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Re: Six Kalon Readoptions!

Postby Yuroshi » Wed Mar 27, 2019 12:51 pm

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Kalon Name: Tricks
Kalon Gender: genderqueer (any pronouns)
This Kalon came across a strange egg. What did they do?
The day started off like many others had, minus the location of course. I woke up to the familiar sounds of fighting, the screeching of both excitement and anger, and quickly rolled out of the corner of the alley I’d spent the night in. Normally, I’d spend my time in my “base” under the game shop, plotting the downfall of the technology company that was trying to control us all, and doing rather well honestly, and I didn’t really have any plans to do otherwise this time. I began to walk back to the base, hood up though I knew that with the work Wire had done, the databases wouldn’t be able to recognize my face. I may have pilfered a bit of cash- just bits of it, mind you, never more than a dollar a person- but that wasn’t really of any consequence, a person’s gotta eat. So really, nothing out of the ordinary, and I was prepared for another day as usual.
Except, fate decided today was a good day to prove me wrong.
I’ve seen a lot of strange things in my life, you know? Being on the wrong side of the law can do that to a person, even if they’re on the right side, morally. It goes even more so when you sorta, you know, serve as a spy sometimes. Cause if there’s one thing I’m good at, it’s getting around, and gathering information.
I raise birds to help me with it. No one bothers to try to scare off the crow or raven that lands on their windowsill- not many people know they can speak. People tend to underestimate them. They don’t realize how loyal and brilliant they are. Needless to say, I had a lot of time around my birds, and they knew to come to me with their “problems.” So when I saw one flying towards me, eyeing the areas around to make sure she wouldn’t be seen, I didn’t think anything out of the ordinary of it. But as she gently dropped her “package” into my hands, I got the surprise of my life- it wasn’t a message from base, or even just a shiny she’d picked up.
It was an egg.
And not one of any species I had ever seen before.
I didn’t know what to think of it at first, until I saw the number stamped on the shell- #0000.
My heart nearly froze in my chest as I felt a rage fly over me.
It seemed out favortie corporation had gotten into genetic engineering. On my birds.

I didn’t bother trying to be inconspicuous after that, I just ran back to the Haunt as fast as I could. It wasn’t like the Base, this was my place, an abandoned old building which my murder of crows and ravens stayed. But it also had one crucial thing in it, which undoubtedly saved the not so little egg- my incubator.

It wasn’t often I had to use it with how family oriented my birds were, but every once in a while, maybe during a winter laying, there was simple not enough warmth for the little things, and that’s why my incubator was constantly prepped. Making a simple, soft nest for the little one was easy with the things I had on hand, and judging from the way the egg looked when I shined a light against it, I knew it wouldn’t be long until the kid hatched- two days at most, it’d definitely been there for a long time already, longer than most birds ever stayed in the egg. I quickly whistled down for one of my fastest birds, a tiny little thing I liked to call Swift, and she dove down without hesitation. I figured out a quick note for her to take to Wire back at Base, and hoped he’d have the idea to send back my phone I’d forgotten. The message was a simple one, but I knew he’d understand.
“The baby been changed, she’s now settled in but I’ll have to wait until the parents are home. Please check their location for me, we have some talking to do.”
I knew Swift probably wouldn’t bother with all the words, but all Wire would have to hear was “Baby” and “Location,” and he’d know.

It was about two hours later when Swift came back- at first I was worried about how long it took her, but when I saw why, I understood. The poor girl was not only carrying my cell phone, but the back for the “Crawler,” a little car-like thing that was perfect for spying and signal disruption where my birds couldn’t reach. I pet Swift gently and rewarded her for a job well done, then brought her back to her nest to rest as I pondered over the coordinated Wire has sent me.
It wasn’t a place that specialized in genetic mods, in fact, I had no doubt that it was, more than anything, w one time experiment that some fool had left the window of the room open to. Perhaps if their little game had succeeded they would’ve started pushing for the reversal of the NO-GMA laws...
but still...
as I glanced at the little egg, covered in a few cracks where the little one was valiantly trying to escape, I knew I couldn’t let them get away with what they’d done, couldn’t let them have the chance to try something like this again.

With that thought, I felt a cold determination to wipe out the databanks of that facility settle into my soul. But for now... the little one would need my attention. I turned to watch the incubator, and settled onto the cot I kept in the Haunt, for times just like this. As I did, I felt the eldest female of my birds- an albino affectionately called Mama by both myself and the other birds- settle into my shoulder, also gazing into the incubator. Although long past laying age herself, having already lost her mate, she still never hesitated to take in orphaned eggs, and I knew this one wouldn’t be any different. With that comforting thought in my head, I settled back and somehow fell into a light sleep.

I don’t know quite how long I was asleep for, but I woke to Mama’s gentle calls of “Baby, baby, baby!” Knowing what she was talking about, I immediately scrambled from my bed and made my way over to the incubator, watching the darkly colored egg quiver and shake until
*pop*
The little bugger managed to put its entire head through the shell! I could barely hold still from excitement as the baby fought its way out of the confines of its egg. It was... well, way more developed than any newborn bird had a right to be! The size of the egg suggested some sort of eagle, for it was way too big for anything else, and it’s level of post-hatch development definitely supported that... but it definitely wasn’t just an eagle, I knew that. It had the beginnings of a proud crest on its hed, and the featherless patches of color-changing skin on its cheeks definitely meant it had some palm-cockatoo. It’s patterning, though, reminded me of a strangely colored palm cockatoo, whereas the tail-feathers distinctly resembled those of a peacock. Yet, the color of the little one was more similar to that of the most irridescent of Grackles. As I looked at the little one, I couldn’t help but think it looked quite like they were trying to make a Phoenix of some sort.
Gently, I removed the little one from her incubator nest and brought her to Mama’s, which laid right above and beside my own cot. With a gentle nudge on her beak, I prepared to go back to sleep and dream of revenge on those who dared to mess with Nature’s order. As Mama settled down beside her, gently cooing “little one, little one,” I couldn’t help but smile.

“Welcome to the world, little one.”
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Re: Six Kalon Readoptions!

Postby cribunni » Sun Apr 07, 2019 8:29 am

my apologies, but when will this be judged?

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Re: Six Kalon Readoptions!

Postby Zailune » Sun Apr 07, 2019 7:34 pm

Sorry for closing this a bit late.
This is closed to new entries, I'll post again when I've judged the forms.
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Re: Six Kalon Readoptions!

Postby RainbowUnicornGirl » Mon Apr 08, 2019 2:40 pm

Unfortunately, due to internet issues, the forms that I had meant to post before had not actually posted, and I did not realize until today. I have messaged Zailune for approval to repost my forms, and they have given me the okay to do so. I'm sorry for any inconvenience!

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Kalon Name: Rosalie
Kalon Gender: Female
This Kalon prepared a bouquet of flowers to bring to someone. Who are they and what is their relationship with this Kalon?
“He doesn’t love me anymore. No one does!”
This phrase that Loretta’s baby sister, Claudia sobbed to her yesterday resonated inside her head over and over. It shattered her heart to hear her ever optimistic sister sound so defeated and forlorn. It had haunted Loretta all night and she had not gotten a wink of sleep.
Claudia had been fighting an arduous battle with cancer, but it was only yesterday, that she had finally decided to shave her head before continuing on with chemotherapy. She had not deemed it important enough to notify her boyfriend of, but when he came to visit her and saw her shaved head, he had declared that it was all too much for him, and he needed to take a break from her and her battle against cancer.
He did so knowing that she was going through a tough time where she needed reassurance and love more than ever. He left without a second thought about the 3 years they spent together. He left without caring that it would be Valentine’s Day the very next day.
He began to distance himself ever since Claudia was diagnosed with cancer, but both Loretta and Claudia tried to convince themselves that they were just overthinking things. They didn’t believe that their 3 years together could be defeated by cancer. But cancer was much stronger than they had anticipated and hoped. In more ways than one.
When the sun began to shine through the window, Loretta lifted her face from the hospital bed, where she had spent the night crying her eyes out with her heartbroken sister. She got out of the bed without waking her sister, who was getting some much needed sleep, and exited the hospital. She had spent the entire sleepless night thinking, and she knew exactly what she wanted to do.
Loretta stepped into a busy flower shop, and the store owner barely spared her a glance before spewing the questions that they have obviously repeatedly an endless amount of times within the week leading up to that day. “Roses? How many? Red or pink? To a boyfriend or a girlfriend?”
“Umm, actually, I’d like a bouquet of sunflowers? For my sister who’s fighting against cancer.” Loretta raised her voice slightly to be heard over the clamour of impatient voices trying to get last minute flowers for their significant others.
“You’d like what now?” The store owner finally diverted their attention from the work at hand and gave Loretta a good look.
“Sunflowers please. For my sister,” Loretta repeated politely. The store owner stared at her for a moment longer.
“Sunflowers…” They paused, lost in their thoughts. “They’re not really in season at the moment, but I’m sure I can gather a small bouquet for you.”
“Hey! I wanted sunflowers! They’re my girlfriend’s favourite flower!” An irritated customer interrupted.
“My best friend had cancer too.” The store owner said, completely ignoring the other customer. “It was a difficult path for her, but she finished chemotherapy and was able to walk away free from cancer’s clutches. I hope the same for your sister.”
“Thank you,” Loretta smiled. Hearing from someone close to another who had personally gone through the terrible impacts of cancer, and hearing that they stayed strong and survived, gave her hope.
The store owner efficiently collected stalks of the best sunflowers they could find, and handed the finished bouquet to Loretta, who took it gratefully.
Loretta then returned to the hospital to find her sister stirring slightly from her peaceful slumber.
“Good morning!” Loretta whispered quietly with a small smile on her face. She was anxious to see whether Claudia would like it or not and was quite concerned because maybe getting her sister flowers on Valentine’s Day exactly one day after her breakup might not have been the best idea.
“Good morning…” Claudia half groaned, rolling over in the bed. She wasn’t so sure how good of a morning it was, considering her heart was still freshly broken and her face was a mess from the tears shed the night before.
“Claud, look,” Loretta prompted softly. She held the sunflowers in front of her as her sister finally sat up and looked towards her before giving a small gasp of surprise and delight. “I know it’s not the same, but I still love you. I always will. No matter what!”
“I…” Claudia was left speechless. She jumped out of bed, broken heart and swollen eyes temporarily forgotten, and gathered Loretta in a warm embrace. “Thank you. For the flowers, for being there for me, for everything.”

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Kalon Name: Loretta
Kalon Gender: Female
Tell me about a quirk this Kalon has!:
“How are you so calm?!” Loretta’s best friend, Camille, demanded. “My parents are going to murder me! They’re going to hire an assassin to come after me!”
“Oh, don’t be so dramatic,” Loretta laughed good-naturedly as she blinked very slowly. “I know it’s your mom’s favourite vase, but you’re also her favourite daughter!”
“That’s only because I’m her only daughter! I swear, she loves that vase more than me!” Camille fretted. “Besides, you can’t fool me. You’re just trying to appear calm so that I don’t worry more!”
“There is no need for me to pretend to be. I am perfectly calm.” Loretta stated. Her expression showed no sign of worry, and her extremely slow blinks almost made her seem bored and tired, but Camille knew better.
“You are not! You can fool anyone, but not me. I know you and your quirks. The slower you blink, the more nervous you are.” Camille said knowingly.
“I am not nervous. I never get nervous!” Loretta replied defensively.
“Okay fine, well you are as nervous as you get. Well now what do we do about the vase??” Camille went straight back to panicking.
“We could always try the Kintsugi repair method if your mom allows us to. It’s the fixing of broken pottery with a special lacquer dusted with powdered gold, silver, or platinum. I mean, some people break their vases on purpose to do this.” Loretta rationalized.
“Oh, you’re right!” Camille brightened instantly. She had also observed that Loretta had begun to blink at an increasingly normal rate, and took it as the okay to calm down as well. “Well, hopefully my mom won’t be too upset then.”
“Well then, can we get some sleep now please? All that disconcertance has really tired me out.” Loretta yawned, feeling very exhausted.
“Hah! I thought you said you weren’t nervous hm?” Camille poked fun.
“I wasn’t nervous! Just disconcerted.” Loretta laughed, collapsing onto the couch and closed her eyes. “Anyway, I’ll be getting some sleep now thank you very much.”
“But it’s only 8! Loretta!” Camille prodded her.
“I need 12 hours of sleep to operate. And we’re getting up at 7:30 tomorrow! I’m already getting too little sleep,” she rolled over to hide her face in the couch.
“Fine, but only if you tell me everything about your lucid dreams from tonight! Despite your trying to convince me otherwise, I knoww that you can control all your dreams,” she said as she lay on the couch next to Loretta.
“Mmm, okay fine.” Loretta smiled fondly while making sure that it was hidden from Camille.
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Re: Six Kalon Readoptions!

Postby sullivanish » Sat Apr 13, 2019 11:25 am

The other one I had not finished I got too busy, so I didn't continue on purpose.

I only want the rebel boi >:D
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Re: Six Kalon Readoptions!

Postby Zailune » Fri Apr 19, 2019 2:19 pm

Some seriously good writers and artists entered these comps omg, y'all are so talented and I wish I could give RUs and such ;v;

….so I finally looked through all the entries and have made the decisions regarding who the winners are - and it's time to announce it for you fellas! If you didn't win, I'm sorry ;v; I sincerely appreciate all the entries, you're the best fellas <3

So, without further ado...

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Winner of #1 - idyll with this entry!

You obviously put a lot of thought and effort into your form and your concept / art is super cute! You paint the picture of a quirky kalon with a unique hobby really well and I know you'll be a great kal-parent to Isaac!

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Winner of #2 - Snowlondon With this entry!

Your concept was so unique and really caught my eye - you also had a really good sense of organization in your form and the variety in your written segments was really interesting! Thanks for entering and I hope you enjoy owning this Kal :)

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Winner of #3 - ~Castiel~ with this entry!

I thought your story was a very interesting take on the prompt, and a very sweet tale. I enjoyed reading your entry and it definitely made me smile! You have a nice concept for this kal's personality, thank you for entering! I'm sure you'll take good care of this kalon!

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Winner of #4 - Mavryk Company with this entry!

The quirk you described was very humorous, and your use of wording in your entry was very well done - It seems that you put a good amount of thought into the quirk and how you expressed it! Your entry may have been short but I sincerely enjoyed it!

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Winner of #5 - Yuroshi with this entry!

You are an amazingly talented writer, and your story was very intriguing - the quality of your writing was consistent throughout your entry and the concept itself was definitely something I hadn't seen before - I really appreciate the effort you put into your entry!

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Winner of #6 - aloe~ with this entry!

Your entry had a lot of heart and you have a very elegant style of writing - your descriptive and deep wording portrayed the scenario you presented very well and had an emotional projection - I hope you enjoy being the owner of this kalon!

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Again, I want to thank everyone who entered for taking the time to try out - you're the best!

I will be adding the winners to the oekaki refs in a moment, then posting to the archive update thread after that!

Please PM me with any questions, comments or concerns. Lots of love!
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Re: Six Kalon Readoptions! Winners!

Postby idyll » Fri Apr 19, 2019 2:35 pm

zail I know you talked about this with me already and I told you this 6 times but I am in s h o c k still?? oh my goodness I am absolutely speechless! All I can think to say is: thank you so sO much!! I am so so thrilled to have Isaac and I can't wait to develop him and add him to my kalon family!!
A massive congratulations to all of the other winners, as well! I read all of your forms and oh my goodness you guys are all so talented! <33
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Re: Six Kalon Readoptions! Winners!

Postby Mavryk Company » Fri Apr 19, 2019 2:57 pm

aAA! kdokslamn thank you so much!! ;o; I’m so glad you liked my entry!
she’s a dream, and I can’t wait to develop her some more!
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Re: Six Kalon Readoptions! Winners!

Postby Yuroshi » Fri Apr 19, 2019 4:20 pm

Oh my gosh, I could honestly cry tears of joy right now, thank you so so much! The moment I saw this kid they absolutely stole the entirety of my heart, and I put my all into trying to create the perfect story for them. I already have so many plans for where they will go in the future, along with the little "phoenix" as well! Thank you so much for the absolutely perfect Tricks, and for the compliments on my writing. They both mean a lot to me and I am incredibly grateful, thank you so so much!

Congrats to everyone else as well with the marvelous writings (and art in idyll's case- I know I've said it a million times before but I absolutely adore your art style and your happy expressions and lighting always make me smile) for these beautiful kalons, I can't wait to see them around the community more~

I hope you all had and have amazing days!!
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