Entry for Kalon #1900 | Echoes Unheard

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Entry for Kalon #1900 | Echoes Unheard

Postby Zailune » Sun May 23, 2021 2:57 pm

Entry for Kalon #1900


    Introduction
Hello! Thank you for viewing my entry.
This submission is split into a few parts, as laid out in the Table of Contents.
Please refrain from posting on this thread - if you have any questions, comments or concerns, feel free to message me on here or on discord (Jarsei#8840). If you have any trouble with the play-through story, you can contact me about that as well!
Thanks for reading. ^^


Table of Contents

General Info
Kalon Info
Play-Through Story
Tricks and Secrets
Archive of Assets / Credits
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Echoes Unheard | General Info

Postby Zailune » Sun May 23, 2021 2:58 pm

    Section Summary:
    This section is for general information related to Kalon #1900 and my entry.

Main Adopt Thread: Kalon #1900
Username: Zailune + 103475
Thread post: Here
Competition Prompt: "What is this Kalon Searching For?" [unlimited impress]
Adopt Design Credits:
Cover: Illu
Sketch: kolyakun
Lines: kaatlove
Design: magpie!
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Echoes Unheard | Kalon Info

Postby Zailune » Sun May 23, 2021 2:58 pm

    Section Summary:
    This section is for general kalon and world development.

Kalon Name: Dani
Kalon Gender: Female - she/her
Orientation: Asexual
Personality:
Quick witted and sharp-tongued, Dani has always been one to speak her mind, but she also has a sort of aura that draws others in, and could often be described as a friendly and understanding kalon. Despite her blunt nature, her intentions are just about always good.

Daily life:
Dani was still getting used to small town life when the events of Echoes Unheard occurred. She had taken an opportunity to move to a more natural location since her job was open to allowing work at a distance from the main offices. The city wasn't exactly ideal for her, but the transition was still a bit difficult. Sometimes, it felt like she'd gone over into a different world.
Thankfully, Dani was able to develop some friendships in her new town, Meadow Brook. There were several hot-spots Dani loved to go to, and she met a few others through those excursions. The book store and public library were especially enjoyable places for her to go, as she loves to read.

AU Basics:
Dani's main story takes place on an alternate Earth, in a town called Meadow Brook. This Earth is, for the most part, a "normal" world, but expands into territories related to magic, supernatural occurrences and spiritual bridging.
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Echoes Unheard | Play-Through Story

Postby Zailune » Sun May 23, 2021 2:58 pm

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What is Echoes Unheard?
Echoes Unheard is a Play-Through Story made in the Tyranobuilder Application. This story reveals a heap of info about Dani and an experience she must overcome. She searches for an answer to a question she doesn't fully understand, and in the process, she learns a terrible truth about the world around her, and her own self.


Google Drive link: here
The file is a .rar and must be extracted to be usable

Some details to note:

NONs and NPC Figures:
The main story of Echoes Unheard involves some characters besides Dani.
NONs: A "NON" figure is a distorted, incomplete or otherwise broken visage of an NPC. They're seen throughout the story, but are treated as normal characters during interactions.
NPCs: Any NPC that is not a NON and makes an appearance is shown in grayscale, with a basic appearance. They act as props to move the story forward.

Other Notes:
    - There are three route options at a certain point in the story. You can choose any of the three, and get different bits of information from each route. All routes lead to the same end, however.
    - The story delves into some darker themes, but I kept it appropriate for CS of course.
    - There are some scenes that have multiple clickable areas, with only one selection moving the story forward, while other selections add commentary. The commentary isn't particularly relevant or important, but it can help give a better idea what kind of kalon Dani is.
    - Please see below sections for help and asset credits.
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Echoes Unheard | Tricks and Secrets

Postby Zailune » Sun May 23, 2021 2:59 pm

Click-through story functional notes:
- In some parts, you may need to click on the screen to continue to the next part. It's not always super obvious ^^'
- the story cycles through different types of interactive sections. There are some static image parts to read, animated text/image parts, game-like point-and-click functioning parts, etc. For the most part, it should be easy to get through~
- there's a "search and click" part where, to progress, you need to find the right thing to click on. There's a hint provided as to what you're looking for shortly before the part; "Find the guiding eye".
- if you have any trouble with the file, please let me know.

Click-through story details: [SPOILERS]
There are some details that might help make certain aspects of the story more understandable, but I suggest giving it a playthrough before reading this as this is definitely spoiler territory. I'll organize it as a Q&A.

Q: Why are most of the NPCs faceless/blank, and what are "Nons"?
A: I've lovingly nicknamed the blank NPCs "Non"s because of their particular role. They're meant to be lost figures; characters that lost their shape and physical identity as the main character (Dani) explores her world and follows a path put in place for her. In the beginning of the story, there's a static image titled "SitAndPonder.png" which basically says something along the lines of, "What if something abnormal in this world suddenly became normal?" This is meant to hint at the fact that Nons are not normal or natural (as anyone could easily see), but Dani doesn't notice this herself as she interacts with them. To her, they're complete as they are.

Q: Why are some scenes distorted?
A: As revealed in the end, Dani is manipulated throughout the story - made to complete different actions and led closer and closer to the end. The distortions are meant to be a side-affect of this, and meant to highlight the power that distorts fate.

Q: Why does the lab look the same during the flashback to decades before, when Dani finally gets to it?
A: The entity that entraps Foram Vencic makes a comment along the lines of, "no one will come in here unless I allow it" at one point in conversation with Foram. They also reveal that they have a unique sense of time and the cycle of rebirth. These both hint at the idea that the space is being preserved throughout time - kept the same until the day "Tasha" returns.

Q: Are "Tasha" and "Dani" the same kalon?
A: Short answer, no. Long answer, Dani has a similar personality to Tasha and a mark on her soul from her previous life as Tasha, but she lives a different life, has had different experiences and expresses different emotions... differently. When she sees the history she previously had with Foram as Tasha, she becomes aware that her soul was one from rebirth. However, she doesn't remember the entirety of Tasha's life, nor does she take on new characteristics - it's Foram's delusion that Dani wants anything to do with him, or that she retained any feelings toward him from her previous life.

Q: In the journal, some notes contradict one another. How can you tell Foram's real motive?
A: The journal is meant to show Foram's overwhelming, conflicting feelings about the man he worked for and the project Eternity. He flip flops between resentment and determination. Tasha's certainty and calm demeanor in the flashback sets him on track, and gives him new hope in Eternity... only to end with a failure yet again.

Q: What kind of creature is the blue stuffed animal supposed to be?
A: ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

Q: Why is there only one answer you can give to Foram at the end?
A: Throughout the story, Dani has less and less control over her situation. The entity's interference tore apart her memories of others, compelled her to act in ways unlike herself to find answers and eventually led her to a place she didn't even know existed previously. By the end, she's locked into the grip of said entity, and can't find the strength to respond with anything other than "yes"... and so, she becomes entrapped just like Foram...
...that's not to say that the story can only end there, however.

Q: There's a "To be continued...?" at the end. How exactly do things change for Dani at that point?
A: Despite a grim closing to the story, there's hope for the MC. As is revealed in the flashback, there are creatures who go to the beyond after death, and there are those who enter the cycle of rebirth. Dani is revealed to be a creature that follows the cycle of rebirth, with Tasha's life being a past life of Dani's. Her unique place in the world is something that may come into play, as a disappearance of a cycling vessel could cause a rift in the spiritual essence or base of the world. The story may continue, but it's currently unwritten.


Hidden stuff: [SPOILERS]
There are some "Easter-eggs" or otherwise hidden extra things / funnies.

1. In the internet route, the URL bar at the top of the web interface changes to say different things in distorted lettering. If you look closely, they are readable: "https : / / turnbackturnbackturnback . net / please", "I didn't do it", "It was a terrible mistake", "I will repent until the day I die"
2. Also in the internet route, there's a symbol for the browser company ("Ghostly Rat") that's just a small rat's face, but if you look at that symbol after reaching the end of the glitching articles, it turns into an eye.
3. In the "Meet [blank]" route, the picture on the wall has a hidden eye.
4. In the library route, there's a poster in the back of the scene with a kalon that made a book fort. It says "No book forts" and has a little arrow towards the mischievous kalon that says "don't do this"
5. There are 2 hallway scenes that auto-show / fade in the town hall. The second one has a portrait where the face of the character is blacked out.
6. The mysterious note that's in "Dani's handwriting" is actually my handwriting.... with a mouse / slowed pen speed. It's still hard to read. Sorry.
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