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by belloblossom » Tue Mar 23, 2021 3:39 pm
@Liam - I just thought I'd throw in my two cents here! ^^
You might want to elaborate on what you intend this evil character to have, since we're trying to focus back on the "corruption from the inside" plot of the RP. Having outsiders who are evil probably wouldn't be too ideal, whether they come in the form of Twoleg interference or rogue/loner cats.
I'm sure if you wanted to have a cat who was a supporter of Miragestar (much like my she-cat Softfeather) and asked DaniCA about it, you could have your intendedly evil character join in on some of that corruption.
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by LiamTheHedgehog » Wed Mar 24, 2021 12:25 am
belloblossom wrote:@Liam - I just thought I'd throw in my two cents here! ^^
You might want to elaborate on what you intend this evil character to have, since we're trying to focus back on the "corruption from the inside" plot of the RP. Having outsiders who are evil probably wouldn't be too ideal, whether they come in the form of Twoleg interference or rogue/loner cats.
I'm sure if you wanted to have a cat who was a supporter of Miragestar (much like my she-cat Softfeather) and asked DaniCA about it, you could have your intendedly evil character join in on some of that corruption.
Imma clarify that He wasn’t going to be a Outsider, He was just a regular warrior with a Prophecy power (And what I thought would be fitting for his appearance :D I just gotta see if this power is taken or not before I make the form). I’m also still trying to think of a second prefix that’s not a Canon name from the actual books (and there’s 2 canon names with ‘Hawk’ as first prefix right?) and wouldn’t that be Copyright if I used a Canon name?
Cause of his evil nature, i could make him side with Miragestar (if it’s alright with DaniCA tho). Tigerpaw would probably side with Acicapetal (if it’s alright with SilentMelody tho) in this Corruption.
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by SilentMelody » Wed Mar 24, 2021 6:16 am
@watermelon Amberleap and Blackthorn are accepted!
@LiamTheHedgehog Alrighty, here's what I have to say about your characters! I hope you understand that I'm not trying to be mean or picky, I'm just trying to be fair to everyone with how this roleplay works :')
I'll allow Tigerpaw's father to be a rogue who came from Destinyclan, but I can't allow him to have received his prophecy from a shooting star at 6 moons old :( The way prophecies are supposed to work is that the apprentices have their ceremonies during the day. Then at night, they wait to look into the sky to see if they receive a prophecy. Basically, the ceremony is very special and always has to be held! For example, if a kit was really sick and didn't become an apprentice until 7 moons they would have their ceremony then. In Tigerpaw's case, he would've been a rogue at 7 & half moons when he came into the clan to receive his apprentice ceremony.
About your "Hawk" cat, I'll have to think about him becoming a rogue! I agree that he can remain in the clan and cause some corruption by siding with Miragestar. As Dani said, he can be evil but he can't be all-knowing about her plans. However, I'd like to wait until there are more cats in the clan before allowing rogues/loners in the roleplay :) I also can't allow him to be a prophecy cat because Tigerpaw has a prophecy unless you make a third cat without a prophecy. I have a rule that says "players must have at least 1 cat without a prophecy if more than one cat is made".
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by belloblossom » Wed Mar 24, 2021 7:53 am
I'm with Animal65 and DaniCA on this one - rogues (evil or otherwise) or any outside conflict that would distract from the "corruption from the inside out" wouldn't be ideal. Since we're just setting the scene for the RP right now, I understand that it can be exciting to want to move things along at a faster pace - and I'm sure we will sooner than later. We just need to get through one IC day, to establish what a normal day in these cats lives are. The chaos of destroying the territory and whatever Dani chooses to do with Miragestar can come after the fact.
TLDR: Let's focus on the in-Clan drama and not allow any outside threats, at least for the time being. We already have enough plot ideas to fuel the RP forward, it's just a matter of time until we start incorporating them into the RP.
I hope this makes sense. I just woke up. ^^"
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by SilentMelody » Wed Mar 24, 2021 2:39 pm
I agree with you all that at the moment I don't particularly want rogues/loners in the roleplay! I don't know when (if ever) I'll allow them to be introduced to Destinyclan, but there's definitely enough internal conflict to keep the roleplay going. Everyone likes cats with powers right??
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by -Aeris » Thu Mar 25, 2021 1:09 am
@Queen
Sounds good! I already updated my characters' bios <3
@belloblossom
I'll just put this out there to add more drama (hopefully) to the story- but I think Aspenheart and Softfeather could be friends or someone that Aspenheart looks up to? I'm not sure which is more fitting/you prefer. I was thinking if Softfeather is a loyal to Miragestar- in the future when a 'war' does happen and Softfeather assumingly sides with the Leader, for friend's sake or as someone that she looks up to, Aspen would help-?
Just a rough plot that I thought of, though we can leave it to the rp to develop, etc. (:
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My children are still up for relationships/friends/family and such.
They're very open for adjustments and changes. (minor)
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Primesong-
Mate: Open
Crush: Open
Friends: Open
Family: (Kind of tentative with biological due to his backstory.)
Enemies: Open
Aspenheart-
Mate: Open
Crush: Open
Friends: Open
Family: Open
Enemies: Open
Acornpaw-
Mate: Open
Crush: Open
Friends: Open
Family: Open
Enemies: Open
Sootleaf-
Mate: Open
Crush: Open
Friends: Open
Family: Open
Enemies: Open
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by Animals65 » Thu Mar 25, 2021 4:33 am
LiamTheHedgehog wrote:@SilentMelody Aaaa alright I’ll make Tigerpaw get his prophecy when he joined the clan instead of outside the clan. I’m sorry that I didn’t understand it at first... I’ll go edit that now for you. Also his father has no prophecy and he was killed by a Coyote probably about a half moon or a little more ago, Vinerose is not playable thx for letting him be a rouge. Also, is alright if he was found at night or should it be the Afternoon when Tigerpaw was found?
I can make another Warrior without a prophecy at the same time I make the one for ‘Hawk’ :3 now onwards to make on how they would look! *yeets self to find a base to make them*
Also I thought of a second prefix for Hawk. He’ll now be called Hawkshadow (if Shadow isn’t taken for prefixes. If Shadow is taken, I’ll try and think of something else). If you want to roll with no Rouges/Loners right now, that’s fine! Hawkshadow can stay in the clan! And I can agree that he wouldn’t know everything about Miragestar’s plans (and honestly I don’t even know what they are lol)
"Shadow" would be considered a suffix, not a prefix in regards to Hawkshadow's name. You're using "Hawk" as a prefix. Repeating suffixes are indeed allowed as far as I am aware of!
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