[fairy666tale]

*sweatdrops* Okay, this is my first time EVER posting on the Oekaki. So please don't be too harsh with your critisism, though constructive critisism is always welcome.
I drawed this with mouse (since I don't have one of those cumputer pens. Yet.), and it was also my first time using Chibi-paint. I know the manes didn't work out too well, so if anyone has a suggestion how to improve that, please tell^^

[Shadow]

This is very good, especially for a first Oekaki drawing. :3

[Technicolor]

so cute. <3 looks like its chest is a Hearsey Kiss. :3

[grated]

wow i think it is great lol

[Vargulf]

For a first time this is pretty good...keep practicing....I use a mouse as well so I know what you mean lol. Some times my facial structure is off and it drives me up the wall...Now if I had a tablet then things would be much better....Since this is your first I won't give any crit.