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by wickedwolfgirl » Tue Jun 14, 2011 1:44 pm
Kitten. wrote:Spaghetti wrote:My english teacher does not believe that RPing is good writing practice. I very strongly disagree with this, it's just as much practice as writing a story, maybe even more because you have to work with how much info someone else gave you.
My rant:
My english teacher got mad at me for RPing (not during class btw) >.<
Role playing has improved my writing skills quite a bit.
Yesterday, I left a post up on Word {I use it for spell check c:} and my mother read it; it was a profile for a new character I'm fleshing out, and she didn't believe me when I said I wrote it. She said that I wasn't that good of a writer. c:
Really, the only way to improve your writing skills is to write a lot, and write well. I don't think it matters if you're RP'ing or writing a story by yourself; as long as you're writing, and using your grammar, punctuation, and capitalization skills to write something that's worth being called a paragraph, it helps. Those are just my thoughts.
Roleplay is what got me interested in writing. I did not do much writing, because I hated it. Roleplay taught me what to do, what not to do, how to go about fleshing a decent character out, make a functioning plot, and how to put my ideas and visions down into words.
And I find another way of improving writing skills is by reading like a madman.
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by Wildmagic_warrior » Tue Jun 14, 2011 1:44 pm
flys to lake and sits by waters egde and looks at my reflection in the water and wonders.....Y?
I will now attempt to list everything that is wrong with this post.
1. "Flys" should be "flies." It should also be capitalized.
2. "Egde" should be "edge."
3. There needs to be a "the" between "to" and "lake", or "lake" should be capitalized because it's a name of a place.
4. "Y" is not a word. It should be "why" and it should not be capitalized.
5. "....." NO. An ellipsis is only three dots, not five.
6. It changes tense, from third person to first person and back to third again.
7. There needs to be commas instead of "and" "and" "and". Either that, or it should be two separate sentences.
I will now attempt to put that messy blob into a grammatically correct paragraph.
I fly towards the lake and pause, hovering in midair, watching as the sunlight glitters gently off of the waves. It's windy, and the moving air buffets my face and wings. I go into a dive, cutting through the sky like a knife through butter, with the wind whistling in my ears. I spread my wings to stop the dive and come to a halt in midair, landing gently on the stones of the shore. They crunch under my feet as I slither closer to the water, glancing down at my reflection. The sight of my scarred face brings tears to my eyes as I remember the battle, and I can't help but think, why?
IT'S NOT THAT HARD, PEOPLE.
ARGH.
I'm Wildmagic_warrior,
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by Wildmagic_warrior » Tue Jun 14, 2011 1:58 pm
● ғ σ я ɛ ʌ ɛ я ● wrote:Calmdown, don'tcha rememeber when you were a one-liner? Gawd.
Someone joined ____'s rp and she literally cursed them out for being a one-liner.
Yes, I do remember, and people probably ranted about me back then.
So instead of getting pissed off on the roleplay, I come here to vent instead ^^
I'm Wildmagic_warrior,
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I have a bachelor's degree in Russian Studies. I also love stage management and theater tech! English is my first language, but I also speak Russian and sign ASL.
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by saige. » Tue Jun 14, 2011 2:09 pm
You know how much I LOVE getting PMed for not posting on our 1x1 in two days? -.-' I'M FREAKING BUSY! Not my freaking fault I was living my life >.> Just calm yourself and let me post when I get the chance, not when you freaking remind me Dx
i sent snacky a joke and they gave me a yeen what a world
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by void. » Tue Jun 14, 2011 3:25 pm
Reveries wrote:I have a bunch of muse right now, but only two people are on in the RP I'm in and their charrys are far away from mine.
Thiss!
Rant;
I was like OMYGOD....Kassua gave me an invite.
But, now I'm like OHNO I can't decide on an animal.
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