Love Letters [discussion]

[Spiritstar3]

Kay kay

[senna_]

@Spiritstar3 you don't care if we don't post visuals here, right? like of outfits and stuff? because i've just been doing that in the discord but it's come to my attention that you aren't in the chat

[Spiritstar3]

I don't mind either way, honestly.

[sunhorsestar]

@Spirit: Since you don’t have the Discord, announcement- The RP is up! Link on first post of here and the sign-ups

[Spiritstar3]

[sunhorsestar]

@Spirit: Ok, so I have to run for dinner, but I’ll be back in half an hour, just wanted to leave you with this since it’s been brought up with you a few times and hasn’t seemed to be taken in before. This time, it’s not just me, I’ve received similar frustrations from almost everyone in the RP about part of your style being to describe your characters' personalities and appearances the same way each and every post, as I’ve been told, and have experienced, that it leaves a lot of text, but really not a whole lot to work off of, which leads into a little rut that nobody wants to fall into, where the writing becomes tricky.

Do you think you could find some way to portray these things without describing them every post? (Like expressing it through playing them out rather than explaining their personality and all) It's not a bad thing every now and then, but people are having a fair bit of difficulty (myself included) figuring out how to respond when a character can’t really work off of/respond to appearances.

[Spiritstar3]

Okay, I'm trying here, and I took out the personality stuff for Jessikka. I've been posting mostly just text and speech for her in pretty sure. If they're getting annoyed at Sage they shouldn't be, because his post is mostly text and stuff about the house and such, plus he's only tagged with Devin right now.

Also, Luciano's post mentioned Jessikka saying something he'd also said, so I just want to know what they said the same. Just so I know. I'm assuming it was the part about the house being grand and whatever else I wrote there.

[sunhorsestar]

I’m not making any accusations here, I’m just letting you know, so you’re not left in the dark about things. I don’t think it’s about Sage so much as just that specific style in general, as reading the same thing over and over again can become a big grating and cause people to skim, which means things get missed, unfortunately.

Yeah, that was it

[Spiritstar3]

Kay kay

XD kay

[sunhorsestar]

Can you try? Just to experiment a little?