Rate The Character Above You V.7 (New rule Pg 224)

[Gristle]

5/10
I've only seen a small handful of episodes of the show she is based on, maybe would make sense in her backstory but seems a bit of an unusual choice for her to live with a preexisting family unit without seeming to have any relationship to them, up to you what you do with your own ocs though of course, I respect that. As a personal preference I'm usually a bit pickier with human ocs (boring furry here, im sorry), child characters as well I rarely find as interesting admittedly, most of the time. I enjoy her colour scheme though, with the pink clothes and brown hair, but overall she just isn't really to my tastes personally

Rate Toadmire p they are a pony fursona..ponysona of sorts based on mlp. they have a reference more true to the show's style here

all is by me
In short they are a socially inept recluse residing in an old caravan parked within farmland alongside a small menagerie of animals they keep. They stand tall as to make up for their entirely unimpressive height, and wear a rather blank expression suggesting a perpetual absence, and have a habit of unconscious fidgeting, and the twitching of extremities. they often have in their mind becoming something of an excellent magician ( due to the insecurity of the fragility of their pony-shaped vessel, often failing where the need of practice begins and possess only fairly average abilities for a unicorn

[Koby]

8/10 I'd say. His personality you described really fits his personality! I like how creepy and bony he looks. His greenish grey color really fits him too! Maybe you could change his mane or tail color to be slightly less saturated? I cant find any nitpicks I really have with this character to be honest. The plaid jacket looks pretty good on him, it looks really nice with the other colors. I can definitely tell this guy is a recluse and I think thats good. Overall i'd say this a pretty good character.



Heres my new oc, Kalu! Hes lives in a forest by himself and is a pretty clever and sneaky guy. This makes him a pretty skilled hunter. Other than that I dont have much on him, since I just made him.

[friday]

7/10
I like his concept a lot! I don't think I've seen a snake/human hybrid quite like this, which is neat. His spear also has an interesting design which I like.

The only thing I really dislike is the colors. While the scales are a nice blue, they clash with his skin. Maybe divide the blue color and the skin with overlapping scales? I also think he could use some more markings, the ones he has stop abruptly. Some more of that yellow in his design would be neat, too.

It's up to you though, you don't have to take my advice! He's a neat character as is

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Ana?
design was a collab between me and humongousfungus. the art is by her. the species is created/owned by witherlings on deviantart

Ana is an esk, a ghostly nature spirit. Her soul is tied to the Great Lakes, and while she can leave for some time, she usually doesn't choose to. All esk have telepathic abilities, but Ana is usually silent. She tends to make an effort to drive humans and other esk out of her boundary, and even manifested an enchantment (the wisps) to scare them off. She doesn't mind animals.

The left picture shows what her enchantment looks like when active. When it's turned off, it's just a single wisp. The plants in her mane are flowering rush and frogbit. I might give her an accessory or something, but I probably won't add any markings. She's supposed to be simple so I can draw her in backgrounds and scenes more easily.

edited because the image broke

[Cruxich]

6/10 While I really like the concept behind her, the main thing I'm not a big fan of is how she's black and white. The white contrasts too much with her more darker body, and it's really distracting. Since she's a nature spirit, it would probably make more sense to give her natural colors or close to it. Like, the white could be changed to a dark, kind of swampy green. Or since she's tied to a source of water, a mixture of black, blue, green, etc. colors.
I like the shape of her eye though, and the wisps around her. The plant on her is nice as well, but there's nothing much else I personally like about her, I apologize. If you like her though, that's all that matters!

Gar? By TheOfficialKiwi

info about her found here

[grizol]

10/10
i love her?? her design is so cute and the green and browns work together really well!! and personally i really really love space characters and her being an outerspace explorer is really cool. she’s got a lot of potential and i would definitely read/watch/listen to a story with her being the main character.

rocky? deep down he's really nice and sweet, but he tries to look tough and says his scars that are from fights and stuff, but really they're mostly from bewildered cats and running face first into bushes while he's wolfed out. he's pretty useless when he's fully wolfed out because his eyesight is horrible and contacts don't really work well with his wolf form.

(all by me)

[Requiem;]

6 | 10
Ah, I'm afraid this character isn't totally my cup of tea. I do like the info you included about him, and I like that he has two different forms, which is pretty neat! Starting with the positives, I do like his palette, I think natural browns work pretty well together. I think its interested how you translate his scares between forms, and pretty neat on his human one. I also really like the tail shape. My biggest problem with this character though is they seem pretty basic. There's not too much that makes him stand out? Even as a werewolf both forms just don't pop out. I think that this could be improved by either incorporating some more unique features to his markings/human form, or possibly incorporate some sort of accessories. Another way to do this without changing anything is to give him a more interesting/unique silhouette / body shape. Another thing is the red on his wolf form is a bit odd? I'm not sure what it is there for. However, he is a good base, and your character at the end of the day, so take my critique with a grain of salt! I think he's a neat concept overall ^^

Theo?
Her page - all her info and more images is here



art and redesign by vampflore, original design by twi on TH

[Pipsquawk]

7/10
honestly the design is very pleasing to the eye. I like the nice colors and the patterns but quite frankly it seems very basic. The species is very difficult to distinguish from any generic animal. I read up on her a little bit and I found that she was a cat which, like I said is very hard to see at first glance. The tattoos on the side seem a bit random and out of place on the design. Personally I don't like overall physique of the character but I like how the colors and patters flow together.

Atlas? He is a very old character with no 'species' just something I drew up ages ago and liked, im wanting to revamp him though

[Tricksters]

6/10
for only a dual toned character I really love his color pallet.
However I do feel that a mixing shade could be introduced in a new set of markings, as his pelt is pretty bare, something along his back or sides I feel would better tie his markings together. His species, whatever he may be, seems really interesting to me and I adore his fluffy tail and neck. I am a little confused about his ears though, are they meant to bat-ish? Plated, or ridged? Maybe an exploration into that would be cool.
I can't give my opinion really on his character since none was provided but going off the personality expressed through the art he seems like a neat little dude.


Prince?
art/design by me
He's a borderlands oc. Sorry. A COV fanatic with an attitude of reckless abandon, he and his cohort Cher are in charge of a vehicle derby. The derby is more or less simply a roadblock for vault hunters. He carries around a catapult, or "Tink-a-pult", in order to lauch any nearby allies at the VH's.
Once a promising pre-graduate for Tediore, he fell into the clutches of the Cult after his ship crash-landed on pandora, which caused him to lose his memory. Instead of taking care to actually get well functioning prosthetics for his now missing arm and leg, he replaced them both with jumbles of bone that barely suffice as being new limbs. His nun-chucks are made of bone, filled with an flammable alternative to gun powder, and are often set alight.
Overall he's a little bit of a pushy jerk, with a one track mind set on destruction. He blindly follows ideals he doesn't quite understand, and is currently pushed past the point of redemption.

feel free to go ham on him in your rating, just be honest

[SlimPaw]

10/10 Wow!! This character is amazingly built and unique! The color palette and the energy they give off suit them perfectly. The longer I look at them the more things I notice and ultimately make him even better! I can see that he has a fire in his heart and a lion in his soul, it's very well portrayed by his pose and expression. The complexity of the design isn't overwhelming and nothing clashes together, making him an overall amazing character! I could definitely see him in some sort of storyline or a cartoon.

How about my boy victim?

He's a dream species that appeared in one of my semi-nightmares called and Aitkeni. Aitkeni would stand for the plural of the dark side of the moon. He is an alpha of a pack of Aitkeni, and ultimately the original thing that appeared in my semi-nightmare. He and his group live for the soul purpose of balancing out humanity. Acting like Venom, they take human counterparts to help maintain a physical form with fur and skin. Other times, they can still appear in their form but it's goopy and less sustainable. They prefer to hide in plain sight as grease stains or puddles until they find a suitable human or creature to infect. I will not further the storyline as it is currently being written and animated!

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[✧ strawberry ✧]

9/10
I really love his design! The colors go well together and it’s not too simple and not too complex. He doesn’t have any markings or colors that clash and overall,, it’s beautiful. He has a memorable design and if I saw him any where I could easily recognize him! I also think he has a really cool outfit and glasses. I find his personality interesting and intriguing. His looks match his personality,, but I would like to know why he’s acts that way


Maddie? Art by blake.rosey, design by me