Signature Criticism! [v.1]

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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby dimoo » Mon May 11, 2020 4:28 pm

OK it's adorable?? I love the image, definitely a great one considering the hard times everyone's going through. It definitely gives off a happy, friendly vibe! Also hey there fellow Midzy :)

The pink color of the font is a teeny bit hard on my eyes but I also have a multitude of eye-related problems, so it may just be me haha. I also think that the text is a bit dense (as in there's a lot of it) so it may be hard to find info if someone's looking for somethign specific. Maybe breaking it up into chunks (background info, art, trade info, etc. from what I saw) may help. But I honestly love it how it is right now!
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby glitter » Wed May 13, 2020 11:22 am

i like the formatting of your signature! the colors are really soft and go well together. i like how the two photos continue your quote - very creative! the microphone png looks nice where you put it and its obvious you've put a lot of thought/time into this.

honestly there's nothing bad i can really say. i've seen your sig around for a while now and every time i just think its pretty.
if anything i'ld bring the lines/image on the far right to the left so that the text would be more in centre/balanced but thats just my taste.
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby bark » Wed May 13, 2020 11:24 am

Very well done! You did a great job formatting your sig and adding extras in it to fit in the little box. It's simple yet clean. Great work!


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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby glitter » Wed May 13, 2020 11:27 am

your layout is really nice. it is very creative. good job
my one complaint would be that there's a lot going on and is a bit overwhelming

((can someone give me actual constructive criticism please? thankyou))
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby Pleuriglosse » Wed May 13, 2020 11:32 am

I think that you could use another color for the text that would better match your signature. I also thought that the beehive didn't quite fit. Otherwise, it's a wonderful signature!
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby Aseria Greane » Thu May 14, 2020 3:19 pm

Your sig is balanced between type and images, although the text doesn't hold as much weight as the images do. This could be due to the length of centered text in a line, or the color. Your color palette is very nice with the red and the related candle and right side text, it looks really nice! The text on the left side might need to be adjusted to be a bit higher, if you want everything to be lined up, as your shop link sticks out from everything else. Love the theme btw
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby HyperfixationStation » Wed Jun 03, 2020 7:42 am

I think it's really good, and it definitely looks best aligned to the left, but I think the pictures look slightly out-of-place with one another. Perhaps you could change where the pictures and text goes, because to em it feels slightly off-center, sort of. Other than that, I think it's really good, great job.
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby Osleya » Wed Jun 03, 2020 7:52 am

I like the images and I think the aesthetic you are going for is really cool. I also like how you tell us a little about yourself in it without having an overwhelming amount of text. However, the bright clickables and little apples kind of mess up the aesthetic. I also am not a huge fan of the way some of the text goes past the edges of the pictures. Like I said I do like the overall vibe you are going for though.
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby burnstile » Wed Jun 03, 2020 7:55 am

    i do like how simple it is, the boxes for the most part are aligned but the second one is just slightly broken and maybe its just me but the boxes are not the same size and it irks me. i do like how the picture changes each reload, gives it a sprinkle of uniqueness and i like waiting to see what the next pic will be
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby devorak » Wed Jun 03, 2020 11:34 pm

okay first off: NICO. i love you. okay for actual criticism I actually really love your signature, the only thing that bothers me is the "girlfriend" part where the underline starts at the i instead of the g, but besides that i really love it!
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