Username + User ID: metal sonic 1001347
Link to Chicoon: Forum/viewtopic.php?f=124&t=4798912
Edits on Chicoon:
- ev : parasite
c : tail tuft (discord giveaway)
nr : coloured pupil
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approved
-roadkill-69
Xynthalium
Foxil
leonscharizard
InuImori
nio
Caeleesi
birds of a feather
Ottercola
sibylline,
softbarks
mango531
BunnyBeammartyy
GreyScale
ege
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Orien
rainbowpanda101
imabanditø
MaroonCookie
dwarjam
CountingCrows
hamkid
HallowMoon
Rosemoon
Alpha Snowdust
Cr0wz
Birbmaster
Buzz Aesthetic
KandieFloofsterLoch
stellulite
seiku88
sweathie
gay sonic
crowthefrostyfloof
approved with conditions
Diavolo
condition:
if the eyelid edit is intended to be an expression, add "expression (nr)" to your traits list. if it is intended to be a visual indicator of "disability (nr)", no changes need to be made :)
bakuraas.
condition:
"powers/abilities (r)" only covers one power or ability. since none of the powers you chose are visible on your chicoon's reference, feel free to just pick one to keep :)
Loxosceles
condition:
you have "tail tuft edit (C)" on your MYO from the Discord Raffle, so use of a store potion is not necessary.
Cosmic_Dragon
condition:
"traits" coved by parasites are not considered real traits. remove the following traits from your traits list:
"nose edit (R)"
"'fang' edit (C)"
"horns (C)"
Eevee55
condition:
"pupil edit" is Uncommon, not Common -> change on traits list
remove the following traits from your traits list:
"Extra Feathers (C)"
"Minor Fur Edit/Fur Texture Edit (UC)"
"Small Patches of Fire on Fur (UC)"
woofer-moosh
condition:
remove "tufts (C)" from traits list
ToraOkami303
condition:
your fire patches on fur are small enough to be considered "small patches of fire on fur (UC)" so if you want to make them bigger you can and submit for re-approval, however you don't need to
Cinerious
condition:
add "colored sclera (UC)
tiredddd
condition:
add "custom lined (NR)" to traits list
add "offsite chicoon" tag to image
denied
RammuIsWeird
reason:
parasite must be firmly attached to a chicoon's body
Mavi
reason:
indication of which side is the parasite is unclear -
- "minor wing edits (uc)" and "other than feathered wings (r)" conflict as parasites do not have traits
- depending on which side of the chicoon is the parasite, "tail edit (uc)" would need to be "no tail (r)"
- improper use of "frog brew" item - horns are not round
PrincessAlexis
reason:
"colored sclera (UC)" not on the main chicoon reference
conditions (not reasons for denial):
- not sure if this one has been made public knowledge yet, but chicoons with "powers/abilities (R)" cannot shapeshift into humans for ~lore reasons~
- buck'a'lotl parasite doesn't need to be visible, no worries
werewolves.
reason:
parasite must be a notably separate color from chicoon design
Ki-san
reason:
"Flame Halos (UC)" seem a bit too far off from what we allow for flame halos. Pick one of the following two options:
- add "flame points" (ex)
- make the halos circular
solos
reason:
parasite must be a notably separate color from chicoon design
Dartist
reason:
no tail stripes - "glowing spots/patches (UC)" on tail stripes (of different color) negate the tail stripes
blizzard180
reason:
parasite is not clearly connected to itself. it currently seems to be in three different categories - front arms, back arms, and the head/neck/back/tail section. parasite must be continuous to be considered a singular parasite.
i recommend making a clear connection between all of the sections (best option is a "line" on the underbelly)!
FatalCollapse
reason:
worm chicoons must have a clear separation between the hindquarters and the tail (ex
CO1LD
reason:
chicoon has traits which are not covered by MYO: "colored sclera (UC)" and "eyelashes (C)"
"flame halos (uc)" must match flame color (sunny)
add "scars (NR)" to traits list (torn wings)
space oddity
reason:
chicoon has both "teeth edit (C)" and "'fang edit' (C)" - "teeth edit" is not covered by MYO.
additionally, you don't need to use "Essence of Spider" on this chicoon, save the item for something else!
Quillflight
reason:
Chicoon legs are too edited to be considered "weight/stature (NR)" - you will need "Leg Style Edit (UC)" to cover this
additionally, you don't need to use "Cracked Dragon Scales" on this chicoon, save the item for something else!
case
reason:
link machine broke.
additionally, "powers/abilities (R)" cannot be used to mimic "glowing spots/patches (UC)"
redtruck
reason:
incorrect tail stripes - the black stripes being on the "mouth" of the parasite is legal, however we do not count the "tail tip" stripe as a rarity stripe so your chicoon currently only has one tail stripe.
HeyoCoyoteHere
reason:
facial hair is not covered under "Hair Style (R)" and will need to be edited to "Tufts (C)" or "Major Fur Edit (R)"
shadedk9
reason:
needs "'fang edit' (C)" rather than "other mouth edit (C)" and "horns (C)" for horns on wings
Zigzagzoon
reason:
"extra feathers (C)" need to resemble feathers more - i recommend adding a "rachis" (the center dividing line) to your feathers :)
also add "expression (NR)" to traits list
staccato
reason:
"weight (bony) (NR)" should not affect the curvature of the top of a chicoon's head or a chicoon's nose
Zentropy
reason:
chicoon needs "teeth edit (C)" to cover pointy teeth
Woodchip
reason:
chicoon needs "'fang' edit (C)" to cover edit to main 'fang'
dragoness129 (1)
reason:
chicoon has "teeth edit (C)" not "'fang' edit (C)"
dragoness129 (2)
reason:
since this is a normal MYO and not your Character Creation MYO, please re-submit under the Main Archive Thread when it reopens :)
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