The Ledgend of Kie *viscet 2458 tryout* dnp

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Re: The Ledgend of Kie *viscet 2458 tryout* dnp

Postby Prince Audric » Fri May 18, 2018 2:48 pm

Chapter 8: Land of Sand and Lava



“Thank you so much for saving my Daughter, how can I ever repay you? The old viscet said, happily holding his Daughter.

“No need to repay us, it was our duty to help,” Kie said, smiling softly at them.

“Wish there was more people like you,” the man said before he and his Daughter left to go home.

Kie and Alekus looked at each other and then went to the inn to rest before their quest.


The next morning they got up and began their journey. Leaving the city the two began to head for the desert and the Volcanoes that waited for them.

“Do we have enough water? I don't want to get dehydrated out there,” Kie said, looking at Alekus.

“12 flasks each, that should be enough.” Alekus replied, glancing at him and continued walking.

As they walked the grassy plains began to turn into sand, and the trees began to thin out until there was nothing but sand and the blistering sun.

“Ugh! I hate sand!!” Alekus complained as he and Kie walked.

“I do too, but I’m not yelling about it,” Kie countered.

“Sorry, my friends had been kept hostage in a desert, I hate being away from nature, and being here just reminds me of a very rough time in my life,” Alekus confessed, sighing.

“Do you want to talk about it? You don't have to, but it seems to be bothering you,” Kie said.


Alekus sighed softly and nodded. “Then let me start from the beginning.”


“I was born into a Noble family, my father was a head knight, my mother was a Princess. While my mother died when I was very young.” He began, drooping his ears.

“One of my uncles was the Sulton, eh, another name for King in that area. Since he had no male heir, being his nephew, I was in line for the throne.” He explained as he told his story.

“But I didn't want to stay in this kingdom, they were cruel and vile. Even my father was a horrible Viscet. I ran away, I ran as far away as I could. I found my way to Camelot, the rival kingdom from where I came from. Anyway, I hide who I was and I made some close friends,” Alek added as they walked.

“Years down the line, my father found me, and he tried to take me back, but the King of Camelot at the time, protected me as I was a loyal Citizen of his kingdom, as well as the Prince’s best friend,” a soft smile came across Alek’s face.

“Anyway. After he left, me and Prince Mert decided to go hunting, but he made a decision to bring along his fiance and her handmade. About half way into our trip, my father and an army of bandits jumped and captured us, he hoped that by holding my friends hostage he could turn me back to his side, he even tried to marry me off to the same female that my friend was going to marry. But in the end we all escaped… few of us parted ways but the rest we return to Camelot.. Mert was crowned king after his father died..” Alek sighed and shook his head.

“You don't have to continue if you don't want to,” Kie said.

“Thanks Kie,” Alek smiled.


As night fell they set up camp and got some rest, huddling together to stay warm in the freezing desert night. As morning came they both woke and ate some dried meat and fruit, as well as drinking some water. Packing up there camp they continued to make they way threw the desert.

“ How far away is this place?” Kie asked as he sipped on some water

“ I’m not sure… but I’m sure we are getting closer” Alek said

As they walked the sight of smoke began to rise in the air, and it seemed to be getting even hotter then it had been before.

“ Well it’s seems we're almost there” Alek said looking at Kie “ Are you ready?” He asked

“Yes… I'm Ready” Kie replied.

With that the two headed deeper into the lands that turned to more rocky ground as they walked, and soon a land of stone and lava stood before them.

“Yikes, I've never seen so much Lava in my life!” Kie said in a low voice

“ I have “ Alek replied as he motions for Kie to follow.
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Re: The Ledgend of Kie *viscet 2458 tryout* dnp

Postby Prince Audric » Fri May 18, 2018 2:48 pm

Chapter 9: The Final Battle



They soon found a cave that was littered with bones outside. The smell of Sulfur and death was heavy on the air, causing Kie to gag slightly.

“Kie, if I don't make it and you escape, just know it's been an honor to travel with you,” Alekus said looking at Kie.

“And you as well, Alekus… you’re a wonderful friend.” Kie said.

A deafening roar shook the ground as a massive head, then the body of the dragon stepped out of the cave.

The two friends drew their weapons and readied themselves for the fight.

The dragon took a deep breath and let out a breath of fire, hitting the ground right where Kie and Alek had been a moment before.

Kie leapt to one side while Alek went the other way. Kie loaded a crossbow bolt and shot it, the bolt hit the dragon in its left eye and it growled, spinning on Kie and snapping its teeth at him, Kie leaped back, just barely missing being bitten by the massive beast.

Alek took the opportunity to drive his blade into the dragon's right back leg, causing it to roar in pain, as it turned on Alek, Kie had loaded another bolt and shot it, it ripped threw his left wing and stuck there.

The Dragon flapped its wings and flew into the sky, letting out a mighty roar as it prepared to attack, Kie glanced at Alek and then to the cave. Alek got the idea Kie had and they both ran into the cave, inside the dragon wouldn't be able to fly away. They each hid behind some rocks and waited…


The Dragon growled, landing and began stomping into the cave.

Kie having loaded another bolt shot at the dragon again, aiming for his other eye, it met its mark and Alek then rushed out from behind the rock he were he was hideing, muttering something under his breath. Moments later his sword lightened up in a golden light and he swung at the dragon, slicing it deep over its face. It shook in rage and tried to lunge at Alek, who had already moved away.

Kie again shot the dragon, hitting it in the neck this time.

The Dragon turned its head in the direction the bolt had came from and was about to breath fire, but it stopped.

Alek had slipped under it as it was focused on Kie and had driven Excalibur deep into the dragons hide. With one more mighty roar, the dragon fell over and died.

Alek crawled out from under its neck and shook himself. He turned and looked at Kie, his sword still glowing brightly in his left claw.

Kie’s jaw dropped seeing Alekus like this.

“Alek… You’re… Wow… That was.. Amazing,” He said. “How did you move so quickly? A few times I didn't even see you!”

Alek shook his head and chuckled.

“Talent… As well as shadows.. When you can control them it’s easy to simply… Vanish,” He said.

Kie walked over to the dead dragon and looked it over before looking back at Alekus.

“Guess now we can return to the Mages… maybe they'll help now,” he said.

“No… we don't have to.” Alek side jestering behind Kie with his nose where two portals had seemingly been open by the blood of the dragon.


One portal showed a mighty castle, the other showed the Skyline of a city. One to each of their worlds. Alek looked at Kie then back at the Portal.

“Never thought…. Id’ ever get to go home” He said, stepping closer to his own portal.

“Alekus, wait… Please, let's think about this… We can stay here! We won't ever die.. We can be together,” Kie pleaded.

“I’m sorry Kie, but I have friends I miss… Why not come back with me… To my time?” Alek asked.

Kie thought for a moment. “ But…. Will they accept me?”

Alekus chuckled and smiled. “ I'm sure they will, any friend of mine is a friend of theirs,”

“Before we go… Alek… there's something I’ve been meaning to tell you” Kie said, rubbing his neck.

“And what’s that?” Alek turned and looked at the large brown Viscet and blinked, tilting his head.

Kie wasn't sure how to say it so he just come right out and said it.

“I... I love you,” he confessed.
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Re: The Ledgend of Kie *viscet 2458 tryout* dnp

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