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by Lennie » Mon May 02, 2011 10:48 am
{All right, well I have a few story ideas. And I would love an opinion.
Which would any of you be interested in?}
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jack {m} ---------------------------------------------------- {f} sylvia
"And they're off ladies and gentleman!
Maxwell has taken the lead, but wait, Jack is coming up from behind,
He's leading the pack ladies and gentleman, and off he goes!"
Is it wrong to say that's the last thing he remembers?
I was going to tell him that I was in love with him that day.
But, maybe it just wasn't meant to be.
It doesn't make a difference now does it?
After all, he's in a coma. And he may never come out.
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flint {m} ------------------------------------------ {f} comet
"Hey Flint, wanna play hide-and-seek?"
The young girl asked softly, tilting her head slightly as she watched the handsome boy with a soft gaze.
"Well... You would win, after all, you can hide among the stars."
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pip {m} -------------------------------------------- {f} checkers
Strangers kissing in the pouring rain
Chasing after your leaving train
But we know that's not how our song goes
You're a waitress in a cocktail bar
And I'll save you cause I'm a big rock star
But we know that's not how our song goes
It goes like this...
"Good Morning sir, my name is Checkers, I'll be your waitress this fine morning."
The man appeared startled for a moment, and she found a faint smile etched upon her face.
"Are you ready to order sir?"
The man smirked slightly, glancing up at the young waitress from his menu.
"What would you recommend?" Smirking she glanced down at her notepad before glancing at him once more.
Maybe, just maybe, that song was wrong.
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by horchata » Mon May 02, 2011 10:50 am
Lennie wrote:{All right, well I have a few story ideas. And I would love an opinion.
Which would any of you be interested in?}
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jack {m} ---------------------------------------------------- {f} sylvia
"And they're off ladies and gentleman!
Maxwell has taken the lead, but wait, Jack is coming up from behind,
He's leading the pack ladies and gentleman, and off he goes!"
Is it wrong to say that's the last thing he remembers?
I was going to tell him that I was in love with him that day.
But, maybe it just wasn't meant to be.
It doesn't make a difference now does it?
After all, he's in a coma. And he may never come out.
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flint {m} ------------------------------------------ {f} comet
"Hey Flint, wanna play hide-and-seek?"
The young girl asked softly, tilting her head slightly as she watched the handsome boy with a soft gaze.
"Well... You would win, after all, you can hide among the stars."
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pip {m} -------------------------------------------- {f} checkers
Strangers kissing in the pouring rain
Chasing after your leaving train
But we know that's not how our song goes
You're a waitress in a cocktail bar
And I'll save you cause I'm a big rock star
But we know that's not how our song goes
It goes like this...
"Good Morning sir, my name is Checkers, I'll be your waitress this fine morning."
The man appeared startled for a moment, and she found a faint smile etched upon her face.
"Are you ready to order sir?"
The man smirked slightly, glancing up at the young waitress from his menu.
"What would you recommend?" Smirking she glanced down at her notepad before glancing at him once more.
Maybe, just maybe, that song was wrong.
I love all of them <3
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by moira » Mon May 02, 2011 10:50 am
Lennie wrote:
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flint {m} ------------------------------------------ {f} comet
"Hey Flint, wanna play hide-and-seek?"
The young girl asked softly, tilting her head slightly as she watched the handsome boy with a soft gaze.
"Well... You would win, after all, you can hide among the stars."
<333
Loooveee <33
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by micah » Mon May 02, 2011 10:57 am
Red October wrote:GigglePie wrote:

Atlas {{m}} --- Javan {{m}}
I really, really like this. :D
Is there any chance that it will have more parts? ~
Why, yes, there will be. <3 I've taken a fancy to it as well, so there's more to come~
@Nightlily: Heh heh, thank you deary <3
@Lennie: Call me a sucker for #3, all the way baby ;D
@Obscura: I've told you already, but mmmhmmmm, so excited.
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by Tesalong » Mon May 02, 2011 10:58 am
Lennie wrote:{All right, well I have a few story ideas. And I would love an opinion.
Which would any of you be interested in?}
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jack {m} ---------------------------------------------------- {f} sylvia
"And they're off ladies and gentleman!
Maxwell has taken the lead, but wait, Jack is coming up from behind,
He's leading the pack ladies and gentleman, and off he goes!"
Is it wrong to say that's the last thing he remembers?
I was going to tell him that I was in love with him that day.
But, maybe it just wasn't meant to be.
It doesn't make a difference now does it?
After all, he's in a coma. And he may never come out.
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flint {m} ------------------------------------------ {f} comet
"Hey Flint, wanna play hide-and-seek?"
The young girl asked softly, tilting her head slightly as she watched the handsome boy with a soft gaze.
"Well... You would win, after all, you can hide among the stars."
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pip {m} -------------------------------------------- {f} checkers
Strangers kissing in the pouring rain
Chasing after your leaving train
But we know that's not how our song goes
You're a waitress in a cocktail bar
And I'll save you cause I'm a big rock star
But we know that's not how our song goes
It goes like this...
"Good Morning sir, my name is Checkers, I'll be your waitress this fine morning."
The man appeared startled for a moment, and she found a faint smile etched upon her face.
"Are you ready to order sir?"
The man smirked slightly, glancing up at the young waitress from his menu.
"What would you recommend?" Smirking she glanced down at her notepad before glancing at him once more.
Maybe, just maybe, that song was wrong.
I like the bottom one the best :3
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by moira » Mon May 02, 2011 11:07 am
Would you look at her
She looks at me
She's got me thinking about her constantly
But she don't know how I feel
And as she carries on without a doubt
I wonder if she's figured out
I'm crazy for this girl
Yeah, I'm crazy for this girl
(That's my fail at a cute quote. ;A;)
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by baestille » Mon May 02, 2011 11:31 am
lemon & lime wrote:lemon & lime wrote:]
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The star ----- The sun
The sun, was diffent, she wasn't a blown up star that lived on earth like me.
I was cool
and she was hot
I was everything she didn't want,
and she was everything I could dream.
[\-Shall I write a story?-/]
Part one
The sun
Ceila glowed brightly, sitting between the clouds.
laid back and relaxed she watched the time go by
kids would come out of school, play and scream
man, she wished she could be that way.
Jumping up when she saw the moon, she raced across the sky slowly rising
in another place of so called 'earth'. Children would rise
and get ready for the day ahead, shall it rain or stay sunny.
I have no clue. I've always like the rain, so I could...you
know, go onto to earth to be with everyone, but I always returned.
Always.But this week was going to be different, rain till five o'clock and
Cloudy till mornin. I needed to see my best friend.
She slowly dissapered, letting to clouds and rain take over.
Falling fastly to the floor, she stood up straight
wearing her normal, lime green shirt,
black leggings and converse's. Pulling
her long blonde hair over he shoulder, she began to
his school.
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The star
He sat on the stairs, looking into the sky as the
droplets of rain hit him, hard.
What in the world is she doing here
he thought to himself. Standing up he pulled up his
hood, hands in his pockets, and began to walk down
the street, facing the ground. Walking
towards the forest he bumped into a girl.
it was Ceila, it was her.
She stared up at him. 'Luke!' she said embracing him
in a hug. 'Celia, what are doing down here?' He asked
glaring down at her. 'Im here fro you' she said
with a smile, 'I never thought i'd see you again' she said backing away.
Luke growled under his breath. 'Ceila, do you understand
how much trouble your in' he said looking down at his friend.
Celia looked at him, 'i came here, to see you
my best friend ever, and now you hate me. gee thanks for the warm up'
she said with a sigh, and her body shattered, dissolving
into the air.'Damn-it Ceila, thats not what i meant.'
he said quietly and pulled his hood over his head, again
and slowly walked home, the sun was coming out but it was softly raining.
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by faraday » Mon May 02, 2011 11:33 am
*Aiedail* wrote:
Max
Thorn
RATED PG-13 FOR BLOOD AND VIOLENCEMAX'S POV...
I was having one of those gut-wrenching moments where I wasn't quite sure if I was flying toward the floor or it was rising to slam into me. Either way, I knew that it would probably hurt. I collided with the floor and felt my fur grow warm and wet from the blood now gushing from my jaw. I closed my eyes and lay still, maybe my ugly pelt would blend into the floor or something and Thorn wouldn't notice me. Hey, it was worth a shot. Unfortunately, I missed that shot, and I felt claws digging into my neck and yanking me to my feet. A misleadingly pretty face stared into my eyes before dropping me again. I barked in shock as the air was crushed from my lungs again, and a minute later another paw grabbed my neck, but this one was larger and more gentle. This time, the face I met was the old, wrinkled face of our school principal, Ms. Barlow.
"Not again..." Ms. Barlow muttered, letting go of my neck and dropping me to my paws. I spit on my paw and wiped the blood away with it, though only seeming to move it to my paw and bounded off, arriving in class almost a minute after the bell had rung.
"Do you have a pass, Max Mullen?" my grumpy science teacher, Mr. Gulati grumbled, not even looking up from his papers. I hated it when he said my last name.
"N-No." I replied shakily
"No what?" He asked, finally looking at me
"No Mr. Gulati, sir!"
"That's more like it, Max Mullen! Sit. Now. Detention at 4."
I rushed to my seat, but the minute I sat down several terrified screams echoed through the room. I jumped to my paws with a start and looked behind me. Steven Gulzowski had leaped to the top of his lab table and several girls were cowering beneath theirs. Oh yeah, and Gulzowski had a gun.
Mr. Gulati totally panicked and slammed his paw onto a big red button on the wall. "HELP!" he yowled into the speaker, but a loud gunshot hit the wall next to him and he fainted. An earsplitting screech played from the speakers on the ceiling, a lockdown signal, but it didn't do us much good anyways.
Gulzowski kept rattling on about how miserable his life was, but it actually didn't seem all that bad to me. That was, until I heard a girl screaming in agony and Thorn landed next to the table I was hiding under, bloody and moaning. It was really creepy, there was a wet red hole in her chest and blood all over her body. In that one second, it seemed like time had stopped. All I could see was Thorn, and that was all that mattered. I slowly reached my paw up to the top of my table, grabbed someone's pencil box and hurled it across the room, where it broke apart and sent pencils and crayons flying everywhere. Just as I had planned, Gulzowski went nuts, shooting randomly at the wall, and I was able to grab Thorn's neck and make a dash for the door. I had to duck for two shots (Wow, you'd think he'd run out of bullets by then) but I managed to get the door open and I ran out as quickly as I could, dragging Thorn behind me.
Continue? Yes or no.
o_e Yes. Yes Please.
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