'd say.
Agreed
I have a huge plot twist for my warriors roleplay, but I don't know it it'll work -crosses fingers-
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