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Basically A Thought Dumpster

Postby scan » Sat Dec 29, 2018 12:50 pm

I've gotta lotta stuff spilling out of my brain so i guess i'll just dump it out all over here,,,,

I'd love some critique so feel free to comment :0
ᴀ Qᴜɪᴄᴋ ᴅɪᴘ ɪɴᴛᴏ ꜱᴛᴀʀʟɪɢʜᴛ
ɪɴ ᴛʜᴇ ᴅᴇᴘᴛʜ ᴏꜰ ᴅᴀʀᴋ
ᴀ ꜱᴏꜰᴛ ᴘᴇᴇᴋ ɪɴᴛᴏ ʜᴀᴘᴘʏ
ɪ’ᴍ ʙʀᴇᴀᴛʜɪɴɢ ᴏɴᴄᴇ ᴍᴏʀᴇ
ᴛʜᴇ ᴍᴏꜱᴛ ᴡᴏɴᴅᴇʀꜰᴜʟ ᴅʀᴇᴀᴍ
ᴏꜰ ʜᴏʟᴅɪɴɢ ʏᴏᴜʀ ʜᴀɴᴅ
ɪ ꜱᴍɪʟᴇᴅ ꜱᴏ ꜱʟɪɢʜᴛʟʏ
ꜱᴛᴀʀꜱ ɪɴ ᴍʏ ᴇʏᴇꜱ
ɪ ʟᴀᴜɢʜᴇᴅ ᴇᴠᴇʀ ʟɪɢʜᴛʟʏ
ᴀꜱ ᴛʜʀᴇᴀᴅꜱ ɪɴᴛᴇʀᴛᴡɪɴᴇ
ɪ’ᴍ ᴇᴠᴇʀ ꜱᴏ ɢʀᴀᴛᴇꜰᴜʟ
ʏᴏᴜʀ ᴘᴀᴛʜ ʜᴀꜱ ᴄʀᴏꜱꜱᴇᴅ ᴍɪɴᴇ

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for him for her

Postby scan » Sat Dec 29, 2018 12:59 pm

So many things I’ve wanted to say
You make my day
And you have this way
Of speaking
And smiling
And laughing
And moving
I wanted you closer
Maybe life’s improving

So many things I’d wish I’d done
Stayed with you longer
We could’ve been stronger
I got cold feet and left my love
And I have another now
But regret looms above

So many wishes I wish would come true
Dreams of you
Of holding your hand
Dreams for you
Of brightening your dark
Dreams of you
Keeping you alive
Dreams of you
Together we’ll survive.
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Re: Basically A Thought Dumpster

Postby stickymallet » Sat Dec 29, 2018 1:05 pm

https://vocaroo.com/i/s0Lt6YF0Oaaa
loved that so much that ii jusstsada adsuasuda blah


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Re: Basically A Thought Dumpster

Postby scan » Sat Dec 29, 2018 1:12 pm

Kimba! wrote:https://vocaroo.com/i/s0Lt6YF0Oaaa
loved that so much that ii jusstsada adsuasuda blah

oml aaaaaaa your voice is so lovely thank you i like actually screamed i love it sm thank you fbfjnfnfkekw
ᴀ Qᴜɪᴄᴋ ᴅɪᴘ ɪɴᴛᴏ ꜱᴛᴀʀʟɪɢʜᴛ
ɪɴ ᴛʜᴇ ᴅᴇᴘᴛʜ ᴏꜰ ᴅᴀʀᴋ
ᴀ ꜱᴏꜰᴛ ᴘᴇᴇᴋ ɪɴᴛᴏ ʜᴀᴘᴘʏ
ɪ’ᴍ ʙʀᴇᴀᴛʜɪɴɢ ᴏɴᴄᴇ ᴍᴏʀᴇ
ᴛʜᴇ ᴍᴏꜱᴛ ᴡᴏɴᴅᴇʀꜰᴜʟ ᴅʀᴇᴀᴍ
ᴏꜰ ʜᴏʟᴅɪɴɢ ʏᴏᴜʀ ʜᴀɴᴅ
ɪ ꜱᴍɪʟᴇᴅ ꜱᴏ ꜱʟɪɢʜᴛʟʏ
ꜱᴛᴀʀꜱ ɪɴ ᴍʏ ᴇʏᴇꜱ
ɪ ʟᴀᴜɢʜᴇᴅ ᴇᴠᴇʀ ʟɪɢʜᴛʟʏ
ᴀꜱ ᴛʜʀᴇᴀᴅꜱ ɪɴᴛᴇʀᴛᴡɪɴᴇ
ɪ’ᴍ ᴇᴠᴇʀ ꜱᴏ ɢʀᴀᴛᴇꜰᴜʟ
ʏᴏᴜʀ ᴘᴀᴛʜ ʜᴀꜱ ᴄʀᴏꜱꜱᴇᴅ ᴍɪɴᴇ

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Re: Basically A Thought Dumpster

Postby stickymallet » Sat Dec 29, 2018 1:15 pm

Sophialolila wrote:
Kimba! wrote:https://vocaroo.com/i/s0Lt6YF0Oaaa
loved that so much that ii jusstsada adsuasuda blah

oml aaaaaaa your voice is so lovely thank you i like actually screamed i love it sm thank you fbfjnfnfkekw

its chill!!!!!! ilu and ur writing????? so like?? brbhwsja and i hope ur relationship works out like.. i know how it can be


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Re: Basically A Thought Dumpster

Postby scan » Sat Dec 29, 2018 1:17 pm

Kimba! wrote:
Sophialolila wrote:
Kimba! wrote:https://vocaroo.com/i/s0Lt6YF0Oaaa
loved that so much that ii jusstsada adsuasuda blah

oml aaaaaaa your voice is so lovely thank you i like actually screamed i love it sm thank you fbfjnfnfkekw

its chill!!!!!! ilu and ur writing????? so like?? brbhwsja and i hope ur relationship works out like.. i know how it can be

aaaaa thank you sm you're the best
ᴀ Qᴜɪᴄᴋ ᴅɪᴘ ɪɴᴛᴏ ꜱᴛᴀʀʟɪɢʜᴛ
ɪɴ ᴛʜᴇ ᴅᴇᴘᴛʜ ᴏꜰ ᴅᴀʀᴋ
ᴀ ꜱᴏꜰᴛ ᴘᴇᴇᴋ ɪɴᴛᴏ ʜᴀᴘᴘʏ
ɪ’ᴍ ʙʀᴇᴀᴛʜɪɴɢ ᴏɴᴄᴇ ᴍᴏʀᴇ
ᴛʜᴇ ᴍᴏꜱᴛ ᴡᴏɴᴅᴇʀꜰᴜʟ ᴅʀᴇᴀᴍ
ᴏꜰ ʜᴏʟᴅɪɴɢ ʏᴏᴜʀ ʜᴀɴᴅ
ɪ ꜱᴍɪʟᴇᴅ ꜱᴏ ꜱʟɪɢʜᴛʟʏ
ꜱᴛᴀʀꜱ ɪɴ ᴍʏ ᴇʏᴇꜱ
ɪ ʟᴀᴜɢʜᴇᴅ ᴇᴠᴇʀ ʟɪɢʜᴛʟʏ
ᴀꜱ ᴛʜʀᴇᴀᴅꜱ ɪɴᴛᴇʀᴛᴡɪɴᴇ
ɪ’ᴍ ᴇᴠᴇʀ ꜱᴏ ɢʀᴀᴛᴇꜰᴜʟ
ʏᴏᴜʀ ᴘᴀᴛʜ ʜᴀꜱ ᴄʀᴏꜱꜱᴇᴅ ᴍɪɴᴇ

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wanting

Postby scan » Sat Dec 29, 2018 1:21 pm

When you’re so hungry for attention,
You want to feel down,
When you’re so desperate for love,
Petals fall to the ground,
When your so craving beauty,
The mirror is your puppeteer,
When you so deeply need someone,
Their smile keeps you here
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she was so lovely

Postby scan » Sun Dec 30, 2018 7:03 am

I met a beautiful sparrow,
And they flew by every day,
Over and over,
Pushed my sorrows away,
Until one day I hurt them,
Broke their elegant wings,
I took for granted the songs they would sing.

I broke their wings,
I broke their song,
Time and time again,
I’ve done them wrong,
And when they were hurt,
When they were in need,
I cried for myself,
And left them to bleed.
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You are a garden,,

Postby scan » Mon Dec 31, 2018 3:21 pm

You are a garden
With the droughts and the floods
You are a garden
The thorns and the buds
You are a garden
With the wind and the snow
You are a garden
Roots growing below
You are a garden
Planted seeds and bee stings
You are a garden
Doves croon, larks sing
You are a garden
Left unattended grows wild
You are a garden
And the sun is your smile
ᴀ Qᴜɪᴄᴋ ᴅɪᴘ ɪɴᴛᴏ ꜱᴛᴀʀʟɪɢʜᴛ
ɪɴ ᴛʜᴇ ᴅᴇᴘᴛʜ ᴏꜰ ᴅᴀʀᴋ
ᴀ ꜱᴏꜰᴛ ᴘᴇᴇᴋ ɪɴᴛᴏ ʜᴀᴘᴘʏ
ɪ’ᴍ ʙʀᴇᴀᴛʜɪɴɢ ᴏɴᴄᴇ ᴍᴏʀᴇ
ᴛʜᴇ ᴍᴏꜱᴛ ᴡᴏɴᴅᴇʀꜰᴜʟ ᴅʀᴇᴀᴍ
ᴏꜰ ʜᴏʟᴅɪɴɢ ʏᴏᴜʀ ʜᴀɴᴅ
ɪ ꜱᴍɪʟᴇᴅ ꜱᴏ ꜱʟɪɢʜᴛʟʏ
ꜱᴛᴀʀꜱ ɪɴ ᴍʏ ᴇʏᴇꜱ
ɪ ʟᴀᴜɢʜᴇᴅ ᴇᴠᴇʀ ʟɪɢʜᴛʟʏ
ᴀꜱ ᴛʜʀᴇᴀᴅꜱ ɪɴᴛᴇʀᴛᴡɪɴᴇ
ɪ’ᴍ ᴇᴠᴇʀ ꜱᴏ ɢʀᴀᴛᴇꜰᴜʟ
ʏᴏᴜʀ ᴘᴀᴛʜ ʜᴀꜱ ᴄʀᴏꜱꜱᴇᴅ ᴍɪɴᴇ

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