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kal try-out

Postby Breado » Wed Jan 16, 2019 11:16 pm

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In a tragic incident in a forest that without protection should
not be visited, a small kalon lost his parents.
Lucky for this unfortunate kit, he was found by a
creature as old as him; a creature whose species is feared by many.
But this young being's curiosity for once came before his instincts and
the two are now living together not as friends, but as siblings.
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Re: kal try-out

Postby Breado » Sat Jan 19, 2019 11:41 am

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The forest of Kamrann is a pine forest of undisturbed beauty. Located near a mountain, its area is almost always covered in snow.
The silence in the forest is both calming and eerie. Those who live near this place know that despite its calm natural beauty, some of the most dangerous and unpredictable creatures live deep inside the forest of Kamrann. What's a peaceful wonderland during the day, becomes a dark and dangerous place; monsters of different kinds lurk in the woods, fighting for territory, hunting and protecting what's theirs. From giant worm-like things with iron scales and a horse skull for a head to small fairy-like lizards with antennas that glow in the dark, you can find a variety of mostly dangerous wildlife there.

There's a mine located in the nearby mountain. A lot of stories are told about this mine, and many of the locals believe the horrific things came from there, but it's rather an old tale than the actual truth that is unfortunately unknown.

The various creatures living in the forest sometimes find their way into Amse, the small town near the forest, (usually during the night) much to the joy of everyone living there; wreaking havoc and scaring everyone there, sometimes managing to get one or two of the townsfolk too.
The town has a long history with these monsters; the place has been ruined by them countless times, yet it somehow always manages to build itself up again despite all the loss.
Living this close to a place that's littered with monsters can be hard to imagine, but these folks like their small town; without them and their dedicated hunters, the creatures would get out into more places, which would do no good for anyone.
Amse is just a friendly snowy community where the nights are long, the days are cold and the evenings are filled with uncertain hope.
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About the two

Postby Breado » Mon Jan 21, 2019 8:46 am

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𝑩𝒂𝒔𝒊𝒄 𝑭𝒂𝒄𝒕𝒔
𝑵𝒂𝒎𝒆:
𝑍𝑎𝑟𝑎𝑒𝑙
𝑶𝒍𝒅 𝑵𝒂𝒎𝒆:
𝑀𝑎𝑟𝑐𝑢𝑠 𝑅𝑒𝑦
𝑮𝒆𝒏𝒅𝒆𝒓:
𝑀𝑎𝑙𝑒
𝑨𝒈𝒆: 19
𝑯𝒆𝒊𝒈𝒉𝒕: 5'7
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𝑷𝒆𝒓𝒔𝒐𝒏𝒂𝒍𝒊𝒕𝒚
𝑴𝒂𝒊𝒏 𝑻𝒓𝒂𝒊𝒕:
𝑂𝑝𝑒𝑛-𝑚𝑖𝑛𝑑𝑒𝑑
𝑩𝒂𝒔𝒊𝒄 𝑻𝒓𝒂𝒊𝒕𝒔:
𝑇𝑟𝑢𝑠𝑡𝑖𝑛𝑔
𝐶𝑢𝑟𝑖𝑜𝑢𝑠
𝐹𝑟𝑖𝑒𝑛𝑑𝑙𝑦
𝐴𝑑𝑣𝑒𝑛𝑡𝑢𝑟𝑜𝑢𝑠
𝐴𝑡𝑡𝑒𝑛𝑡𝑖𝑜𝑛 𝑡𝑜 𝑑𝑒𝑡𝑎𝑖𝑙
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𝑻𝒂𝒔𝒕𝒆𝒔
𝑳𝒊𝒌𝒆𝒔:
𝐵𝑙𝑎𝑐𝑘𝑏𝑒𝑟𝑟𝑖𝑒𝑠
𝐻𝑎𝑛𝑑𝑚𝑎𝑑𝑒 𝑡𝘩𝑖𝑛𝑔𝑠
𝑫𝒊𝒔𝒍𝒊𝒌𝒆𝒔:
𝑆𝑜𝑢𝑟 𝑡𝘩𝑖𝑛𝑔𝑠
𝑃𝑟𝑒𝑗𝑢𝑑𝑖𝑐𝑒
𝑩𝒊𝒈𝒈𝒆𝒔𝒕 𝒇𝒆𝒂𝒓:
𝐶𝑜𝑚𝑝𝑙𝑒𝑡𝑒 𝑖𝑠𝑜𝑙𝑎𝑡𝑖𝑜𝑛
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Zarael is a really positive kalon; he sees the good in everyone and doesn't have prejudices. He thinks that even the worst person can change, however bad their situation may be; to him, there's always a chance of redemption. So much so that when he was in school, Zarael often tried to talk bullies out of being jerks. It usually never worked, but there was one instance it did; he's still proud of that kalon he managed to change and often brings it up as an example.
It's a good thing that his "brother", Bihac is with him almost all the time. Being trusting towards strangers has got him and the creature into quite a number of bad situations, especially with him not being able to identify a hunter when he was still new to the forest.

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𝑩𝒂𝒔𝒊𝒄 𝑭𝒂𝒄𝒕𝒔
𝑵𝒂𝒎𝒆:
𝐵𝑖𝘩𝑎𝑐
𝑮𝒆𝒏𝒅𝒆𝒓:
𝑀𝑎𝑙𝑒
𝑺𝒑𝒆𝒄𝒊𝒆:
𝐼𝑎𝑠𝑖𝑛
𝑨𝒈𝒆:~20
𝑯𝒆𝒊𝒈𝒉𝒕:6'5
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𝑷𝒆𝒓𝒔𝒐𝒏𝒂𝒍𝒊𝒕𝒚
𝑴𝒂𝒊𝒏 𝑻𝒓𝒂𝒊𝒕:
𝑆𝑢𝑠𝑝𝑖𝑐𝑖𝑜𝑢𝑠
𝑩𝒂𝒔𝒊𝒄 𝑻𝒓𝒂𝒊𝒕𝒔:
𝐴𝑙𝑒𝑟𝑡
𝐶𝑜𝑚𝑝𝑒𝑡𝑖𝑡𝑖𝑣𝑒
𝐷𝑜𝑤𝑛-𝑡𝑜-𝑒𝑎𝑟𝑡𝘩
𝑃𝑟𝑜𝑡𝑒𝑐𝑡𝑖𝑣𝑒
𝑆𝑡𝑢𝑏𝑏𝑜𝑟𝑛
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𝑻𝒂𝒔𝒕𝒆𝒔
𝑳𝒊𝒌𝒆𝒔:
𝐶𝑙𝑖𝑐𝑘𝑖𝑛𝑔 𝑠𝑜𝑢𝑛𝑑𝑠
𝑃𝑟𝑒𝑡𝑡𝑦 𝑟𝑜𝑐𝑘𝑠
𝑫𝒊𝒔𝒍𝒊𝒌𝒆𝒔:
𝐵𝑒𝑖𝑛𝑔 𝑡𝑜𝑙𝑑 𝑤𝘩𝑎𝑡 𝑡𝑜 𝑑𝑜
𝑆𝑡𝑜𝑟𝑚𝑠
𝑩𝒊𝒈𝒈𝒆𝒔𝒕 𝒇𝒆𝒂𝒓:
𝐹𝑎𝑖𝑙𝑢𝑟𝑒
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Bihac was born in the forest of Kamrann; he knows all the paths of the woods both on the ground and up in the trees. He's not really one to show emotions; he's mostly silently judges around others and he only opens up to Zarael and nobody else.
He's usually the one to take initiative and he always tries to find the solution that is the best for him and his kalon brother.
He's been to Amse a couple of times before he met Zarael, but he never understood why he was being chased out or attacked when he didn't go there to cause chaos like his kin do sometimes; these made him start to hate the kalons of Amse and he became wary of other kalons in general (except with Zarael, because they basically grew up together).
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In the beginning...

Postby Breado » Sat Jan 26, 2019 2:38 am

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It started out as an exciting day; the young Marcus was finally getting to see the mysterious forest of wonders that captured his interest some time ago. He loved nature even as an eight year old kit and his favorite season was basically an everyday thing there. He just couldn't wait to finally get there and build some snowkalons before entering the beautiful forest of Kamrann.
After him and his parents arrived there, they signed up to a tour in the woods. Their group got a nice guide who always answered all his questions without hesitation; Marcus knew then that this trip was going to be even better than he expected.
During the tour, while he wasn't asking questions, he got to know another kit who was not that pleased to go into a forest full of mysterious things, be it harmless or not. Despite this, they got to know each other a bit before they entered the woods, and they walked beside each other during the tour.
When the tour started and the group set foot into the forest of Kamrann, Marcus just fell silent.
He was completely taken aback by calm quiet of the place; the undisturbed snow aroud them told him that their group was that day's first group there. He felt lucky because of this.

The tour was going quite well for the kit, but his new
friend just couldn't help but feel like something was off.
Despite Marcus trying to calm him down, the kalon became more
worried and jumpy halfway through the tour.
When the group reached the deepest part of the forest they were allowed to enter, Marcus was still trying to calm his small friend, but despite his worries,
Marcus still enjoyed the beauty surrounding them.
After a quick break, just when they were about to head back, the group heard noises that sounded like thumping. As it grew more and more louder, Marcus felt more and more curious about what it might be, while his new friend tried to talk him into getting out of there, with or without the group.
Marcus should've done as his friend said.
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It all happened so fast.
One moment, he was adoring nature and calming his friend, the other he was being shielded by his mother from something. He had little time to process what was happening before he heard the other kalons scream in terror.
He didn't see the reason of the chaos because of his mom.
All he heard was the sickening snap of something hard while someone screamed before a gurgling sound came from their throat and stopped the shrieking. Gross sounds of something wet being chewed on loudly, something hitting a tree hard with a thud, another cry cut short by a snapping sound.
He heard his mom whimper, then he heard her scream his father's name. Then, she fell silent. The young kit's sight was still obscured by his mother body, but the sounds of what might've been happening left him disturbed.
He heard his mother whisper to him: "Marcus. Run."
Her shaky voice was filled with such a serious tone it sent a chill down his spine.
She sniffed. "I won't be able to follow you, but please save yourself... Don't look back, sweetie, just run... Run!" and with that, she pushed the kit away from herself hard and turned back to face whatever threat she saved him from.

And Marcus did as he was told.
He ran and didn't look back.
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The kit didn't know if he was being chased or not. The adrenaline and his mother's words kept his feet moving faster than ever before.
He heard a distant shriek.
He wanted to stop when he recognised it, but he couldn't.
He just ran, forward, not knowing where he's going or where he was going to end up. He jumped over a tree trunk, ran through a bush, tripped on a rock, but he ran.
His vision blurred as tears started streaming down his cheeks, making him feel like a bunch of needles were poking his cheeks.

After what felt like an eternity, his legs finally gave up. The kit fell face first into the soft snow, near a fallen tree that's end was still hanging onto the stump.
He was beyond exhausted. How long had he been running? How far was he inside the forest? Where were his mom and...
Oh.
Right.
Tears started stinging his eyes again. With what energy he'd left, the kit crawled under the trunk and curled up into a ball. He'll wait then.
Someone will find me eventually...
His eyelids felt heavy. Sniffing, he decided it was not worth fighting it. Maybe it's just a bad nightmare, and if he falls asleep now, he'll wake up in his bed again, with his mom and dad in the room next to his, sleeping peacefully.

He sniffed, rubbed his eyes and after wiping off his tears one more time, he let himself sink into the darkness of sleep.
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A loud roar caught the attention of a young creature playing in the soft snow.
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What's an iasin?

Postby Breado » Tue Jan 29, 2019 2:54 am

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['ee-ya-sin' or 'ya-sin']
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They usually live near the mine deep in the forest of Kamrann, but an exact location of their territory is unknown.
They are able to stand on their hindlegs, but are rarely able to walk like a human; this depends on how long their tail is: the longer, the better weight balance to help them walk. In Bihac's case, his tail still needs to grow some so he can maintain standing on two legs without wobbling and falling back to all four after only a few seconds.
On four legs, they are usually around 3-4,5ft tall, but when standing on two legs, they can reach 7-8,5ft height.
Their posture on four legs would be quite painful in the long run for a human, and even when standing on two, their back is slightly or really bent forward.
According to Zarael, their body temperature is quite high; his iasin brother always curls up around him during really freezing days and nights ever since they first met and even then he noted that the creature's body is way warmer than any kalon's he met.

Hearing Zarael speak, one can say that the iasins' language is like someone clicking their tongue combined with hissing and grunts.
The kit didn't talk about their usual hiding place's locations though.
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Now

Postby Breado » Thu Jan 31, 2019 8:11 am

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It has been almost ten years since the two met for the first time. Bihac and Zarael got really close to each other during that time, so close, in fact, that the two see each other as siblings.

Despite how he got to stay in the forest, the kit got used to living there over time. At first, he was a bit wary of, but still wouldn't leave Bihac's side. Needless to say, he was quite unfamiliar with the situation and the whole "you need to hunt to survive" thing. He didn't want to hurt anyone or anything, but after some time and a needless week of not eating anything but berries he was lucky to find, he had to get used to hunting for food.
Even though he usually only has Bihac to talk to, Zarael's still as friendly towards everyone as before. He's fortunately gotten over the incident with the tourist group, but he still wears his mom's scarf that Bihac found. He says it's a reminder to never forget his parents.
He changed his name from Marcus to Zarael because it seemed easier to pronounce for Bahic (when the kit asked for a name, Bihac suggested that one).
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Zarael learned a lot about the forest and its inhibitant creatures both from Bahic and his own good and bad experiences. He found his way back to Amse after five years of living in the woods, but he found himself not being able to live among kalons again, plus, he missed his iasin bro quite a lot. He also found out that the kalons of Amse do not take kindly to any kinds of beings from the forest that aren't kalons, so that was another reason for him to go back to Bihac.
Bahic helped him learn how to climb and move safely on trees and how to hunt and Zarael taught him about the world outside the forest of Kamrann. Even though he knows it's not as much as Bahic did for him, he feels like that's the most he could teach the iasin.
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Postby Breado » Fri Feb 01, 2019 7:08 am

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Misc. & creds

Postby Breado » Fri Feb 01, 2019 7:14 am

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Credits:
- all drawings were made by me
- the iasin specie was made by me
(I haven't used any references for their description or looks)
- fancy text pics came from fontmeme.com
- edited photos & gifs were randomly found on Google
A.N.
thanks for reading, I hope you like it!
I just loved working on this entry and all the drawings!
I usually make up random creatures for no reason, but
now one of them has a chance to have a story c:
thanks for the opportunity and congrats to the winner
in advance! winner, feel free to use those drawings I mad
that only feature the kit, since I'll might need my
creatures for other things! ^^

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