Ytsen Readopt tryout

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Ytsen Readopt tryout

Postby nermal1999 » Mon Sep 16, 2019 2:15 pm

Image ꪀꪖꪑꫀ: Noel Image
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Noel is brave kalon who can stand on his own and will defend his family at any cost.
He has a sweet and caring personality and loves to goof off at times.

He is really passionate about the things he believes in and will stand by his friends until the very end.
Though he does have a side to him that like to be alone and keep to himself.
He'll never turn down an opportunity to hangout.

He's always looking for Adventures and will never give up even when things look tough.
Overall he's definitely a kalon worth knowing.



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Re: Ytsen Readopt tryout

Postby nermal1999 » Mon Sep 16, 2019 2:40 pm

—(••÷ Story prompt ÷••)—


—(••÷ For the longest time now, this kal has been running. From something? Somewhere? ÷••)—
—(••÷ Or perhaps they're running towards something instead? ÷••)—


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Intro

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For the past five years I've been on the run ever since prince Siegfried was Murdered and the blame was put on me.

The prince and I were rather close, in fact he was almost like a brother to me, always teaching me new things and treating me with kindness. Even if I wasn't a part of the kingdom he always made me feel like I belonged

And though I came from a tribe and he from a Palace he'd always tell me that he and I were the same,
just with different upbringings. And he would always make sure that I would always have a place to call home in the Palace.

And it was through him did I learn about modern technology, and machines, though we've never seen them Siegfried told me of all the wounds it could do from the books he's read, he also told me that certain places in the world chose to live with such things as technology and live a more traditionally life. That was the reason why no one in the Kōdai kingdom ever saw or new technology very well. That was why it was Siegfried's dream to one day leave Kōdai travel the world and learn more about the things he never knew of. And he hoped to one day see the wonders of technology with his own eyes.

He would often talk, and share about his dreams with me, and often it would make me feel sad to see him have something he was so passionate about and here I was just some tribal Kalon who spent my time hunting with no dreams or goals in life.... That was until Siegfried read to me many books of the world.
And each one seemed so fascinating that I too wished to see with my own eyes.

I had hoped that one day we could go to gather but fate had other plans....

I can't imagine why someone would want to kill him he was kind and patience, and very understanding,
he would have made a great king.. And to think not only did I lose my best friend
but I'm also being accused of his death....it's one thing to have the kingdom believe such lies, but it's a whole other level when my own tribe banishes me for such a crime..... I will never forget the look on my mothers face when it was announced that I was to be executed.

The only reason I'm alive is because one of my closest friends a Tribal hunter like myself was the only one who believed me. And it was because of him that I was able to escape and ever scene then I've been on the run as the prince on my head gets even greater with each passing year.

The thing that bothers me the most is after all these years the true killer is still out there living a life of luxury while I'm being chased down for their crime.

Siegfried was my best friend, and I can't let this go on any longer, he deserves better.
And seeing as everyone believes that I'm at fault, I'm on my own on this quest.

Its up to me to find the true killer and bring Justice to my friend's name.....
And after that I plan to finally live a life of peace and live the dream that Siegfried always wanted.
And that is to see the world and live freely...

So I will use this dream as wings to carry on even if I have to keep running for knowing I will bring justice.....and perhaps one day I'll return home to Kōdai where I'll find once again welcoming arms and I'll have many tails to tell of my journey.


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Re: Ytsen Readopt tryout

Postby nermal1999 » Mon Sep 16, 2019 4:48 pm

—(••÷ Story prompt ÷••)—

—(••÷ part 1 ÷••)—


18 years ago.
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A gentle breeze blew through the tall grass sending it swaying from side to side as a soft hush sound drifted through the leaves of the trees.

Huddled down in a thick brush I sat with my eyes locked on a rabbit sitting a few inches in front of me.

Taking a deep breath I sprung into the air only to land on my face, lifting my head up I watched as the rabbit scurried off and disappearing into the bushes. Letting out a disappointed sigh I pushed myself to my feet and began to bat at my hair sending small dirt clouds fly. Suddenly I hear a small laugh in the distance turning my head I saw a young male Kalon who was similar to my age standing a little ways from me.
His fur was soft and silky white, and his eyes were a sparkly blue.

bending down I gave a low growl as I looked at the male who was still chuckling as he looked at me.
"What are you laughing at!" I snapped trying to sound tough. The male Kalon suddenly dropped his ears and bowed his head with a gentle smile. "Oh I beg your pardon you'll have to forgive me, I just haven't seen anything so funny before in my life!'' The kalon let out another laugh before clearing his throat and sitting down.

Cautiously I approached him and began to slowly Circle him before sitting down as well.
"Well I don't think it was very funny" I muttered turning my face from the stranger who was still smiling.
"You're right you're right I'm sorry for laughing....
If you don't mind me asking, What were you doing to that rabbit anyway?"
"wasn't it obvious I was hunting it"

The kalon's eyes widened as he looked at me seeming shocked at my answer. "You were hunting it!? Why would you do that!" now I could only imagine that the look on my face matched his in confusion as I was surprised that he seemed so appalled at my answers. "Of course I was hunting That's my job! I don't help my tribe could starve!" the the kalons widened with even more confusion as he turned his head to the side. Suddenly he jumped to his feet with his tail wagging. "Oh! You must be talking about the tribe that lives north from here! see it was the.... The.... The Half Moon! That's it the Half Moon. So that's were you're from"

"how do you know of my tribe!" Standing up I let out a low growl. The fact that he knew if my tribe made me feel uneasy. Suddenly he stopped and took a few steps back before sitting back down and letting out another chuckle. "You're not very trusting are you? But I guess I don't blame you after all we did just meet and.... DIDN'T TELL YOU MY NAME! Where are my manners I'm prince Siegfried of the Kōdai kingdom I hope you can forgive me for my Rudeness''
"prince Siegfried? So you live in that big hut made of rock?.... WAIT! Stop changing the subject I want to know how you know of my tribe!" Siegfried let out a nervous sigh as he rubbed the back of his head before looking at me with a softened look. ''I don't mean to change the subject I'm just trying to be friendly, I'm sorry that it seemed that way....so to answer your question my father told me about you guys only he said that you were really mean and would hurt me if I were to cross paths with you guys. But you not at all like what my father says you are your actually quite funny" I was a bit taken at what he said.... Did everyone believe that my tribe was such a threat? Well, I guess I have no right to complain as my father said the same thing about the Kalons who live in the stone hut so perhaps he's not as bad of a guy as I thought.

Letting out a sigh, I glanced up at the sky before looking back at Siegfried who was still smiling even after all this time. "Ok... maybe your not as bas as I thought either..."
Immediately Siegfried jump to his feet with his tail wagging a mile a minute before skipping around in a little Circle. "Really!! You know I've never had a friend before would you like to be friends with me?'' I tilted my head to the side as I looked at this joyful Kalon who was still wagging his tail.... I had to admit, it did sound rather nice to have a friend and he did seem to be rather nice.

Slowly I reached my paw out to his and let out a small sigh "I guess we could be friends....." suddenly Siegfried took my paw in his and began to jump up and down with the biggest smile I've ever seen which in return made me want to smile.

Suddenly Siegfried stopped and turned towards me with a face of relaxation as he sat down "hay.... I just realized I don't even know your name'' I let out a small giggle as I sat down as well realizing that Siegfried was right, I was so on edge that I didn't even introduce myself taking a deep breath I ran my paw over my hair before looking back at him with a small smile.
''My names NoelStarFeatherTree. Son of chief Mountain Hut"

Siegfried began blinking his eyes in surprise as I spoke. Giving his head a quick shake he let out a small gasp as he pushed himself to his feet, "WOW! That's a really long name... I don’t think I could remember that... How about I just call you Noel"

I let out another short laugh as I looked at Siegfried before letting out a sigh "whatever if you want to call me Noel you can"
Siegfried gave an excited smile as he began to clap his paws together before looking at me with a nervous smile. "So Noel now that we're friends can I ask why you have those weird markings on your body?" "oh Those! Those are my marks to show that I've become of age" Siegfried began to nod his head before telling it to the side with a face of confusion. Letting out a small sigh followed by a chuckle I slowly stood up so that he could see the paint marks better before sitting back down. "You see in my tribe when a kit reaches a certain age they're given a ceremony where they receive there Tribal marking that they will have for the rest of there lives. It's basically a way to say you are an official member of the tribe. And at the end of the ceremony we're given our role That we were born to play in our tribe such as I'm a hunter so I help hunt for my tribe so that we can eat" "oh! Ok, that makes a lot more sense. Well we. Like your marking there really cool!" we both let out a giggle before we begin to talk more about where we came from and for the next few hours the two of us sat laughing and talking. Not even knowing how much time was passing we just sat, and talked and talked.

Pushing myself to my feet I gave Siegfried a small shove before taking off running with him close behind. It wasn't until we both heard a loud voice coming from the distance "Siegfried!! Prince Siegfried where are you!"

Stopping I lifted my ears and turned my head to see Siegfried with his ears low and a frown on his face.
Tilting my head to the side a watched as Siegfried slowly sat down and let out a deep sigh.
"Hay... are you ok? I mean who is that calling you?" Siegfried lifted his head with a disappointed look on his face before glance back over the hill. "That's.... father. YouYou see I'm not really supposed to leave the place so my father gets really mad when I leave on my own.'' ring my head I looked sadly up at Siegfried who was already getting to his feet with his head low "dose that mean you have to go?...." I watched as he slowly nodded his head and the voice of his father still calling his name.

Taking a step forward I slowly lifted my head trying to fight back some tears that were welling up in my eyes
"can... Can we see each other again?" Siegfried stopped and turned his head towards me giving a small shrug of his shoulders as he lowered his head again.
"Good by Noel..." "good-bye Siegfried" sadly I watched as Siegfried ran through the tall grass and up over the hill leaving me standing alone.


Over the passing days Siegfried escape the stone hut on more than one hen one action and we would often a meet up to spend the whole day together, usual chasing each other around, or splashing in the small river that ran through the forest. And through those passing days we became as close as two friends could be.
And we continued to be friends through the years to come.
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Re: Ytsen Readopt tryout

Postby nermal1999 » Mon Sep 16, 2019 5:26 pm

—(••÷ Story prompt ÷••)—

—(••÷ part 2 ÷••)—


9 years later.
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The sun was high in the sky. And there was a cool crispness in the air, as fall was rolling into season.
Slowly I crept through the tall grass cautiously approaching the stone wall of the place.
Glancing up a scanned the area before moving forward until I was face to face with the wall.

Reaching my arm up I gave a small knock on one of the bricks before dropping down with my ear against the cool surface. Within a few seconds I heard a gentle knock from the other side, followed by the sound of rocks crumbling. Backing up I watched as a few loose bricks were pulled away, making a small opening for me to crawl through.

Pressing my stomach flat on the ground, I slowly and gently pulled myself through until I found myself standing in a small garden full of flowers, and trees. Sitting down I gently brushed the dirt from my hair and fur as I watched a familiar figure slowly walk in front of me and give my hair a playful pat. "Are you trying to be a brown kalon Noel? Or do you just like being dirty" Siegfried said with joyful Chuckle.

Giving a playful glare I reached my paw out giving him a teasing shove before getting to my feet.
"Easy for you to say Siegfried. you get to bathe in a nice warm bath filled with soapy bubbles every morning and night, well I'm stuck having to bathe in a cold frozen, stream filled with dirt and mud." Siegfried let out a gentle laugh as he stood up and walked beside me, and the two of us headed to a small wooden door.

Quietly Siegfried and I walked up a small staircase until we reached a big open room that was filled with shelves and shelves of books. And There was even a giant window with a view of the forest from which I live.

Walking into the room I happy sat on the ground as Siegfried closed and locked the door.
For years Siegfried has been keeping our friendship a secret from the kingdom, as they would find it appalling to see a kalon such as myself hanging out with prince.... Plus Most people believe that my tribe and I were barbarians... Savages, so if they found out I was friends with their Prince they might suspect that I have an ulterior motive.

And for me I've had to keep Siegfried a secret from my tribe, as everyone believed that the royal family were something to fear, as they were stuck up and greedy, and had so much power with one flick of the rest....
But I guess my people have a right to hate the royal family... As the king had no care for us and would often treat us poorly... It wasn't long until everyone feared us, and some even believed that we would someday try to overcome the kingdom and take out the king.

There was so much distrust between our two families. So many threats that were spoken about one another. So we found it wise to keep this friendship a secret, at least for now until we had a better plan.

After Siegfried locked the door, I watched as he happily trotted over to a small cardboard box sitting on beside a small table on the floor. "Noel come over here and check these out! I just got them yesterday." jumping to my feet with excitement, I rushed over to see him pulling out a small stack of books one of which had a title in a whole different language.

Sitting side by side, the two took one book at a time slowly studying the pages.
The books in the room were mine Siegfried's escape. There was so much out there in the world that neither of us knew about. Music, festivals, ships planes. It was like a whole other world from which we lived.

And many times when we read these books we would often talk about our dreams. But honestly I got rather jealous of Siegfried when he would talk about his dreams, He already had a goal and plan in mind.
He would often tell me of how he planned to one day leave the kingdom and travel the world to See the thing that he read about. So that he could better understand them so that when he returns to the land of Kōdai he can become a better ruler than his father. He wants to be able to help people and teach them things about the world around them.
He wants to be able to push others to follow their dreams.

It was the way he talked about his dreams that made me jealous. He had something to follow... dream he wanted to come true. And me...... Well, I've never had a dream.

In my tribe we were raised to live for the tribe there was no need to leave and go on Adventures.
So all I knew was that I was going to be doing the same thing for the rest of my life.
But whenever Siegfried would read these books to me, the more I would fall in love with the thought of seeing the world.

And so through the years we would spend our time reading these books until we had them memorized by heart. And on slow days we would reminisce about the time when we were kids.
And we would spend our time outside playing games and telling stories.

It's hard to believe that we had only met 9 ago as it's felt like forever. We've been friends for a long time.
And I've enjoyed every minute of it.
And its through Siegfried that I've learned more about the world then my whole tribe put together.


I bet they would think I've gone mad if I were to tell them about some of the things I've learned about.
Such as headphones, and radios. Cars and motorcycles. It was insane how so much could be going on in the world yet no one in Kōdai had ever seen or heard about them.

And it was through the passing years that I began to change and I found myself no longer being the naive Tribal kalon I was.

I had become so much more, and it was all thanks to a little white kit who had escaped from his Palace and became fast friends with a small tribal kit. And the two have remained friends through the years and will continue to be friends for as long as time will last.
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Re: Ytsen Readopt tryout

Postby nermal1999 » Sat Sep 21, 2019 7:38 am

—(••÷ Story prompt ÷••)—

—(••÷ part 3 ÷••)—


4 years later.
5 years from present day.
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The season came just as quickly as they went. Spring fell into summer, summer fell into fall and fall fell into winter.

Time was passing just as it was coming, and lives were ending just as they were beginning.

Friendships were blossoming as they were growing.

And it was through the passing time that I had grown and was known just beginning my early stages into adulthood.
As the older we got the more Siegfried began his early training into becoming king, though there wasn't any more time for us to play and goof off like when we were kids, we were we able to still hangout and talk.

And for me that was enough, it was the fact that we've been able to be friends for 13-hole years that made me happy.


There were so many memories that we had made that meant a lot to me. And not once did we ever fight
We were like the perfect pair. Nothing could tear us apart.

Laying down on an old bed I watched as Siegfried began to recite a royal speech that he was to give in the next couple of days. He had been practicing it for days but couldn't quite get it right. But he was determined to make a good impression on his people, so I was ready to help him in any way I could.

"ugh I'm never going to get this right!" turning towards me Siegfried slowly Walked over and dropped to the ground with his back against the bed. "Why do speeches have to be so hard! Why can't I just go out there and just say what ever! It's not like anyone going to remember this right?" letting out a chuckle a pushed myself up from the bed and jumped down to the floor. "Oh come on stop being so hard on yourself. You just need to take a break and relax have some fun... You do remember fun don't you?" Siegfried shot me a playful glare as he pushed himself up and walked Over to me giving a gentle punch to my shoulder. "Of course I remember fun you jerk..... But perhaps you're right, I guess I could use a break..... Oh and I have just the idea" rushing past me Siegfried opened a small drawer from a dresser and pulled out a small book and handed it to me. "Here I got this for you and I a while back but had totally forgotten about it. It's a book on how to make paper crafts if you're interested we could have some fun with this?" turning the book open, I flipped through many pages about different things like how to make different origami animals, or how to make pretty wall art, and paper hats.

Finally I stopped on a page that showed different ways to make paper airplanes. Looking up at Siegfried I happily turned the book towards him and gave a joyful point to the page as I placed it on the ground
"hey lets do this one! Let's each choose a paper airplane to make and see who's can fly the farthest!" giving a nod of his head Siegfried got to his feet, and walked over to his desk, where he grabbed a stack of papers and made himself comfortable beside me.

Instantly we both went to work on our planes, both trying not to see what the other was doing until we were both done. Minutes passed by and we both had finally finished are planes. Looked up at one another with our paper airplanes in hand.

I had to admit Siegfried was way better at making paper crafts then I was. His way more detailed with way more wing flaps then mine. But I was determined to win this competition even with my poorly made aircraft.

Walking towards the window we both stood side by side with our planes placed gently in our hands. As a good gust of wind began to blow we both thrusted are planes through the air and stood watching as they glided across the sky. Seeming almost instantly my plane nosedived straight for the ground as Siegfried's continued to soar over the forest.

"WHAT!!!" leaning forward I looked sadly at my crushed, bent plane before turning towards Siegfried who seemed almost in tears as he stood laughing. It was the first time I had seen him so happy the look on his face was priceless. Reaching up I locked my arm around his neck and pulled him down giving his hair a small ruffle as I began to laugh as well. Together we watched as his small plane disappeared in the distance.

And we stayed laughing and talking until the sun had gone down over the trees and it was soon night.

"I wonder how far your plane went?" "I don't know but at least mine didn't fall like yours did!" SiegSiegfried said, beginning to laugh again as he gave me a teasing shove. "Well I'm going to find that plane tomorrow and bring it back. You Mark my words" Siegfried looked at me with his eyes widening as he walked toward the door and sat down with his head turned towards me. ''You really think you can find it?" I nodded my head with a proud smile as I walked toward him and we both made our way down the stairs and into the garden. "Of course I can find it. After all, I'm a hunter, I was basically born and raised to track things down" "well I look forward to it then" Siegfried grew a sweet smile as we approached the stone wall He looked down at a few of the loose bricks before turning towards me his smile seeming almost sad. "Do``Do you remember the time when you used to crawl through those loose bricks that I would pull away to get into the palace .... I really miss those days, when we had more time together.... Sometimes I wish I wasn't born a prince. So that we could both escape this place and see the world like we always dreamed" I suddenly felt sad as I looked at Siegfried The sound of his voice was so depressed sounding, it was so unlike him to be this sad.

Giving a gentle smile I gave him a small nudge with my shoulder before jumping up in a tree and looking down at him. "Hey don't worry about it. We're still the best of friends and will continue to be that way. So don't sweat it. Now then I'll be back tomorrow with the airplane" Siegfried looked at me with a Bitter Sweet smile before giving a nod of his head. "Right.... Oh, and Noel. Thanks.... For today I mean.... It was probably the best day I've had minus the day I met you... So thank you'' exchanging a soft smile I leaped over the fence and landed softly on the ground and made my way back towards the forest where I would begin my quest for the airplane early the next morning.


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I had woken up before the sun had even begun to rise and the sky was still a deep blue. Leaving the comforts of my Tribe
I began searching high and low for Siegfried's airplane. It wasn't until the sun had begun to rise and the forest was filled with light did a spot the familiar paper figure dangling from a tree.

Immediately I filled with excitement as I rushed towards the low-hanging branches and reached up and pulled it down.

Turning around I rushed through the forest as fast as I could And made my way to the palace wall.

Not really caring about being heard, I began to call out for Siegfried as I leaped up to the wall and slide down the side of the tree. Rushing towards the door I flew it open and began to run up the stairs, my heart pounding in my chest as I clutched the plane in my paws.

"Siegfried! Siegfried! You'll never guess what! I actually found it! I actually found your plane and your never guess were I!..... Found......." immediately tears begin to run down my face as I stood in the doorway. My whole body felt numb as I didn't even feel the plane slip through my paws and fall to the ground. Scattered across the room were several of Siegfried's books. And several of the shelves were knocked over some even crushing one another. And there was broken pieces of glass scattered on the ground from the shattered mirror.


In the corner of the room I saw the familiar white figure of Siegfried laying on the ground. And laying beside his body sat a small dagger with the red color of blood, Staind on the blade. My body felt like a nervous wreck as I felt myself shaking. Instantly I Rushed forward not even paying attention that I crushed the paper plane that set blow me.

Falling to my knees I scooped Siegfried in my arms only to feel that his whole body was limp and cold. I felt like I was gasping for air as I held him in my arms. My eyes darting up and down his body for a sign that he was ok but soon my vision began to blur with tears as I held him tightly in my arms.

Finally, my eyes rested on a deep puncture wound on his chest. Were it was clear that he had suffered from severe blood loss. Slowly placing my paw on the back of his head, I pulled him close with his head against my chest as tears began to run down my face even more so. And suddenly what felt like it was out of my control I let out a throat aching scream that carried through the palace and out into the forest. Suddenly my mind went into a panic as I felt myself hyperventilating, as I looked around the room and back at Siegfried as if trying to take in what had happened.

In my sheer panic I didn't hear the sound of foot steps raging up the stairs and into the room. It wasn't long until I was surrounded by guards. And instantly I was kicked in the head and thrown to the ground where I was restrained by two guards, and was held with a sword to my throat.

At this time I was trapped in my head as it felt like I was still screaming inside. I wasn't even fazed by the guards as it felt like time had frozen for me. All I could do was stare at my best friend begging for him to move. Praying for to be ok.


Suddenly I felt my body jolt forward as I tried to reach out towards Siegfried once again letting out heart-wrenching yell, I didn't care that the sword was starting to cut into my throat. I just wanted my friend to be ok.

Why wasn't he moving..... Why won't he get up.... Siegfried why?!

It was at that moment I heard deep foot steps as I watched the king walk into the room.
He didn't even take a moment to look at me as he fell to the ground and picked Siegfried up in his arms and began to weep. "You.... You did this, you filthy Savage! YOU KILLED MY SON AND NOW YOU WILL PAY!!!" standing up the king turned towards me with a look of pure rage... But that didn't matter to me all I could think about was Siegfried that I wasn't even aware that I was being accused of his death at that moment.

It wasn't until I was being pulled away that my mind began to become clear. Jolting forward I reached my paw out as I was being pulled further and further away and my eyes began to blur as more tears began to run down my face and I lost complete sight of Siegfried.

In the course of the next few days I was in prison in the Palace dungeon where I was starved with no food or water. Let alone company as my execution was being planned out. And it was in that time I truly felt dead inside. It had felt like years worth of memories suddenly faded away. Like everything I knew was gone....
What made it even harder was that there was to be a public announcement about what had happened.

And my entire tribe was to come.... And they would be told of the lie that kingdom was meant to believe.
That I had killed Prince Siegfried..... There is no greater pain than to lose someone that you care for. But it was a whole nother leave of pain when you're the one to be accused of their death.... But it was hard to prove this wrong. After all no one knew of mine and Siegfried's friendships so to find me in his room left everyone suspicious. Especially, when there no evidence to prove otherwise. So now I sit alone in this cold damp cell waiting for this pain to be over... It pains me to think that I'll be killed for this crime. Well, the true killer is out there living happily with their mission being accomplished... But what kills me the most was the last time I saw him I didn't say much... He seemed so sad why couldn't I have said more to him.... Why didn't I stay a bit longer..... Why did this happen..... closing my eyes I tried to clear my mind as it was pointless to carry on, after all I'm a dead man anyway.


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The days passed rather quickly and my public announcement went properly as bad as it could have gone
Leaving the deep cut in my heart even more painful.

Not only was I pulled into a metal cage for the whole kingdom to see. But a wave of boos roar from the crowd as they saw my face.
But The most painful thing of all that day was when my mother looked at me with tear stained eyes and together with the rest of my tribe turned there backs on me. And no matter how hard I tried no one was willing to listen to me.

In fact I had been banished and named an outsider by my own father. Even though I was to be killed receiving such disownment was something big in My Tribe, it was their way of saying that I was dead to them. And that my life will never matter.

They said I betrayed them, they said that because of me the king has even more of a reason to have them all Killed.
They looked at me as if I were some kind of murder and not just a murderer of Prince Siegfried but a murder of the whole tribe.

The only kalon who was willing to listen to me was River Thorn. A fellow hunter that I knew.
He would often come to visit me to listen to what I had to say, and I'm not going to lie it was rather hard to tell a whole history that dates back years ago in just a few days. But after enough time I managed to tell him everything.

I told him about how I met Siegfried. And about the things we did, the things we learned. The bond we shared.
As I sat on the cold floor of the cell, I slowly looked up at the sorrowful face of River Thorn who was looking at me with softened eyes "wow.... I had no idea..... I'm so sorry NoelStarFeatherTree.... I'm so sorry about everything..." I let out a chuckle as I looked back down at my paws before letting out a low sigh. ``It's felt like forever since I was called that.... I guess I got used to just being called Noel....." Pulling himself to his feet River Thorn pressed his head against the bars of the cell before looking back up at me with a frustrated sigh l. ``This is so unfair.... or you to die for something you didn't do... There's got to be something we can do" "No..... There's nothing that can be done.. please Just forget about me and take care of the Tribe...

Suddenly River Thorn smashed his paws against the bars as he looked at me with a face of rage. "NO!! I WON'T ALLOW IT! You've been the best kalon I've ever known in the whole tribe.....if you're innocent You can't die! So even if you have to run for the rest of your life, you have to escape please! There got to be a way!"

"River Thorn! You don't get it! What's the point in living if I would have to keep running! The whole kingdom thinks I killed the Price! Running away will only make me look even more guilty! So what's the point!" "then find the real killer! I know you can do it!! If what you said is true then the real person who killed the prince is still out there and you're the only one who know that. If you escape, you can find them clear your name and bring justice to your friend!

Your the best hunter I know so I know without a doubt you can do it, when you want something you'll track it down until you find it! That's who you are... So I know you can do it.... Please you have to"

I found myself frozen in place, not being able to speak or move, the words River Thorn said struck me....
It was true... The real killer was still out there....
And the very thought of them getting away with Siegfried's death burden me up inside . More than anything, would I like to bring justice to Siegfried, he was my best friend and after everything we've been through I owed it to him.... Though I know it won't measure up to the true price I owe him.....

At that moment something in me woken and I found myself filling with energy, determination... I was going to make things right.

That night me and River Thorn talked and talked until we had made a plan.

And it wasn't until late the next night did he return with some materials that I had requested. Now stretching back to the past I had recalled this one book that I read it was about different ways to make a lock pick.

Using the memory I had and the help of River thorn we were able to craft a small bone pick.

Consciously I watched as River Thorn stuck the pick into the lock and began to wiggle it around. And suddenly we both heard the relieving sound of the lock clicking open and slowly the cell door was pulled open.

Rushing forward, I pressed my head against River Thorn's before we both took off running until we were both able to escape the Palace and make our way deep into the woods.

Stopping I took a deep breath as I stopped and looked back at the dark shadowy silhouette of the kingdom. Turning back towards River Thorn I saw that he was breathing as heavily as I was as we both fought to catch our breathes.

"thank you my friend..... If it wasn't for you I would still be sitting in that cell grieving and feeling sorry for myself. And now thanks to you I've realized that I have a mission to accomplish before I can die.... But before that there's something I must do...... So please keep yourself safe. Once they discover that I've escape there be sure to suspect you as you've come to visit me quite often''

River Thorn slowly walked over to me with his eyes beginning to fill with tears as he pressed his head against my own. "Please be safe.... AAnd once this is all over, please come home"

Giving my head a quick nod I took off running back towards the Palace and hid against the stone wall. Slowly I walked toward the back of the wall and stared at the familiar bricks. Taking a deep breath I sprung up onto the wall and slid down the side of the tree until I came towards the old wooden door in the garden. Walking up the stairs I enter into the room where all my memories seemed to fade and I couldn't only see the nightmare of a sight that ruined my life. Letting out a deep breath, I wiped a small tear from my eye before walking into the room and made my waybtowards the old desk. Opening the drawer, I pulled out a small book and began to flip through the pages. Suddenly I stopped once my eyes rested on a small feather that was pressed against two pages.

I remembered when Siegfried showed me this feather, and how happy he was when he told me of how he found it.

He said it fell from the sky on the very day we first met,
He also told me of how he kept it as a reminder to use it as
A symbol of our friendship. And though it was just a feather it had become something Important to Siegfried.
And I'll never forget about how he would always use it as a bookmark because it made him happy to see it when ever he would open his book to read a chapter. He said it always reminded him of the day his life changed for the best.

Leaving something like this seemed almost impossible as I new it would mean nothing to the king.

Carefully picking the feather up I placed the book back into the drawer before slowly heading back outside. Jumping back up onto the wall I glanced back up at the tower with a sad smile on my face as a gentle night breeze blew past my face.
"Good bye my friend... I promise I will avenge you" jumping down and landing in the tall grass and I took off running with my eyes locked on the Horizon.

Looking back once last time, I said good bye to the place I once knew as my home. I said goodbye to my people, my friends, and my family.

And in that moment I began my new journey.
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Re: Ytsen Readopt tryout

Postby nermal1999 » Sat Sep 21, 2019 7:38 am

—(••÷ Story prompt ÷••)—

—(••÷ part 4 ÷••)—


Present-day
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I sat with my back against the cold damp wall of the cave staring at the glowing embers of the fire.

As the gentle sound of the wood began to crackle, I began to slowly fiddling with the small feather that dangled from my hair as my mind began to wonder.

My thoughts carried back to the day I first left home
After I had taken the feather of Siegfried's.
I remembered how I traveled down the old road to escape from anyone seeing me. And That's where I had found those old beads from some broken bracelet.

I don’t know why I decided to make that feather into a hairpiece but I did... I guess it made me feel like Siegfried was still here, like he was still Standing beside me.

It's funny, it seems like it all happened so long ago but in reality it's only been 5 years...
5 whole year's scene I've been on the run. dodging cops and royal guards, and it hasn't been easy but I've been able to manage.

I mean hunting has been easy but I can't say I've liked the idea of stealing supplies... but what can I say when it seems like everyone wants me dead I can't really go into town with a price on my head now can I.

But that's all going to change...
Through the years as I've been on the run I've been able to slowly gather information on the true killer.

And today I've received some information that's lead me down a certain trail... And after all these years I've finally figured out who killed Siegfried...

And after all this time I'll finally be able to clear my name.
And then I can finally let the pain that has been with me for so many years. The hatred that has been in my heart, the fear I've had for so long.

I can finally let it go. And have peace...

Lifting my head up I lowered my paw from the feather and closed my eyes Breathing in the cool comfort of the rain.

And with its soft relaxing sound I began to drift into the comforts of sleep as my mind rested on one last thought....

Finally I'll be able to live your dream Siegfried..... Finally I'll be able to see the world for us...


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END
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Re: Ytsen Readopt tryout

Postby nermal1999 » Sat Sep 21, 2019 7:38 am

—(••÷ Thanks ÷••)—


Thanks for reading!
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I appreciate the time that was taken to read my story through

I hope you enjoyed yourself!

Sorry for any misspellings and poor grammar
I tried to clean up as many mistakes as I could.

Thanks for the opportunity!


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Wanted post was from a free to use site
And the picture of the kalon was just a screen shot that was pasted on.
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Story world count (without the intro)
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Re: Ytsen Readopt tryout

Postby nermal1999 » Sat Sep 21, 2019 7:38 am

—(••÷ Quotes ÷••)—


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Forgive others,
not because they
Deserve forgiveness,
but because
you deserve peace.

(By: Jonathan Lockwood Huie)
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Peace.
It does not mean To be in a place
where there is no noise, trouble
or hard work.
It means to be in
the midst of those things and still
be calme in your heart.

(by: Unknown??)
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Re: Ytsen Readopt tryout

Postby nermal1999 » Sat Sep 21, 2019 7:49 am

—(••÷ Songs ÷••)—


Dear best friend. (by: Jetpack Jay)
I know this is definitely
but I just thought this whent well with my story
(sad warning)


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My story is about friendship so please pay no mind to the fact that next two songs are about love
There just a couple of songs I chose for the purpose of the prompt it has nothing to do with my story.




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