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by Noctyrn » Tue Jun 07, 2011 3:26 pm
Tech wrote:Blue.Leopard wrote:Tech wrote:This is kind of a half-devoted story, so sorry if it isn't that good.


p.s the characters in this story are anthros.
His fingers danced across the keys, a pure and strong sound coming out of each one. Indeed, he needed an intense amount of concentration, but he had played this song so many times that he could memorize it backwards. This once graceful song was now played to death, he thought, and finished it with a strong ending.
"That was wonderful, Icyulum! That was a splendid job playing the Joker's Final Words To The King. Even the most talented pianist in the country couldn't play it that well." his aunt said to him, and immediately started boasting to her friends about it. The enormous crowd that had come to visit him play that day were whispering and taking pictures of him. This happened all the time. He was always praised by his talent, but quite frankly he didn't care. He would be grateful if he could get some useful constructive criticism once in a while, but everyone around him seemed to think he was perfect at this or something. He sighed and stepped away from the grand piano, and got a drink of water.
After a while, everyone left, only leaving himself in the music room. He grinned, and decided to play the Joker's Final Words To The King once again, for one last time before he quit playing the piano.
After he finished the piece, he heard someone clap.
"Bravo, Mister pianist. That's quite a song you just played there." the voice said.
He stepped forward. "Who's there?"
"Relax, i'm just someone who likes listening to music." the voice said, and someone stepped out of the shadows. It was a young, but a tall female girl. She wore the strangest clothing- like a clown, but somewhat graceful. And to top it off, she had a mask on-a Joker's mask. She grinned and laughed.
He, Icyulum, frowned.
"I do appreciate your praise, but i'm getting tired of playing for people, so before you go boasting to your friends-"
"Boast?" the joker-girl laughed, "Why would i boast about a song that is played so poorly? You're getting cocky, boy." she said. Icyulum looked surprised, but then smiled.
"i think that was the best thing said to me all day. Care to tell me why my song was played so poorly?"he asked, grinning.
"Not enough feeling to the song. You don't feel like you enjoy it. Not when all the people you play the song for only like you for their own benefits."the girl said. Icyulum nodded. "Also, i have a general hatred for the Joker's Final Words To The King. It reminds me of my final words to the king." the girl said, and looked at her shoes.
Although Icyulum didn't get what the girl siad, he shrugged. "Well, thanks for the critisism. I'll be sure to remember that when next playing a song. What's your name by the way?"
The girl look back up and laughed wildly. "Jys. And yours?"
"Icyulum"
"Well, be sure to have perfected a song next time i come here, because next time you'll be playing for me." Jys said and swiftly ran out of the music room.
Aw very nice, I like that!
Thanks.

No problem, are you thinking of continuing it? c:

previously Blue.Leopard and Heracross
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by Zeee » Tue Jun 07, 2011 3:34 pm


Chad---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Jayln
A little pairing for my friend, who, unfortuneatly, doesnt go on CS. Yes, these are her parents. Yes, these are their real names. I just want to show her now, so I put the real names.
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by brian emo » Tue Jun 07, 2011 3:49 pm
~*Moo*~ wrote:

Chad---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Jayln
A little pairing for my friend, who, unfortuneatly, doesnt go on CS. Yes, these are her parents. Yes, these are their real names. I just want to show her now, so I put the real names.
Ooh Jayln is a pretty name 8D
How is it pronounced? :3
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by omori » Tue Jun 07, 2011 3:52 pm

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Desirae {f} - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Skylar {f}
If someone told you that you were going to die in less than two weeks, what would you do? What would you say?
How would you react?
Would it seem strange to you if this happened to your 16-year-old best friend, and you reacted worse than them?
Would it seem even more strange if your friend saw this as a good situation?
If they seemed...
happy?
(( Might continue later. n_n ))
[ waiting for something to happen? ]
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by ariel. » Tue Jun 07, 2011 3:58 pm
Marquee Moon wrote:~*Moo*~ wrote:

Chad---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Jayln
A little pairing for my friend, who, unfortuneatly, doesnt go on CS. Yes, these are her parents. Yes, these are their real names. I just want to show her now, so I put the real names.
Ooh Jayln is a pretty name 8D
How is it pronounced? :3
Jay-lynn ^^
@Kitteh :3
I love the paring <3 Your stories are always amazing ^^
Kitteh :3 wrote:
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Desirae {f} - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Skylar {f}
If someone told you that you were going to die in less than two weeks, what would you do? What would you say?
How would you react?
Would it seem strange to you if this happened to your 16-year-old best friend, and you reacted worse than them?
Would it seem even more strange if your friend saw this as a good situation?
If they seemed...
happy?
(( Might continue later. n_n ))
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by flashlight reveries~ » Tue Jun 07, 2011 4:07 pm


dusk ---------- dawn
love is a
fickle thing
it {clasps} them /together\, even as they drift .f a r t h e r. and .f a r t h e r. apart.
as the nights
linger, they l-o-n-g for each other.
the winter solstice keeps them a
world apart.
but as the days -s t r e t c h- endlessly into the nighttime hours,
they feel themselves
gravitating closer/and/closer,
until, finally,
they sometimes
brush hands on their way through the {door}.
yes,
love is a
fickle thing indeed.
/shot
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by aquamarine » Tue Jun 07, 2011 4:34 pm
{{ U.nexpected situations }}
She arrived home from school with the house a mess and cardboard packing boxes scattered all over the floor.
"Daddy? What's going on?"
Her father appeared from around the corner looking worn, tired and incredibly sad.
"I"m sorry, honey, but we're leaving. We have to get out of here."
A chill went through her body.
"What ... what do you mean leaving?"
He shook his head; it was clear he didn't want to talk about it.
"You know, Kaylie. I don't have a job, you're supposed to be going to a high school next year that costs a huge load of money, and I can't pay for this house anymore. We're going back East to live with you're grandparents. Bottom line, I don't think we're coming back."
Kaylie could feel herself start to freak out. "What? But my friends, my school, my soccer team ... no Daddy we can't leave!"
Her father just rubbed his hands over his unshaven face and and stuck something in his mouth as he got back to packing.
Her blood ran cold. "Is that a cigarette? Are you SMOKING? Daddy, stop! Stop! What is wrong with you!"
She ran to him and was about to grab it out of his mouth when he slapped her hand away, his eyes cold with fury.
"Do NOT touch me. Go pack, Kaylie."
She looked into his eyes and felt tears welling up in hers. She flew to her room, slamming the door behind her and shutting out the rest of the world.
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by Vanilla Twilight. » Tue Jun 07, 2011 4:45 pm
aquamarine wrote:{{ U.nexpected situations }}
She arrived home from school with the house a mess and cardboard packing boxes scattered all over the floor.
"Daddy? What's going on?"
Her father appeared from around the corner looking worn, tired and incredibly sad.
"I"m sorry, honey, but we're leaving. We have to get out of here."
A chill went through her body.
"What ... what do you mean leaving?"
He shook his head; it was clear he didn't want to talk about it.
"You know, Kaylie. I don't have a job, you're supposed to be going to a high school next year that costs a huge load of money, and I can't pay for this house anymore. We're going back East to live with you're grandparents. Bottom line, I don't think we're coming back."
Kaylie could feel herself start t freak out. "What? But my friends, my school, my soccer team ... no Daddy we can't leave!"
Her father just rubbed his hands over his unshaven face and and stuck something in his mouth as he got back to packing.
Her blood ran cold. "Is that a cigarette? Are you SMOKING? Daddy, stop! Stop! What is wrong with you!"
She ran to him and was about to grab it out of his mouth when he slapped her hand away, his eyes cold with fury.
"Do NOT touch me. Go pack, Kaylie."
She looked into his eyes and felt tears welling up in hers. She flew to her room, slamming the door behind her and shutting out the rest of the world.
That happened to my friend, I miss her dearly.. Amazingly written<3
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by IgnoreThisAccount » Tue Jun 07, 2011 4:55 pm
Aqua:Short, yet amazing

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Tam [m]x Serenity[f]
Walking, walking down a street
With no one special to meet.
You look down on the wet ground
No one asked you if you were safe and sound
Then you look up and-FLASH!
Was that light just a dash?
You open your eyes slowly and steady
For that flash you weren't ready
In front of you there is a spirit
You are just staring at it
It said "My name is Serenity"
Her voice was like a melody
Her wings were powerul yet light
You are hugging your backpack tight
Serenity quickly grabs your hand
And moved her arm like a wand
She flies with you into the sky
And to your home you say goodbye
You think everything will be wrong
But Serenity's voice is like a song
Sorry, it's really bad...
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