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Re: ---The Chicken Smoothie Roleplay School---OPEN

Postby TheTravelingWriter » Thu Apr 14, 2011 10:43 am

I want to Enroll!


Username:Darkehtehepic
What level would you say you're at?:Eh... Intermediate I guess.
What is your Strong Point in RPing?: I would have to say making the unique, interesting characters that have horrid pasts and trying to make up for it now. I'm also decently good with character introductions in the role-play and capturing details about the character's past, flaws, etc.
What is your Weak Point?: Making short posts when my role-play part involves dialogue.
What do you want to improve on the most?: I would like to improve on post length, describing the surroundings, quality of posts, and describing characters better in their profile form. Possibly improving on making less clique characters.
What Type of Class do you wish to attend?: Rotation
Have you made Any of your own RPs?: viewtopic.php?f=7&t=509809 A pitiful type of wolf role-play. I have a few more but I cannot seem to find them for some reason...
Do you RP Animals or Humans?: I role-play both though I seem to role-play more wolves than humans. For humans, I usually do mythical creatures and some romance.

Please give us an example of a usual RP post from you:
(Quoted from Lunar Shadows Pack, a wolf role-play.)
A large black and red she-wolf could be seen out in the forest. One would guess that the wolf was out for a hunt but she looked more like an ungraceful, dimwitted squirrel out in the forest looking for food in the middle of the winter. Any wolf could guess that the wolf would be the best at hunting considering her skills.

The wolf's name was Vampire and she was the Beta female for the Lunar Shadows Pack. She truly wasn't the best hunter in the world but she was most definitely a very good fighter. That's what she had been taught to do all her life; kill and be the fear of the wild. Though it was nice being the top predator of the forest she originally came from, the she-wolf didn't like that life and ran away. She stumbled upon Lunar Shadows Pack when she was young and has been living here for the rest of her life.

Catching the scent of a deer upon the wind, the Beta female's mouth started to water at the scent. Oh, it had been so long since she had gotten a good meal and was now slightly underweight due to it. Creeping towards the scent, the she-wolf spotted a buck with only one branch of tines. A young buck. This was just her day.

Getting close to the ground, the Beta wolf sprung at the deer and, to her luck, the deer hadn't heard her. If it had, then it was far from saving itself considering her fangs were sunk into it's neck within a few seconds. A snapping sound came from the deer's neck and soon it went limp, falling to the ground in Vampire's jaws. Pleased with her kill, the Beta pulled her kill to camp.
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Re: ---The Chicken Smoothie Roleplay School---OPEN

Postby Smamm » Thu Apr 14, 2011 10:47 am

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Re: ---The Chicken Smoothie Roleplay School---OPEN

Postby ossa di cervo » Thu Apr 14, 2011 11:32 am

Finally got around to making this! Hope it's okay. <3 P.S. It speaks truth, I love dialogue and character quirks. :3

I want to be a Teacher!


Username: Zmija
How many years have you been RPing for? Around 7 or 8. :3
What part of RPing do you speacilize in? Probably personalities or something along those lines. (I love funky character quirks<3) that and/or dialogue. I do that alot in my posts. X-x
Do you own any of your own RPs?: Blood Race
Are you well versed in the proper use of Spelling and Grammar?: Yes, yes. Though there are times were I make a mistake. :3
Do you RP Animals or Human?: I don't really have a preference, I can do either. ^^
Why do you want to be a Teacher?: I'd like to see some of those one-liners come and watch them evolve and grow into loving writing. <3 That or people new to role-playing. I'd like them to dive into semi-lits and being able to expand their views of role-playing in general.

Please give us a RPing example:
Zmija wrote:This wolf obviously wasn't sure how to react to Espina's odd movements as she jumped and moved around. Her appearance probably looked odd to this wolf if he had never encountered an Elusive, but Espina, having such amazing knowledge, figured that everyone knew what an Elusive was.

After she spoke he answered all her questions after a moment of oblivious confusion and Espina nodded at all the answers, her hooves getting terribly uncomfortable in this sitting position she'd chosen. Her legs began to move during his short, to the point speech and the occasional click rang through the air as she moved them. When Caspian said he had no cat in his genes, she snorted lightly. It was hard to believe that when this wolf had just a pointed muzzle and such large, oddly shaped ears. That and he had jewelry. Surely only cats thought they were so amazing as to wear jewelry?

When he spoke of what he was doing, her eyes flickered down to his recent kill and she shrugged off the obvious answer. How was she supposed to know, maybe he'd just been there to eat then.. eat more? Or maybe he wanted to take on the sun, like she did. She couldn't let that happen, no sir.

"My name?" The Mustang grinned widely and stood slowly, flicking her tail in an attempt to appear somewhat threatening. She could after all, break a few bones with a good kick. That wasn't what Espina was after though as she lowered her head and laughed lightly, "My name is Espina, I'm interested in you because I am you." The horse tossed her head again in triumph. She thought what she said was rather fitting and that it sounded rather threatening enough, so she was pleased with herself. Until she realized that she was tossing her head like a child that'd just gotten what they had asked for for from the store.

Her head froze and she whipped her eyes back to Caspian, "Well, I'm not you. I'm like you." Espina's ears hit her head and she sighed, "This conversation isn't making any sense anymore. Look, I'll just show you." Espina shifted into her wolf form, her greasy grey and black fur poking up in odd directions. The large scar that was across her face gleamed lightly in the moonlight now that the sun was gone and she threw her head up, "Most people call me the Pale Shadow because I.." The wolf looked down at her paws, her mouth hanging open for a moment before she sighed, once again angry with herself, "Okay, so they haven't started calling me that just yet.. But they will! I can promise you that much!"

"Another question mutt-do-Caspian," Espina corrected her error in this wolf's name quickly as she spoke, "Think quick. Don't you have a pack? A home? If you do, surly you know the rumors about this place." Espina's head tilted and so far she seemed rather normal, a rare sight with this one.

Before Caspian answered, Espina looked back over her shoulders and growled lightly, "Damn, I missed him." Her gaze flicked back to Caspian and she narrowed her eyes, "You owe me. I've lost now, and it's your fault." Espina had all but forgotten about her previous chase with the sun when she'd said to herself that it was over until tomorrow and she was determined to blame this new mutt-dog for her loss.


Please include an introduction:
Howdy, I'm Zmija! :3

I'm up to any kind of role-play, though fantasy is a huge hook when it comes to my small mind. I'll do any kind of animal role-play out there as long as the plot is interesting, that and I'll also do human RPs! I'm not horribly picky.

I started out role-playing wolves, as I'm sure many of us did, but once I got into human role-play I found a whole different world out there, just waiting for more people! The same happened when I first started role-playing. To tell the truth, I wasn't all that great when I first started, but then I found others, who liked long, detailed posts and they were willing to teach; which is what I'm here to do!

Anyways, what I'm here to teach you to do, is make your character more interesting. I simply adore little character quirks and I'm really into phobias or obsessions in characters. Dull, flat characters, are just never any fun. I'll be here to show you how to make your character more fun so they can be with you for a long time.
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Re: ---The Chicken Smoothie Roleplay School---OPEN

Postby Tyrannia » Thu Apr 14, 2011 12:44 pm

I want to Enroll!


Username: LadyJoe
What level would you say you're at?: Intermediate
What is your Strong Point in RPing?: I would have to say plotting and possibly dialog.
What is your Weak Point?: Describing and interacting. And making bios if that counts
What do you want to improve on the most?: Perhaps the description. And the character making.
What Type of Class do you wish to attend?: Rotation
Have you made Any of your own RPs?: [link]http://www.chickensmoothie.com/Forum/viewtopic.php?f=28&t=514543&p=11730295#p11730295[/link]
Do you RP Animals or Humans?: Normally, I do animals, but I defiantly would enjoy trying out a human role-play.

Please give us an example of a usual RP post from you:

"Bad news soldier, I don't think your going to make it." Hornet's good old bedside manner was kicking in again as she studied the injuries of the femme. She had gotten the worse of the crash, a jagged hole was torn in her side exposing the circuitry and was dripping a disturbing amount of oil and liquid energon. The prospects would be grim anywhere, but were fatal in the current makeshift conditions that the sheltered cave provided. "Now, you are taking it very well. Keep that up. I am going to give you a quick EMP blast. It'll ease the pain. Relax." The Autobot's optics opened wide for a moment, before she slumped over. Mercifully unconscious as her spark faded. Hornet shook her helm sadly before turning to her other two patients. Scouts by the looks of them. Their injuries appeared minor, but she wasn't about to take any chances. Before she could investigate further, a loud explosion rocked the surrounding area. The ship was gone, along with half of their energon supply and any bots who were standing too close. Hornet felt numb with shock could only stare at the pillar of smoke. They were stranded. Trapped on a unknown world with who knew how many cons hunting them. Turning, she looked at her two companions.
"How are you damaged?" She asked dazed, trying to get her mind back on her job.
Formerly known as Guppy, I am apparently having some ego trouble...\

Leaving CS. I have given away all my pets. Hold on, and I'll see what I have in items..
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Re: ---The Chicken Smoothie Roleplay School---OPEN

Postby snowshoe. » Thu Apr 14, 2011 1:06 pm

Can I join?


Username: Captsain
What level would you say you're at?: Intermediate. Ish.
What is your Strong Point in RPing?: Hm... making characters.
What is your Weak Point?: Er, lots of stuff. I can't interact with other characters so much, it's almost like I'm better roleplaying with myself. xD
What do you want to improve on the most?: Yeah, the weak point thing...
What Type of Class do you wish to attend?: Rotation.
Have you made Any of your own RPs?: Nope.
Do you RP Animals or Humans?: Human. Definitely.

Please give us an exmaple of a usual RP post from you: Oh, come on. I can't possibly be that useless, can I? Sindrel thought angrily, his teeth grinding on the sweet cinnamon stick between his lips in frustration. He slammed the door of the tavern he'd just stormed out of with a growl of annoyance, ignoring the surprised looks that he got from the people waiting outside the alehouse, and quickly ducked into one of the quieter alleyways. Rejected again, by the fourth employer that week. Really, he was too stupid to be a stableboy? Being a lookout all night when the moon was full had addled his brain that much? He sighed. Sometimes he missed the simple life he'd had as a sailor, only having to deal with others when his ship docked at a port city, and then before the week was up it was off to the sea again. His lips twinged upwards in a ghost of a smile, all but a sad one. He'd loved that life, but it's impossible to live a sailor's life a thousand years and still love it. Eventually, even the most devoted man would want a change. Thankfully, his crew and comrades understood that, but they'd still hated to see him go, though he had a feeling they knew he had been more reluctant than he'd let on.

Well, it didn't matter now. What's done is done, and there's no reversing it. His ship, along with his first mate as the new captain, had set off for the city of Seyar a few weeks ago, taking any chance would've had to change his mind with them. He shoved his hands into his pockets and kicked a stone out of his way, not particularly concerned where it landed.
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Re: ---The Chicken Smoothie Roleplay School---OPEN

Postby Aғтɛя Ɩ Ғαℓℓ » Thu Apr 14, 2011 1:26 pm

[Okay, here's my student form now too]

I want to Enroll!

Username:
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What level would you say you're at?:
Experience/Literate
What is your Strong Point in RPing?:
Post length/details
What is your Weak Point?:
Characters
What do you want to improve on the most?:
Better personalities and histories or just all round better characters
What Type of Class do you wish to attend?:
Rotation
Have you made Any of your own RPs?:
In the middle of making one but there's this one: Invisible Eye
Do you RP Animals or Humans?:
Both I suppose
Please give us an exmaple of a usual RP post from you:

Ixchel smirked at Matt, holding down another laugh, nodding her head to his comments. "I am so gonna become an actor," She laughed, slapping her knee as she spoke. She breathed out a long sigh, staring at the table, her eyes sparkling. Then. slowly her smile faded as she thought back to her old life back at home. She thought right back to when people fought with her, simply because of her background. Then Chase had came along, defended her. He was liker her life preserver and then he was her boyfriend. He'd follow her around, instinctively jumping in when someone picked a fight to throw at Ixchel. Then he died in a car crash. Ixchel's hand went up to her neck, her fingers lightly curling around the pendant on her necklace. He had given it to her on her birthday, 3 days before the crash.

- Flashback -

I sat on the couch that sat in our personal library, curled up, holding my favorite book open in front of my face. It was an old book called "Mao's Last Dancer". I truly loved this book, devouring it like a hungry lion every time I laid my eyes on it. Now here I was, reading it again. I was immersed in the book as there was a knock at the door. As I closed my book, about to get up, the door opened and I saw Kaitlyn, Chase's older sister came running in, tears streaming down her face. "Kate?" I asked, my voice quavering.
"It's Chase," She choked, grabbing my hand. "He's been in an accident." My eyes grew wide and I followed her in disbelief as she dragged me out of the room and to her car. I offered to drive, as she was to distracted to do so herself. Then I put the pedal down and we zoomed off desperately. I followed Kate's directions, mounting worry weighing me down.
When we got there, we both leaped out of the car, me in front with my fast running pace. I skidded to a halt as a doctor stopped me suddenly, holding my shoulders shaking as I cried, fighting to get past. Kate was by my side, staring at the doctor with shocked eyes. She knew just what the doctor was saying by his eyes. I was still struggling.
"Stop!" He said forcefully, yet gently, holding me back and looking me in the eyes. "There's nothing to be done. He's gone. I'm so terribly sorry." And just like that, I collapsed into Kate's arms, the both of us just crying our eyes out.

- 3 weeks later -
Now, I stood amongst the small crowd that had gathered for Chase's funeral, blankly listening to the priest bless him. I stood in small heeled shoes and a black, sleeved dress just below the knee. My hair was loose and my fingers were touching my necklace of which Chase had given me. I watched now, as his coffin was lowered into the pit. Then, the tears rolled down my cheeks for the hundredth time and I choked, burying my face in my father's shoulder. Now, I was alone.
Vulnerable.

- End Of Flashback -

Ixchel stared out into the restaurant blankly, before suddenly snapping back to attention and blinking rapidly. She looked at Matt, forgetting he was there for a moment before sighing.
"So..."
I used to be 'Wing'
A million miles away
Your signal in the distance
To whom it may concern
I think I lost my way
Getting good at starting over
Every time that I return

I'm learning to walk again
I believe I've waited long enough
Where do I begin?
I'm learning to talk again
Can't you see I've waited long enough
Where do I begin?
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Re: ---The Chicken Smoothie Roleplay School---OPEN

Postby Smamm » Thu Apr 14, 2011 1:33 pm

All three accepted!
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Re: ---The Chicken Smoothie Roleplay School---OPEN

Postby Clowesia » Thu Apr 14, 2011 1:56 pm

Okay!
Classes have been decided!


Clowesia's Class
- LadyJoe
- Captsain
- Wing


Wing's Class
- Zmija
- Freakishlyesterday;
- Snow


Zmija's Class
- Skylar
- Srchapin1
- TheEgyptianHyena


Holli's Class
- Darkehtehepic

c:
Once teachers have set up there threads, post them here for their students.
You can then discuss with them the creating of a plot for the RP and so on.
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Re: ---The Chicken Smoothie Roleplay School---OPEN

Postby Smamm » Thu Apr 14, 2011 2:00 pm

Darkehtehepic;;
I've made our thread! |3 I'll go ahead and shoot you a PM and we can discuss a plot! |3
TCSRPS---Holli&Darehtehepic
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Re: ---The Chicken Smoothie Roleplay School---OPEN

Postby Clowesia » Thu Apr 14, 2011 2:13 pm

Wing, Captsain and LadyJoe.
I've set up our thread here: viewtopic.php?p=11908440#p11908440
You've already been given some tasks to complete!
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