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by midnightrain. » Sat May 29, 2021 10:02 am
@SilentMelody I'm really sorry to say but I think I'm going to have to leave this RP. I've been very crowded schedule-wise lately (the end of the year brings forth a bunch of tests and I also have my own RP to worry about) and I really don't want to make people have to wait long for responses. This also means that I'm no longer going to use Chirppaw, Bumblesight or Hollyspring. It was really fun while it lasted though, and if my schedule opens up again sometime in the summer and this RP is still active, I'll be sure to check in again! ^^
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by -cosmixtea » Mon May 31, 2021 1:32 am
Lightwhisker
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Gender; male
Age; 18 moons
Rank; Warrior
Sexuality; hetero
Crush; Silentpaw
Parents; Doeleap (mother) Creme(kittypet) (father)
Siblings; Lily and Dawnpaw
Friends; Freshbreath, Brightcloud and Mothmouth
Enemies; Creme(even tho he’s dead he still hates his father)
Appearance; a lean, slim, and small cream mackerel tabby tom with white tips and thin pale green eyes with a slightly bushy tail and long whiskers
Prophecy; prophecy of lies - "the true heart of a warrior is revealed throughout the light of day". Lightwhisker has the ability to tell if cats who are very close to him are lying or not.
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Personality; Lightwhisker is an eager, energetic young warrior who loves to try new things. He was always getting himself in trouble as a kit, and he loved to explore. He is very adventurous and always somehow has an optimistic attitude, making sure that he creates a soft, happy environment. He uses his power for not-very-serious things, although he knows he should learn to use it properly.
History; He was born as Wild to Doeleap and Creme, along with his sisters Lily and Dawn. He was always the most adventurous, and was often finding himself in some sort of trouble. When his mother died, Creme took them to Destinyclan, trying to make a new life for his abandoned kits. Only Wild and Dawn decided to go, but Lily said she would rather be a rouge than join a clan. So they joined Destinyclan, and when they were apprenticed, everyone had a uneasy feeling about them. They gained their trust, and continued working their hardest in their training. He then received a vision, and found out that he had a prophecy! Shortly before their warrior’s assessment, Dawnpaw was scooped up by an owl trying to hunt it’s chick, and she was never seen again. Although Lightpaw was devastated, he made sure that he will always be cheerful, not to be down in spirits, because he knew that this would just keep him in his own walls of depression. He climbed these walls and found a way to pass his warrior’s assessment. He didn’t think much of his prophecy, since he didn’t know what it meant, until he went to visit his father in Twolegplace. He read his heart clearly, and saw his true intentions of getting rid of his annoying kits, and found out that Doeleap and died, not from disease, but from her own mate! He became furious and pounced on his father. He slashed open Creme’s neck, which killed him because of blood loss. He now knows that his power is very useful and truth-bearing, and he will use it for everything he can.
Credit to SilemtMelody
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by Queen of flames » Mon May 31, 2021 4:28 am
DaniCalifornia wrote:@Queen of flames well, you might not mind it, but i know quite a few people that could get bothered and even uncomfortable with it. it doesn't hurt to be considerate, does it? 
Asking, can you have your cat being crush on someone is fine, but that's sure is the first time to me that just having a crush on someone else character is that big matter...especially when it's so easy to ignore...or stay as one-sided...
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by SilentMelody » Mon May 31, 2021 6:18 am
@9livesliz Unfortunately, like the others pointed out I'll have to be a little picky with your form! Do you mind adding some drawbacks or weaknesses to the prophecy? It's a bit overpowered to be able to see the truth from everyone all the time. As for the history, you've almost got it correct! The cats actually receive their prophecy when they first become apprentices, not when they become warriors, so they have the chance to train and control their prophecy. I haven't figured out where a Twolegplace would fit into the territory, but I believe there are some other cats that had kittypet parents or used to be kittypets?
I think the one-sided crush on Silentpaw is okay and adds a bit of drama. Plus, it's already pretty much up to the other roleplayers as to how they want their romance to go considering it kinda involves Cedarsight, Mothmouth, and Silentpaw at the moment c: But of course, we can see what they have to say about it!
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by -cosmixtea » Tue Jun 01, 2021 3:05 am
SilentMelody wrote:@9livesliz Unfortunately, like the others pointed out I'll have to be a little picky with your form! Do you mind adding some drawbacks or weaknesses to the prophecy? It's a bit overpowered to be able to see the truth from everyone all the time. As for the history, you've almost got it correct! The cats actually receive their prophecy when they first become apprentices, not when they become warriors, so they have the chance to train and control their prophecy. I haven't figured out where a Twolegplace would fit into the territory, but I believe there are some other cats that had kittypet parents or used to be kittypets?
I think the one-sided crush on Silentpaw is okay and adds a bit of drama. Plus, it's already pretty much up to the other roleplayers as to how they want their romance to go considering it kinda involves Cedarsight, Mothmouth, and Silentpaw at the moment c: But of course, we can see what they have to say about it!
Alright, he can only see if a cat is lying to him when he particularly asks, and only with people he is very close with, like his best friends. Sorry for the inconvenience

And I am so exited for this role play! It seems really cool!
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