Rate the Warrior Name! { v3 ;; read rules. }

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[Rhian Katura]

Robinstorm- 7/10. Not bad. I usually don’t like warrior names where the prefix and suffix don’t really “match” or make sense together but this can work.

Spottednose- 8/10. It’s very on the nose (hehe) but I like that it’s to the point. Not every cat can have the cool/epic names. I like her personality too.

Dipperclaw- I’ve never seen anyone use this prefix. Would cats know what a dipper is? I’m thinking of in contexts with the constellation which was named after the tool... 9/10 for originality, 6/10 for logic? (Unless I’m mistaken of course)

Mottlestream- 6/10. Never was a big fan of the prefix mottle. But I like how the stream suffix reflects his personality.


My names:

Willowbreeze- gray tabby she cat
Nightfrost- Black she cat with light blue eyes
Fallowthorn- cream-brown she cat with golden eyes
Duskberry- dark brown long haired she-cat with green eyes
Dewspots- light gray speckled she-cat

[Hawky<3]

hi! please keep in mind that my rating is subjective and isn't the end all be all!!
i have no intent to hurt someone's feelings or do anything besides constructively criticize <3
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willowbreeze - 8/10
this is a pretty good name! its pretty simple and i feel pretty suffix + prefix has been used a lot, so that's why its not a 10.

nightfrost - 7/10
again, fits the cat but i feel like it could fit more? -frost is hard to dissect without a personality ^^

fallowthorn - 6/10
this name throws me for a loop. -thorn implies a bit more harshness, a 'barbed' personality if you will, but i feel like this could be shown in different ways? the prefix fallow- is alright though.

duskberry - 7/10
again, it works. -berry is another odd suffix choice in my opinion, but it works with the cat.

dewspots - 6/10
again, odd suffix to me. -spot would work, i just don't see the point in an extra plural. you could potentially do dewspeckle or dewspot and i think it'd work fine.

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stormflower - a short-haired blue molly with yellow eyes and some white markings. stormflower is an elder who fostered kittens in her youth. she is extremely passionate about caring for kittens, but can fall into depressive states when she thinks about the loss of her last two kittens, vinekit and fennelkit.
mallowthroat - a short-haired white tom with baby blue eyes and a lanky build. he is a mute warrior in a clan who doesn't believe in starclan. mallowthroat is one of a few believers in his clan, and the prospect of him getting found out is very stressful. he's a nervous wreck, constantly looking over his shoulder. because he is mute, he speaks in body language and tail signs.
kestrelfur - a medium-furred molly with dilute calico tabby patches and hazel eyes. kestrelfur is a workaholic, always doing something and almost never resting. she practically lives to serve her clan, and hardly does anything outside of duties. she's uninterested in kittens or a mate, but does appreciate all her clanmates. she's incredibly protective of clanmates, though not on a personal level. she has trouble empathizing with others and can sometimes feel a bit insensitive. kestrelfur loves knowing she did a good job.

[Silxe]

Stormflower - 10/10
Good name! I love the flow and how well it suits her. Can't say anything bad about this.

Mallowthroat - 10/10
It's a suitable, unique name that fits the cat well and sounds nice. Both Mallow- and throat are underused. Also he sounds so so cute and I want to protect him!!

Kestrelfur - 10/10
Wow, all 10/10 knockouts here. Kestrelfur sound fine and fits the cat to a tee. Male kestrels have a bit of blue-grey on their brown body, so If Kestrelfur's orange parts are more dull, it's perfect. Love her personality too.

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Fogtail
A small, light grey molly with wispy fur. She has great agility and balance, feeling more at home in the tree tops than on the ground. She's mainly been like that since she was a kit, and her family had to escape a fox by climbing a tree, so she sees trees as a safe zone. She is very softspoken and calm, but it unnerves others when something dangerous is happening and she is just "well, this is a bit of a pain" instead of freaking out.

Stormstep
An exceedingly gigantic dark grey tom with a strong face and rips in his ears. Really big, like, 20lbs. He generally gets his way by intimidation alone, but will fight if he has to. Or wants to. If he wants to beat you up, he will. He is a nice cat to those he likes, and he cares deeply for the old, sick, or helpless. His tail also perpetually wags, which he got made fun of for as a kit

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Please don't take offense for any of my reviews, they are not
meant to offend and are purely constructive criticism.

Fogtail - 7/10 || I've never been really sure about using Fog- as prefix,
it fits with the cat, but the word fog can just have many negative connotations easily
attached to it. I do like the suffix use here though, it's simple, but definitely works and is solid.

Stormstep - 8.5/10 || I love the idea behind this name! The prefix and the suffix
really compliments the cat's burly appearance. The only real problem I have is I'm one of those
people that doesn't like names that have alliteration for the prefix and suffix; it just makes the
name much harder to roll off the tongue. I suggest something like Boulderstep or Cragstep to help
solve that maybe? Assuming that's something you would like to change, since it more has to do with
personal preference.

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My names are bellow:

• Finback [Senior Warrior]
  || A skinny short-haired tom built for swimming. He has a bright
  silver tabby pelt with a distinct thin dark gray stripe that starts at
  the base of his neck and ends at the tip of his tail, noticeably large paws,
  and pale blue-gray eyes. As a youth, his ability to swim quickly surpassed
  his own mentor and was even asked to help other apprentices learn how to hunt
  for fish in the deep rivers residing in the clan territory. His was once very egocentric
  and prideful about his natural talent for swimming, but after showing off one
  day and putting himself and his friends in mortal danger, he began a slow
  path of humbling himself. Now as an older warrior, he is one of the most
  respected in the clan, and often likes telling stories to the kits about his
  conquests of wrestling large fish and river predators.||
  
• Copperpond [Warrior]
  || A short-haired strongly built tom with a rusty brown
  blotched pelt and amber eyes. I don't really have a history for him,
  his character is rather new. I just wanted to get input on having a cat
  that has a type of metal for a prefix? I'm really torn on if cats should
  or shouldn't know what something like that is.||
  
• Plumetail [Young Warrior]
  || A small petite medium-haired she-cat with bright yellow
  eyes and a solid white soft, practically down-like, pelt.
  She is the third generation of a large family of kittypet
  refugees that joined the clan after they were shooed away
  from their old home when new housefolk bought the twolegplace
  they lived in. She was scorned upon by her clanmates due to how
  lazy most of her family was in the past and how fragile she looked,
  but she soon gained the respect of her clanmates with her
  determination to help. ||
  
• Lotusheart [Young Warrior]
  || A cat who looks almost identical to
  Plumetail as they are sisters, the only major differences
  is that Lotusheart has shorter fur without the softness
  and dark blue eyes. She is mildly jealous of her sister for
  all the attention she now gets for her helpfulness and luxurious
  fur, but she doesn't dare show it because of her timid personality
  and constantly feeling insecure about loosing the good relationship
  she has with Plumetail. (Just as a note, there are white Lotus flowers.)||

I'm looking for more critical/detailed advice if possible since I plan
on using these names and longer versions of the descriptions for
high literacy RPs and stories. If someone has already rated my names
and you can think of something to add/change, feel free to PM me!

[Kazin]

Finback - 4/10
I really enjoy the idea behind the name, and I enjoy the story of the cat itself. I cannot, however, ever see the suffix 'back' being used. What also gets me is that a mother does not know how her kit will swim when she names it, however I could see a mother in a swimming/water Clan naming her kit something like that just on principle, so that part slides for me. It just flows very weirdly as a name as well; it doesn't seem like a warrior name to me. I'd like to think there are other suffixes that would both flow better and make more sense as a suffix in general; personally, I would use something like -splash, -stream and maybe play around with different prefixes to make it flow better. But again, I guess that might come down to personal preference and, after all, it is your character and not mine.

Copperpond - 8/10
Ok, I really adore this name a lot. The only thing that docks points for me is that the alliteration might become too much, especially if this character was the main one in a story or RP. The double 'p' sound can get annoying, at least to me. Personally, I like having the metal as a prefix - or if you were iffy on it you could always have him come from a different background than from the Clans. I mean, if you think on it, Firestar's first name was "Rusty," and none of the Clan cats that knew him as Rusty made fun of him for having a weird name. I'd like to think if they understood rust, they would understand a couple of metals?

Plumetail - 7/10
I am not a huge fan of the prefix. I think it's just that when I think of 'plume,' I see something both soft (which is why I do like it for this cat) as well as something colorful because I like colorful birds, so in that sense I don't quite like it for a white cat. But then again, I do know that there are plenty of white birds so it makes sense.

Lotusheart - 10/10
I adore this name a lot! It sounds awesome, suits the cat really well, and I love her story. I like how you combined an uncommon prefix with a pretty commonly used suffix, but it makes a unique cat!

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Very non-traditional namer here, so I apologize for the names if you do prefer traditional ones x)

Rainshadow [a smaller black and white tom with dark amber eyes. He is charismatic, yet he uses his charisma to manipulate others into benefiting himself and only himself. As an apprentice, he cared a lot about his Clan, but due to a very bad leader and deputy combination, and being the apprentice of the leader, Rainshadow learned that he could only look out for himself and that he didn't much care for the Clan anymore - especially because his own family didn't believe the mistreatment he was getting from the leader and the deputy].

Lightflame - [a white tom with light ginger tabby patches on his fur. He has soft green eyes. Lightflame is the deputy of his Clan, and he is very caring for every single cat in his Clan. He has a lot of passion to better the Clan and get rid of the problems, ever since he was a kit.]

Cedarsmoke - [a dusky gray tom with slightly longer fur and dark green eyes. He is gruff and seems harsh on the outside, which also makes him seem way older than he actually is. Truthfully, he has a soft heart but doesn't like to show it - his stubborness and pride keeps him from showing pretty much any emotion. Instead, he turns his attention to hunting and stealth techniques.]

[wolf,]

opinions
rainshadow:: just his name alone gives him a soft sense. picturing rainshadow i think of a small grey/black cat that tends to be unnoticed and very quiet- pretty different from what you titled him! i think the name is nice, it just doesn't fit his character in my opinion. for someone with his personality i feel like a suffix like -tooth -fang -claw would fit him, he just has that sharp kinda personality! overall, 6|10

lightflame:: overall his name suits him, although it is a very common name. -flame definitely suits his personality, i'd say the only one i might choose over is -heart, however flame suits the ginger. idk how i feel about light however, it suits him, but it's overused. maybe something such as golden, lion, sun, etc. they're all big and bright and something theyd look to, as well as a bit more uncommon! overall though, 7|10

cedarsmoke:: i really do like this name! everything about his name suits him, and honestly i have no suggestions, this is a great name! 9|10

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characters

grizzlytuft:: tip!! grizzly as in grey-colored, not the bear! griz is a large maine coon x norwegian forest cat with thick and dense light grey fur. his underbelly is a tannish-grey and his pelt is covered with dark grey tabby stripes. he has large features and an intimidating appearance with his height and amount of muscle. his eyes are large and a handsome honey-gold. he has tufts on his ears and his pelt has random fluffs here and there. he has strength in his leg power and stamina, his legs allow him to run far and fast as well as strike a menacing blow. his personality, while conservative, he does have a judgemental mind and thinks he is always the best fighter and should be out doing more than he is allowed. by monochr00me

bumblesong:: being the brother of griz, bumble definitely resembles him. while a big build, slightly smaller than griz, he has more tan throughout his freshly cleaned pelt and bright yellow green eyes. too bad he's not so much a humble bumble as he is a self-entitled cat. he thinks he's all that, and he will easily push anyone aside to get what he wants and when he wants it. griz has always been bigger and stronger than him, so bumble dedicated his life to one-upping griz. by monochr00me

rainwatcher:: rainwatcher is a smaller tom with shorter soft dark grey fur. his underside is a tan, but he has a large stripe on the belly going up. he has dull sad blue eyes and large ears and tail. his tail drags on the ground when he doesn't hold it up. he is quiet and thoughtful,
he isn't the best at fighting or hunting, but he notices things quicker than most which is why he always volunteers for lookout. while soft spoken, this tom is very quick-witted although he knows how to hold his tongue. by shadowsnowolf

otterbelly:: otterbelly is a smaller brown tabby with short brown fur and a slightly large tan colored tummy. his fur on his stomach tends to hit the ground occasionally, however he's not fat, he's just furry! for whatever reason the fur on the back of his legs and his stomach are abnormally long while the rest of his fur is mildly short. he's got soft yellow eyes and orangish-brown tabby stripes. he's very outgoing and enjoys talking, however he's not the most active feline. he enjoys playing with kits, however he really enjoys munching on the fish during the warm days. you can't look at this tom without wanting to give him a big ol' squeeze!

[All Might]

grizzlytuft;
8.5 // 10
His appearance is stunning and beautiful. His name, fitting and unique and quite so perfect for him. It paints a picture of a cat as you state him to be so before reading who he is.

bumblesong;
5 // 10
I find the appearance of this cat to be fair. And I can feel his need for that competition, but as a name - I find 'song' just.. doesn't feel right with bumble. Probably, personal preference.

rainwatcher;
10 // 10
I just love this through and through. I can not speak of it as necessarily 'fitting' well - but I just, love it.

otterbelly;
2 // 10
Though I find his physical description endearing and cute. I do not like 'belly'


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Willowwing ; [Willowwhisper]
A rather stunning silvery-grey tabby. Quite light on her feet. She's likely to go forward in life to become a medicine cat, she is gentle and kind - and makes everyone feel at ease.

Pebbletooth ;
Sooty mottled pelted tom. He's grumpy.

Lotussong ;
A delicate, small she-cat. Her pelt is light.

[Kazin]

Willowwing - 4/10
[separated the two names since I wasn't sure what the name in parantheses meant]
Double letters just look off to me, and the name doesn't really flow with the double sound of 'w.'

Willowwhisper - 5/10
Same as above, though I do get a sense of the character's personality through this name.

Pebbletooth - 10/10
I really enjoy this name; it flows well, and it also compliments the character.

Lotussong - 7/10
Points off for double lettering and it making the flow of the name weird, but I really love the prefix - you don't see it much. I can picture a cat having this name.

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Emberlily
--> Mostly white she-cat with ginger patches. Gentle and caring.

Icethistle
--> Light gray she-cat with darker points. Resilient and reserved.

Hemlockflame
--> Dark red she-cat with scars across her nose. She has long fur. Confident and insightful.

[All Might]

Emberlily ;; 9 // 10
This is a beautiful name. Exceptionally fitting for the cat.

Icethistle ;; 7 // 10
I find this name to not so well slide off the tongue. It's still fairly interesting though, fits the cat, too.

Hemlockflame ;; I am. Divided. 10 // 10 or 5 // 10
Quite odd I just can not decide If I adore this name. Or if I find it too long. It seems cool, fitting. Unique. Yet I am torn.

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Incoming; oddities. ♥
Seedsong ;
An exceptionally small and dainty she cat. With fairly long fur in brown. Her paws are a bit darker, almost like pointing and when she curls in cold she resembles a fluffy seed. She is gentle, sweet and not much of a fighter but she can hunt fairly well and the sounds she makes seem to oddly enough cause birds to flutter ever so slightly closer. Almost a mimic. Fancy cat.

Fogwing ;
Delicate, yet wily. This is a smoky silvery grey she-cat that appears to be able to vanish just as quickly as she came. And yet, she is one of the most sweet felines any other cat meets. She's caring, and yet her .... tendency to float in and out like the breath of wind through the tree cover makes others a touch wary of her.