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[size=90]Professor Miles R. Dickens [♂] && Dylan Copperfield [♂]
This was awesome. Got a good giggle out of the story. <3'd it

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by Musicgirl<3 » Wed Apr 27, 2011 9:15 am
Ever heard of a love triangle? Well two males are after my sunset. Read on to see who she picks


Sunset[F]--------------------------
Bobby [M]-----------------------
Trouble[M]1st off Sunset and trouble.
"Oh trouble im so glad im spending the 4th of July with you."
sighs dreamly"So am i" Said Trouble
The next day "You know Maybye its not going to work out I saw you making out with another dog. And that hurt me. Im done with you" Sunset told Trouble
"B-but Sunny No!"Trouble stammered "I love you!"
"FORGET IT ITS OVER!" Sunset yelled back as she walked away
half way to her house is the park where she met Bob And bob... well just read"WOW hi there cutie where ya headed?" said bobbby
"Huh? Im headed to my house, and i got 2 more blocks to go so move outta the way and Im sunset"
"Im bobby will ya go out with me?"
"Huh?No way!"replied sunset
"Well sunset remember this, i will bother you until you say yes cuz no dog ever rejects ME"
3 months later while sunset was on a bench in the park 2 blocks from her house bobby walks up to her and says"Ill pay you 100 bucks if you go out with me"
"No So get outta here"Sunset said
Trouble walks up to her and pushes Bobby"Sunny please take me back, I ment to tell you i had a older sis and she was leaving for collage"
"Oh trouble OF COURSE!"
They kiss and make upTHE END
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by Simpleprincess » Wed Apr 27, 2011 9:31 am
Firestar123698745 wrote:Ever heard of a love triangle? Well two males are after my sunset. Read on to see who she picks


Sunset[F]--------------------------
Bobby [M]-----------------------
Trouble[M]1st off Sunset and trouble.
"Oh trouble im so glad im spending the 4th of July with you."
sighs dreamly"So am i" Said Trouble
The next day "You know Maybye its not going to work out I saw you making out with another dog. And that hurt me. Im done with you" Sunset told Trouble
"B-but Sunny No!"Trouble stammered "I love you!"
"FORGET IT ITS OVER!" Sunset yelled back as she walked away
half way to her house is the park where she met Bob And bob... well just read"WOW hi there cutie where ya headed?" said bobbby
"Huh? Im headed to my house, and i got 2 more blocks to go so move outta the way and Im sunset"
"Im bobby will ya go out with me?"
"Huh?No way!"replied sunset
"Well sunset remember this, i will bother you until you say yes cuz no dog ever rejects ME"
3 months later while sunset was on a bench in the park 2 blocks from her house bobby walks up to her and says"Ill pay you 100 bucks if you go out with me"
"No So get outta here"Sunset said
Trouble walks up to her and pushes Bobby"Sunny please take me back, I ment to tell you i had a older sis and she was leaving for collage"
"Oh trouble OF COURSE!"
They kiss and make upTHE END
Lol, thats so cute xD
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by Musicgirl<3 » Wed Apr 27, 2011 10:14 am
Simpleprincess wrote:Firestar123698745 wrote:Ever heard of a love triangle? Well two males are after my sunset. Read on to see who she picks


Sunset[F]--------------------------
Bobby [M]-----------------------
Trouble[M]1st off Sunset and trouble.
"Oh trouble im so glad im spending the 4th of July with you."
sighs dreamly"So am i" Said Trouble
The next day "You know Maybye its not going to work out I saw you making out with another dog. And that hurt me. Im done with you" Sunset told Trouble
"B-but Sunny No!"Trouble stammered "I love you!"
"FORGET IT ITS OVER!" Sunset yelled back as she walked away
half way to her house is the park where she met Bob And bob... well just read"WOW hi there cutie where ya headed?" said bobbby
"Huh? Im headed to my house, and i got 2 more blocks to go so move outta the way and Im sunset"
"Im bobby will ya go out with me?"
"Huh?No way!"replied sunset
"Well sunset remember this, i will bother you until you say yes cuz no dog ever rejects ME"
3 months later while sunset was on a bench in the park 2 blocks from her house bobby walks up to her and says"Ill pay you 100 bucks if you go out with me"
"No So get outta here"Sunset said
Trouble walks up to her and pushes Bobby"Sunny please take me back, I ment to tell you i had a older sis and she was leaving for collage"
"Oh trouble OF COURSE!"
They kiss and make upTHE END
Lol, thats so cute xD
Thanks!
XxOrangeleafxX wrote:Firestar that is hilarious
Hehe Thanks!
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by antler apathy » Wed Apr 27, 2011 10:51 am
rainy.day wrote:Icefire22 wrote:Gwen Trix wrote:I want to try something. I want to start a story and then have someone continue it on and add their part to it. Anyone interested?
Here's the story in anyone wants to try;


Courtney [f] | West [m]
I glanced over the room, holding the camera close to my chest. There she was, lying on the ground in the center of the space, face pressed in to the carpet motionless. I stopped at the body, and turned to watch my colleague pace it holding a small folder compressing several papers together.
"Agent Delis, can you please explain to me the nature of the crime here?" I quizzed.
"Courtney Renee, twenty-seven years, she seemed to be lying on the floor unconscious until room service nudged her and realized she wasn't going to wake back up. We've yet to figure out her C.O.D. but we suspect poiso-"
I held up a hand, shaking my head for a moment, "No, this is not Courtney."
"And why do you say that sir? Not to defy you, but she seems to be the girl on the license." Delis frowned grumpily, not flattered by my statement.
"Because I just came from interviewing Courtney."
Mind if I continue? This seems like fun. =)
She hurried along the empty street, head down and eyes flickering around her. How long until they discovered the body? she wondered. It had been a mistake to be picked up by that cop. Now she had hours, instead of days, before they came sniffing around.
Glancing each way, she stepped onto the pavement and hastened across the street. Stooping under an archway, she fumbled for a second with the pin in her hair. Minutes later, she was ducking into the dark clothing store and shutting the door behind her. Luckily, there was no security camera to fuss with; she got straight to work. Blonde hair tucked under a black wig, modest dress replacing a tight shirt and short skirt, and makeup reapplied.
It took 10 minutes to transform from Courtney Renee, struggling dancer, to Abigail Smith, quiet waitress. She wiped her fingerprints from the door and stepped back out into the night.
I think I have to add<33
Hello, you've reached Courtney Renee. I'm sorry I missed your call, but please feel free to try again later. Please leave a detailed message and a call back number. Bye!
Beep.
I sighed, and ended the call. It was the 7th time I tried calling her. Every single time I got voicemail. I knew the rest of the team would be back at the crime scene waiting for me, but I needed a break. It was raining out side, but it was a sad ecuse for rain here in Seattle. It was more of a drizzle, really. I didn't bother trying to shield my head from the wet, it was no good. I crossed the street, my shoes sloshing in the polluted puddles that trickled slowly into the storm drains.
I stepped into the warm diner, overlapping voices and the bitter aroma of coffee overwhelming my dampened senses. I took a seat on the worn leather bar stool, letting my elbows rest on the marble counter. A waitress approached me, jotting down something on a small notebook with a pencil, it's lead worn down to a nub. "What would you like today, sir?" The voice... it was hauntingly familiar. I smiled, narrowing my eyes as I surveyed the young woman, with thick locks of dark hair. "Have we met before?" The woman froze when she heard my voice, and hesitantly looked up at me, a look of fear wiping over her face. "U-um, no sir, I, I don't think... so." I chuckled at her. "You're turning pale, darling. Are you all right?" She cleared her throat, and set her note pad down on the marble counter, taking a few steps back. "I'm sorry sir, I, I need to go." I watched her rush out of a diner, but in her escape, a single lock of golden hair escaped from underneath the brown.
Courtney.
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Yay! People are adding! And I love where the story goes, so much that I need to continue myself x3
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I shoved my chair back, thick metal scratching against the marble floor of the diner. The tabled teetered for a moment, before I slammed my hand down on it and growled. I watched my suspect push her way out the back door of the restaurant, past the kitchen and out in to the alley. I could intercept her there, she'd assume I would follow her out the back.
I put my left hand on the gun tucked in to it's holder on my belt, and sprinted out the front door, around the corner and to the alley. Courtney was emerging from the dark half-street, shielding her face behind a fedora and her dark haired wig.
"Stop right there Ms. Renee." I called, whipping the gun out as the barrel pointed at her.
She froze, and for a moment I actually believed this would be an easy arrest, but it seemed as though Ms. Renee had only been going over her options, and though whatever the hell was going on in her head she had decided to bolt. So I did what was necessary, and started after the girl as she darted between people in an attempt at evasion.
But she was so damn fast, and I felt clumsy as I tried to push through people. A gun caused fear more than cooperation, and I had people running in front of me instead of staying out of my way. I pushed past them, and in to the center of a street where I found a car coming straight at me. I pulled off to the side, just as the car swerved jamming on the break and glanced around the area.
Courtney wasn't anywhere to be seen. I threw myself against a parked car, frustrated.
"Damn it Courtney Renee, I'm going to find you. Now you've set it."
[ oh you were a phonograph, I was a kid
I sat with an ear close, just listening
was there when the rain tapped her way down your face
you were a miracle and I was just holding your space ]
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by lululizzy23 » Wed Apr 27, 2011 11:11 am
Gwen Trix wrote:<33
Yay! People are adding! And I love where the story goes, so much that I need to continue myself x3
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I shoved my chair back, thick metal scratching against the marble floor of the diner. The tabled teetered for a moment, before I slammed my hand down on it and growled. I watched my suspect push her way out the back door of the restaurant, past the kitchen and out in to the alley. I could intercept her there, she'd assume I would follow her out the back.
I put my left hand on the gun tucked in to it's holder on my belt, and sprinted out the front door, around the corner and to the alley. Courtney was emerging from the dark half-street, shielding her face behind a fedora and her dark haired wig.
"Stop right there Ms. Renee." I called, whipping the gun out as the barrel pointed at her.
She froze, and for a moment I actually believed this would be an easy arrest, but it seemed as though Ms. Renee had only been going over her options, and though whatever the hell was going on in her head she had decided to bolt. So I did what was necessary, and started after the girl as she darted between people in an attempt at evasion.
But she was so damn fast, and I felt clumsy as I tried to push through people. A gun caused fear more than cooperation, and I had people running in front of me instead of staying out of my way. I pushed past them, and in to the center of a street where I found a car coming straight at me. I pulled off to the side, just as the car swerved jamming on the break and glanced around the area.
Courtney wasn't anywhere to be seen. I threw myself against a parked car, frustrated.
"Damn it Courtney Renee, I'm going to find you. Now you've set it."
(I add more but from Courtneys point of view)
I ran and ran until my feet ached, I realized I had ditched that manlong ago. Why did I run? Wouldn't it've been easier to try'n knock him out? Well he had a gun, I could've been killed, and I had to run. I didn't dare look back for the fact that the man might still be following me.
(not much but I'm tired it's 1:11 in the fricken morning!)
"one doesn't need sunglasses on a gloomy day and yet it is on a gloomy day that one must look one's flyest"
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by alas, » Wed Apr 27, 2011 11:37 am
...I can't resist posting another<3
xxx 
Kiel [kie-ll] [m] x Devona [di-vone-uh] [f]
how precious, how sweet
that you love the trees
but wouldn't you like to try this, babe?
"How precious, how sweet," the teenager cackled. "Tree hugger," he mocked. "You gonna' sprout some roses, babe?" His words stung like the rose's thorns. I simply ignored the boy, chuckling with his friends behind my chair. "Oh, baaaaa-bee, won't you come with us t'night? The party'll be pretty epic," Kiel droned on, his big brown eyes batting in my face. I rolled my eyes, his tactics pitiful.
"I don't smoke," I replied solemnly. "Or drink, or break the law," I allowed myself to snap, turning around now. "You pot-head, get away from me!" I ended up smacking him across the head, leaving a bright pink mark, and storming out of the cafeteria. My feet tapped across the tile of our high-school, heading towards the back exit. Idiot!
"Oh, Devona Devona," Kiel whinned following me with his gang, seemingly drunk as ever. He stumbled along the distance between us, catching up eventually. "Please come," he wiggled up to me, and I pushed him back.
Idiot, I thought. He still hand a red hand mark on his forehead. Oh, the pleasure of that SMACK~
"No, I refuse, back off Kiel," I groaned, coming back into reality, shoved him back once more. With a frown, Kiel fumbled backwards, running into the brick column behind him. Pulling out a ciggy and grabbing his match from his pocket, he ran out the back exit randomly, avoiding being seen from any teachers that may have been stalking us. His pals shoved me forward quickly trying to get me outside, and they weren't as wobbly. There were about five of them, too, the group always growing. I couldn't escape, so I let them throw me outside landing in front of Kiel.
He just stared at me. It was a serious stare, too. There was no confusion in the gaze, nothing to be unsure about. I looked away, corrupting the view. Obviously he was faking being drunk... I stood up and brushed my knees, covered in small tar pebbles. He reached out his hand, but not to assist me. There was his match. I narrowed my eyes.
"What? I told you I don't smoke," I spat. Kiel shrugged, and put it back in his pants, walking off to the side of the school. "Hey!" I shouted after him, running forwards a little. "Aren't you going back inside?"
"Nah, that door locks when it's closed," he shouted back, the smoke swirling out of his mouth and back to me. I ran after him, paranoid of some stranger prancing up to me and holding me hostage. I shivered at the thought. My parents had always kept the news on constantly, and the neighboring town wasn't the most peaceful place.
"Why'd ya' come out?" He questioned soon enough.
"Well your pals threw me out here," I snarled in response. Kiel half-smiled and patted me on the back, but I brushed him off with a quick jerk away from him.
"Sorry kid; they think I'm their alpha 'er somethin'. Wanted you out here with me, I guess." He shrugged again.
"Why would they want me with you?" I looked at him while I asked. He was blushing.
Well, crap.
[writer's block-ish. Should I continue? :3]
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by micah » Wed Apr 27, 2011 11:40 am
@Xrae; Lovely. ;3;
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Fail poem, but I've made worse recently, and I'm a bit to eager to share.


Marlin [m] --- Lucas [m]
The boy was innocent, so innocent for his skin
His brain, that frame, stuck in a time of reminiscent
[ hearts ]
They've been killed off, his only kin
He closes down at night, shuts down the shop
His eyes, the weary eyes; they give out fright
They must sit upon the molded backdrop
He's tried, but never had the best flight
The dirt flees under his fingernails
It seeps into his blood
[ so swiftly ]
He speaks a thousand words with a single tale
Each of the audience a single flower bud
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