C a s wrote:@ lapis, while your character forms are fine (and stormy is right, I'd prefer not to have repeated suffixes if you're fine with that, though I won't FORCE you to change it) but I would prefer you make the kits a mother. Alternatively, you could maybe swap your characters, so that the kits were in OakClan as Creamflower is always in the nursery to take care of stray kits. I know EagleClan warriors are closed, but I'd allow it if you wanted to swap them. Or you could keep them all in EagleClan, up to you!
feel free to draw my characters if you want, your art is good!OakClan
⇾ Beestar ✟ 41 moons ✟ Apprentice: ✟ ♀ ✟ Mate: Streamstar ✟ Condition: Declining ✟ Tags: Robinwind✟ Lives: ★★★★★★★★★
B e e s t a r ' s ears flattened entirely to her head. "Were they jackdaws?" she asked the medicine cat, almost urgently. "Robinwind, I've been dreaming of black birds as well. They attack me, and my kits, as if they're already born. Streamstar always saves me and looks as if he's about to say something...but I always wake up before he does."
⇾ Dappleleaf ☮ 18 moons ☮ Apprentice: ☮ ♀ ☮ Mate: N/A; Crush: Weaselstripe ☮ Condition: Healthy ☮ Tags: Weaselstripe, Riverstripe, Fallenstone
D a p p l e l e a f nodded, glancing back the way she'd come. They're smart, they'll head back. She turned back to her hunting partner. "Let's go," she mewed, padding off into the undergrowth. She didn't bother checking behind her - Riverstripe would likely split away to hunt anyway.
⇾ Jackdawpaw ☠ 7 moons ☠ Mentor: Tigerblaze ☠ ♂ ☠ Mate: N/A ☠ Condition: Healthy ☠ Tags: Ivypaw
J a c k d a w p a w dropped the herbs on the ground so he can speak before prodding the pile with his paw. "I just didn't know what to do with these," he mewed. "I'll be happy to help you store them, if you'll show me how."EagleClan
⇾ Swiftbadger ☄ 37 moons ☄ Apprentice: ☄ ♂ ☄ Mate: N/A ☄ Condition: Healthy ☄ Tags: Goldenrose, Darkpaw, Littleflower, Frostbriar, Cloverpaw
S w i f t b a d g e r settled down further to wait for the rest of the patrol, tucking his paws underneath him. "It did," he mewed. "I would like to go, I think, if only to brag about the catch the OakClan patrol saw me make. What about you, Littleflower?"
⇾ Acornspots 🌪 37 moons 🌪 Apprentice: 🌪 ♀ 🌪 Mate: N/A 🌪 Condition: Healthy 🌪 Tags: Streamspot, Stagpaw, Russetswirl
A c o r n s p o t s paused to mark the her scent on the boundary. She padded back to Russetswirl's side. "Well, I think you could do it. And like I said: I will absolutely help you train!"
⇾Quiverpaw ◎ 10 moons ◎ Mentor: Mistflower ◎ ♂ ◎ Mate: N/A ◎ Condition: Healthy ◎ Tags:
Q u i v e r p a w padded back into camp. She placed her prey in the pile, albeit still struggling with it all. Shaking out her pelt, she glanced up to the sky. Maybe I'll get to go to the Gathering! She took a smile mouse from the pile, pleased to be able to eat now that she'd hunted. She settled down near the apprentices' den, taking a large bite from the prey.
⇾Deertail ϟ 38 moons ϟ Apprentice: Darkpaw ϟ ♂ ϟ Mate: Tickfang; Crush: Foxcloud ϟ Condition: Healthy ϟ Tags: Mistflower, Foxcloud
"T h a n k you, Mistflower," Deertail nuzzled her shoulder affectionately. With that, he bounded across the clearing towards Foxcloud, his head held high. "I need to talk to you," he announced.Outside
⇾Honey ♪ 52 moons ♪ Kittypet ♪ ♀ ♪ Mate: Rockleap ♪ Condition: Healthy ♪ Tags:
-doing her thing-

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Cloverpaw grinned, ecstatic. She followed Darkpaw, making sure to keep her paws light as to not startle the prey, as they walked she sniffed the air, not picking out any fresh scents. She could smell a squirrel, but the sent didn’t seem fresh at all. “Are you excited?” She asked, grinning.
Frostbriar looked at the she-cat. “Alright, where do you want to head?” He didn’t like leaving his sister alone, but he knew that he wouldn’t be able to protect her forever, so instead he put his focus back onto the she-cat
Goldenrose
She looked at the warrior. "Well we're supposed to hunt in pairs but I figure if we stray a few foxlengths away we'll be better off catching squirrels," she replied. She sensed his unease. "Are you ok?"
Daydream
He looked at Nightwish. "I wish I could say it worked like that. Even if I go they will keep repeating the words or use something to symbol the same thing. Just like if you question their laws," he replied.

Streamspot's nose wrinkled as Southstar bounded up. "You stink of mushrooms." she meowed almost disgusted. She wanted to ask all about what had happened. Did she put up a fight? Did she ask about her? Did she even care at all? Instead she held all her questions to herself showing no outward hint that she cared what had happened to the kitty-pet at all. "We did. Stagpaw did well. You can ask Acornspots and Russetswirl too and I'm sure they would agree." She looked back at her apprentice as she spoke. "I would say so." She meowed just waiting on the okay of their leader. They still needed to decide who would stay behind to guard camp as the gathering was quickly approaching.
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Bearpaw nodded her muscles were tight from their exercise and her tummy grumbled. "Does that mean I get to go?!" she asked excitedly bounding alongside him.
Even without looking directly at her, Darkpaw could sense Cloverpaw's excitement--and it annoyed him. "Excited?" he echoed, giving her an odd look. "About what, hunting? We hunt every day. It's just our duty, not a game." He sighed, apparently having lost interest in hunting already, but still keeping his senses alert for any signs of prey. He didn't want to come back empty-pawed, after all.



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