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What's your favorite type of comic?

Fantasy / sy-fi
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Superhero
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3%
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Animal-theme
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Horror / monster
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Comedy
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Romance
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CS pet based
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3%
Colorless
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Re: // chicken smoothie's comic club // ver three - new -

Postby LOCW_Bluestarwarrior » Fri Jan 17, 2020 3:47 pm

@PaintLily
I actually do remember you! :D I'm so glad you liked my comic! It'll be moving to tumblr but I'll drop a link when I do begin it again!

@Siberian
Me neither, though they were always informal mini-comics XD I've never stopped LOVING webcomics, though! And yeah I've moved base primarily to tumblr and FireAlpaca for my art program haha! I too want to do more with my stories and art than CS really provided and allowed so I headed over there. Although I've never forgotten this place (and, honestly, I STILL tell my friends about Colors when they ask about how I got into webcomics. Dude, that story was so influential to me!)

Still, it would be AMAZING to have a nice little 'home base' here to chat about comics, even if we no longer host them here :)
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Re: // chicken smoothie's comic club // ver three - new -

Postby coelagirl » Fri Jan 17, 2020 4:11 pm

@Creatornottraitor Oh I have some things to say. Obviously everyone will do this differently but here's my way!

Short version: I think about the arc of the page (is there a joke? a piece of information being imparted? a sweet fight scene? do two characters smooooch?) and decide how to use a few panels to setup and make the punchline, whatever it be land at the end. Think about how your gaze moves across a page- it is drawn by speech bubbles , as well as unusual colour and bursts of action. Then I do it again. and again.

Long version: Things that I want the audience to pay more attention to will be given larger panels, or they will break the bounds of the panels. I usually won't use more than like 5 or 6 panels (on a cs sized canvas, my max is or 9 on an 8.5 x 11) else things will get too crowded- less is more, especially if the comic is text heavy. Since we're all speaking English, I'm guessing your comic will be read left to right- so start in the upper right and go across, then down, just like a book. Beyond that just play with it. Erase and retry. Different panel shapes can add motion- like slanted panels will move a viewer's eye. Don't always show just character's faces (a problem I have lol), show objects and location to establish where they are and what they're doing. I also like to repeat panels with no changes small changes in expression or dialogue to add tension or help with comedic timing but that's much easier when you're using a digital program.

Specific version: Honestly I think it would be best to explain my process with an example. Recently i did a little 4 panel fanart comic for a show I like here (Note: blood from a superficial head wound and spoilers for Star Wars Rebels). So the arc of this page is the kid, Ezra, discovering the blue guy, Thrawn, is alive. I started on the upper left with the setup- Ezra wakes up. Then, since I wanted to have a big reveal in the center, I decided to put the next panel below it. Ezra's wrist light helps draw the viewer's eye down there. Then the next panel, Thrawn is alive? whaaat?! For impact, to underline the dark and smoky atmosphere, and because honestly the main reason i draw this was to show that i had a head cannon that this character has reflective eyes, I decided to dump the panel outlines altogether and just make the whole canvas the panel. The last panel is Ezra's reaction which i guess was not strictly necessary but it completes the arc. His shout also breaks the panel boundary to emphasize how loud it is

I hope that helps? Lmk if it was totally confusing and i'll try to clarify lol
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Re: // chicken smoothie's comic club // ver three - new -

Postby Syla Delaney » Sun Jan 19, 2020 3:04 pm

Jeeze there have been a lot of posts again in a hurry!

@creatornottraitor: Oh wow! It's been a very long time since we've had a new face around here. Welcome to the club!

@Siberian. I'm in a similar boat honestly. I've had a lot of success using other art programs, and have tried my hand at traditional inking as well with pretty good success. And tbh, where I am in life now, I don't think I could really pull off making something that would suit cs anymore. 8/

I've been kind of hype revisiting my old concepts and characters through a new lens though.
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Postby leaflord » Sun Jan 19, 2020 3:30 pm

Syla Delaney wrote:Jeeze there have been a lot of posts again in a hurry!

@creatornottraitor: Oh wow! It's been a very long time since we've had a new face around here. Welcome to the club!

@Siberian. I'm in a similar boat honestly. I've had a lot of success using other art programs, and have tried my hand at traditional inking as well with pretty good success. And tbh, where I am in life now, I don't think I could really pull off making something that would suit cs anymore. 8/

I've been kind of hype revisiting my old concepts and characters through a new lens though.


Any updates on the possible ET reboot? New developments?
For anyone interested in reading my own reboot, I'll soon be ready to start posting it and I hope to have a cover out soon - possibly sometime next week, depending on how things go.

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Re: // chicken smoothie's comic club // ver three - new -

Postby Syla Delaney » Mon Jan 20, 2020 7:11 am

@Lordsorghum:
That's exciting! Do let us know when you do!

And as for updates, I've basically got the first ~3 chapters planned, and I've been in the process of sketching out the first chapter, after which I'll go through to line and color. Once the first chapter is done, I'll start posting it on webtoons. I'm trying to do it in such a way that new readers don't have to read the original stuff, but that it'll still be new stuff for you classic fans.
I hope it doesn't disappoint hahaha
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Re: // chicken smoothie's comic club // ver three - new -

Postby leaflord » Wed Jan 29, 2020 4:13 pm

Breaking news for all comic lovers: the cover for my new comic is up if y'all wanna go see!
Pages will be coming shortly :) the storyboard is like 90% done so I hope to start posting them maybe in the next few days.

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Re: // chicken smoothie's comic club // ver three - new -

Postby Soulsplosion » Wed Jan 29, 2020 5:05 pm

Syla Delaney wrote:@Lordsorghum:
That's exciting! Do let us know when you do!

And as for updates, I've basically got the first ~3 chapters planned, and I've been in the process of sketching out the first chapter, after which I'll go through to line and color. Once the first chapter is done, I'll start posting it on webtoons. I'm trying to do it in such a way that new readers don't have to read the original stuff, but that it'll still be new stuff for you classic fans.
I hope it doesn't disappoint hahaha


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Re: // chicken smoothie's comic club // ver three - new -

Postby leaflord » Thu Jan 30, 2020 2:56 pm

work on page 1 of my comic has begun!
What do you guys think about making some new banners for this club to attract some attention? Thoughts?

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Re: // chicken smoothie's comic club // ver three - new -

Postby GaySunLord » Thu Jan 30, 2020 2:58 pm

@LORDSORGHUM Yeah, I think that would be a good idea!


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Re: // chicken smoothie's comic club // ver three - new -

Postby Syla Delaney » Fri Jan 31, 2020 9:30 am

LORDSORGHUM wrote:work on page 1 of my comic has begun!
What do you guys think about making some new banners for this club to attract some attention? Thoughts?


Oooh! I think that's a great idea! And I'm really hyped to see it. :D
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