[Steven_Universe]

Revamp of Grill,'s oc Esther

Username: Grill,
Name: Esther
Sex/Gender: Female
Species: Shark dog
Character Ref: https://toyhou.se/2422426.esther
Hex Codes: (If you have them and want accurate colors, please label what they're for)
Suggestions: (What do you not like about the character? What would you change? What would you add or take away?) The colors are really not my favorite/ they don't really mix well together in my opinion. Maybe give her a ponytail instead of a bob haircut?

Here's What I Changed
I started off with the base design, I felt that just making her a wolf/dog with a shark tail would be a bit generic, so I went a bit further with the design.
I gave her a very clear, streamlined shape, short and sleek fur that clumps in tufts at certain points, she has slit pupils, and her canid nose has been swapped out for something more closely resembling gills, instead of putting them on her neck, I thought it would look better to put them on her snout. I've also given her more shark-like teeth as well as some less dog-like ears.
I've added some extra fins as well and opted to forego any kind of claws.

I added some extra colors, different shades of blue and orange. I agreed with what you'd said about the original colors, the orange was far too red and the blue was far too green, I gave some more readable markings in place of the original for the sake of balancing the colors, as the extra blue on the body is a bit confusing haha.


I hope you like her aaa

[Grill,]

I love her!! The only thing I would ask is could she maybe have a nose? It's totally okay if you don't want to add that. I love her no matter what <3 Thank you so much!!

[Steven_Universe]

Haha you prefer a canine nose?

[Steven_Universe]

I can make it work ahaha

[Grill,]

Haha you prefer a canine nose?

Yeah I'm a sucker for snoots lool you don't have to add one if you don't want to though <3

[Steven_Universe]

I accidentally made it a new thread, it's under the original h aa