Signature Criticism! [v.1]

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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby HyperfixationStation » Wed Dec 22, 2021 5:54 pm

Ooh... I really like this actually! The symmetry in it is done extremely well! It looks very pleasing! If i'd have to find a fault, I think that the text in the middle looks a little off-center? It might just be me or how the text is, but still, great job!
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby witcherrii » Wed Dec 22, 2021 5:57 pm

i think your signature is incredibly creative actually, i really adore it
however, i think the white square is hard to see compared to orange and black!
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby afycso » Wed Dec 22, 2021 6:04 pm

i really like how your holibomber marker is set aside from the other half of ur sig and the consistent winter/christmas theme. it's very neat! there's nothing to critique about the way it is as far as i can see, but maybe to add some extra pizazz you could box in the separate sections and add a centerpiece :0
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby glitter » Sat Jan 01, 2022 12:08 pm

i rlly like how aligned everything is. even though u went for a minimalist look, it doesnt look empty and it is pleasing to look at.

maybe instead of using dashes etc, you could find png brackets to give ur sig a more solid look. or add blocks of color.
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby viles » Sat Jan 01, 2022 12:13 pm

  • i had prepared to talk about the fact that the bottom line of your signature was much farther right than the rest of the signature, but it seems that you have removed it, likely due to the issue i mentioned. i guess if i have to say something i'm not the biggest fan of the gif in the middle. i think it's slightly different color and aesthetic than that rest of the signature. however, it's not blatant or anything, and i feel nitpicky bringing it up. honestly, other than that, i don't see anything i would change. the layout is good, i like the symbols you've chosen for the borders, and the color palette is pleasing. it's a well-made signature!
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby sxtxrn » Tue Jan 04, 2022 6:37 am

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    it’s … beautiful
    maybe make the lips colored to match the emojis?
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby heizou » Wed Jan 12, 2022 3:29 am

    i don't know how to fault this sig, maybe make the coloured text more purple instead so it's a little easier to read while still matching the image?
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby ChevyTheQH » Wed Jan 12, 2022 3:31 am

I love the gif, maybe add more so its more spread out long ways? It seems really crammed into one corner
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby Ebony Stardust » Wed Jan 12, 2022 3:34 am

Pretty neat, but there's a lot of empty space near the top. Maybe move the lower part up closer to the quote?
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby heizou » Wed Jan 12, 2022 3:37 am

    i think there's too many colours and some lines of text being much longer than other lines of text is stressing me out
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