A poem I wrote out of boredom and free time

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A poem I wrote out of boredom and free time

Postby mal du pays » Sat Jun 04, 2011 10:34 am

This is a poem I am writing. Summerpaw belongs to Summerpaw ( Me!!!!)


Dreams of Darkness

She feels the Rain hit her face and paws
But she's unaware of the Storm, Just focused on the
Blood And
Darkness in her head
She Fears for her life
As she feels the Pain in her vision.

As the Storm ceases
She fades to the Blackness
As she slowly Dies
Of the Pain and Darkness

The Dreams
The Hopes
The Violence
She feels herself fading, Ever so Slowly

How can she stop this Terror
How will she stop from fading into the Blackness?
How could she stop from Disapearing?
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