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by Roleplayer123 » Tue Apr 23, 2019 7:10 am
Critique upon my art?
I'd like to get somewhat better, and I think It'll help if others take a look and tell me what I may need to add or change!
Please go through my art but post here. Please do not be rude, or only be here to tell me off instead of giving me tips as well.
(this drawing is a terrible sketch lol)
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by Roleplayer123 » Tue Apr 23, 2019 7:13 am
mr.bump wrote:hmm... this is really good! i don't really know any tips except for maybe make the lineart a bit less messy
Ok, I will try to take more time designing the line-art! Thank you.
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by jetboymachine » Tue Apr 23, 2019 7:19 am
Roleplayer123 wrote:mr.bump wrote:hmm... this is really good! i don't really know any tips except for maybe make the lineart a bit less messy
Ok, I will try to take more time designing the line-art! Thank you.
your welcome! keep up the great work
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by kittie_paws_ » Tue Apr 23, 2019 7:20 am
i dont really draw feral animals but, studying some anatomy or looking at references of the animal you want to draw would greatly help. like the body looks a little squished around the neck area, and the back looks a little odd ? someone with more knowledge of drawing ferals would be good for helping in specifics though LOL. but anyway its very adorable and they look very soft and cute. but remember its always good to know the basic rules of anatomy before you break them! keep it up and youll get far !!
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by Roleplayer123 » Tue Apr 23, 2019 7:22 am
freyamoos wrote:i dont really draw feral animals but, studying some anatomy or looking at references of the animal you want to draw would greatly help. like the body looks a little squished around the neck area, and the back looks a little odd ? someone with more knowledge of drawing ferals would be good for helping in specifics though LOL. but anyway its very adorable and they look very soft and cute. but remember its always good to know the basic rules of anatomy before you break them! keep it up and youll get far !!
Thanks. I will try to focus more on the neck and back, and I'll look in my library books about anatomy.
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