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blue blast by alfy1998

Artist alfy1998 [gallery]
Time spent 1 hour, 21 minutes
Drawing sessions 12
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blue blast

Postby alfy1998 » Mon May 30, 2011 2:37 am

comments and critics are welcome
Last edited by alfy1998 on Wed Jun 01, 2011 3:24 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: will finish later

Postby alfy1998 » Mon May 30, 2011 4:17 am

bump!
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Re: will finish later

Postby wizzlekhalifa » Mon May 30, 2011 4:18 am

i think it is awesome!
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Re: will finish later

Postby -Obsidian » Mon May 30, 2011 4:59 am

very good, but it has the slight impression that after the nose, the head is cut slightly short and quite slanted, if you get what i mean...sorry for the bad analagy. I like it though!
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Re: will finish later

Postby alfy1998 » Tue May 31, 2011 3:15 am

thanksss
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Re: will finish later

Postby Soruc » Tue May 31, 2011 6:44 am

Amazing <3
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Re: will finish later

Postby Chi! » Tue May 31, 2011 9:19 am

I like it! But you could make the top lip a little less large and the nose is a bit weird. Not to be mean but to help you improve.

I REALLY like it :) Great. Awesome!
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Re: will finish later

Postby luckyis » Tue May 31, 2011 11:33 am

I still don't see how this is a WIP but I love it anyway :D
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Close your eyes
I know what you see

The darkness is high
And you're in ten feet deep
But you have faced
More terrible monsters
Than sleep
Know that I will be here
To help you to dream

Nico's lullaby
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Re: will finish later

Postby petvet3 » Tue May 31, 2011 11:35 am

I LOVE how you did the breath... ice... thingy.
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Re: blue blast

Postby alfy1998 » Wed Jun 01, 2011 3:32 am

thank you summerflow and petvet :D

Ok , I changed the title ( I forgot XD ) , the mouth and the nose..thank you chi! and luckyis :) hope it's better
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