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Just some writing

Postby MerryEaster » Sun May 29, 2011 12:44 pm

One day, a group of 6 friends were sitting around, drinking Chicken Smoothies at the Central Park, like they do every night. It 'twas Lego, Wolfy, Merri, Neo, Kaitou, and Night. As the day grew dark, the 6 friends decided to head home. That is, until Night tripped over something small, soft, and furry...

The thing didnt growl, just layed their in agonizing pain. Neo and Kaitou scooped the little furry creature in their arms. Since it was dark, everyone was a little sketchy about Neo and Kaitou picking it up, whatever it was. Lego, however, was just a tad bit more sketchy and shouted out, "You guys are just picking up that thing, and dont even know what it has, nor what it is!" I, Merri, had to agree, and nodded awkwardly in silence. Then everyone started argueing about what is right and whatnot.

Night, the one who tripped over it, and asked for my help to get on a larger rock. "Hey! You guys, are you really argueing over something so small, literally!" Everyone quieted down, so quiet you could hear muffled cries coming from the creature. Wolfy was searching her bag, until she pulled a small flashlight. She shined it over to Neo and Kaitou's arms, to see a little wolf, no bigger then a toaster.

I took Wolfy's flashlight and examined the pup. It had amber eyes, somewhat teal fur, with some dark brown. I looked carefully at its mouth, and I noticed its mouth had been stitched, and so did Night. Almost everyone gasped a little when I pointed the flashlight at its mouth, all except for Night.

Night pushed us back, and scooped the little guy in her arms. She hugged it softly and stroked its head. "There are probably hundreds of little ones like this one." she pressed her cheek to the little wolf and continued, "maybe we should make our own place, and adopt these animals out to others, and help them. We would call it...Chibi Park." We all thought that was a great idea of course, because now, it's very popular and available to the community. Instead of drinking Chicken smoothies in the park, we raised enough money to buy the park. We found tons of poor animals, and thats how Chibi Park came to be:)


Hurray for Night! My late gift to you. Hope you like it. Sorry if its not perfect, I kinda fail at writing T_T
Also, I hope you dont mind, I described your chibi, Night, in a paragraph.
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Re: Just some writing

Postby MintCat » Sun May 29, 2011 1:22 pm

First post! I love it! It's great, better than I can do!
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Re: Just some writing

Postby TheNightsIllusion » Mon May 30, 2011 3:36 am

<3<3<3<3<3 I love it Merry!!!! <3 Thank you!
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