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Re: ---The Chicken Smoothie Roleplay School---OPEN

Postby Aғтɛя Ɩ Ғαℓℓ » Tue Apr 12, 2011 4:06 pm

{Just a note: So sorry it is so long! I just chose any random example of my RPing...:/ and I have to go, so I shall fill in my introduction as soon as I get time!}

I want to be a Teacher!

Username:
Ɯιиɢ
How many years have you been RPing for?
One, however I am literate :)
What part of RPing do you speacilize in?
Literate-Advanced [300 - 1000+ words]
Do you own any of your own RPs?:
FireBird {I need to get this up and running again as soon as I have the time, it looked so good! Anyone want to join?}
Are you well versed in the proper use of Spelling and Grammar?:
Yes, I am. [I tend to get a tad annoyed at improper :/]
Do you RP Animals or Human?:
Both, but mostly humans.
Why do you want to be a Teacher?:
I would say I would like to be a teacher, so I can help others like I was helped when I first joined. I think there is a shortage of semi-lit. - literate roleplayers out there, and this would just make it a fun experience for me and the student. Maybe we can create bigger roleplays.
Please give us a RPing example:
Ɯιиɢ wrote:Image
I know what it is to be in need, and I know what it is to have plenty.
I have learned the secret of being content in any and every situation,
Whether well fed or hungry, whether living in plenty or in want.
I can do everything through him who gives me strength.
Philippians 4: 12-13

Chayse Dyre Hunter glanced at all the supernaturals around her, being the youngest girl out of all the females; and yet, half the group were still men.The sun shone on her brown hair that fell in tresses down her back, giving it a glint whenever she moved. Sighing, she looked around at the others before moving on to the corner of the room, near the door. A Jamaican boy looked up at her, nodding slightly. "Hey Hunter, where you going?" He called from across the room.
"Home. I've still got my own family you know. Even if I'm the only supernatural out of them all." The boy, Derice, shrugged very slightly.
"Oh okay, see you sometime tomorrow. Ususal group meet as usual." Chayse did a quick salute to him before opening the door and outside, shaking her hair so it hid her golden, demon eyes. She still had her normal family, with her Dad and Jacob but the supernaturals, they were like her other brothers and sisters. She spent more than half of her time with them now, because they actually understood her. They understood why she was 'dark' and mysterious and didn't just call her that for the sake of it. But people regarded her kind of supernatural, the demon, as cold and unforgiving which wasn't her at all. Chayse was more of the sort of mysterious, dark one but she was still friendly and social. And like the other supernaturals, she couldn't feel emotions which was why she came with them to Fallen.

Looking at her watch, Chayse noticed the time and picked up her pace, about a block away from her home. She remember that a local guy had a party tonight and she, along with a few other supernaturals, had half a mind to go somehow. But that was going to be the easy bit, for Chayse anyway. She had her brother, Jacob, who was the same age as her and who had also merited an invitation. If she begged hard enough, he would let her come but he would make sure she didn't act unusual. He was bound to make sure she wore something that took people's gazes away from her unusual eyes that gave her away and he was going to make sure she didn't set anything to flames. The corners of her lips tilted upwards as she remembered the time when she set something alight using her power that demon's were born with. Pushing the thought to the back of her mind, Chayse turned ninety degrees and into her garage, hearing her brothers music playing inside and her dad in the garage pixing his car. At least they could act normal; Chayse on the other hand...She had no idea how they were so smooth with it. They had a member of the family; who was a demon. A demon and yet, here they were, treating her like any regular girl. But she also figured that they just did that to hide their curiousity. Thinking it over, Chayse realised her father was surely to put up a fight no to let her go, but he didn't understand. She had to find out, she had to find love because she had to prove the people who judged her wrong.

Chayse knew that people were always afraid of what was different, causing them to be afraid of people like her. They were always cautious and suspicious when they saw someone who may have been a supernatural. For instance the other day, a couple looked at her and frowned, before getting up and walking quickly away, glancing over their shoulder. People of Fallen may have been used to her kind but they were still afraid. It was like, they were afraid yet very curious when they saw one, and then the humans had to discover what people like Chayse were.
Chayse opened the door that led into her house, scouting around for her brother. He was obviously getting ready, so there was no chance of asking him about it. Shaking her head, she walked up the stairs to her bedroom, sneaking into Jacob's to double check the message before going to hers. Biting her bottom lip, she considered backing out but then forced herself to go. This was their only chance to show that supernaturals could be like normal beings. Searching around, she found a dress that her mother had given her. Sighing, Chayse got her things ready and walked into the bathroom, stepping into the walm water from the shower and letting it soak her hair. After a good rinse off, she got out of the shower, drying her hair and then curling it quickly before glancing at the makeup. "Oh no..." She muttered, after all, she hated makeup. She spent an extra 15 minutes carefully applying the makeup before slipping on a necklace and earrings. This is not me, she thought glumly as she put on the dress. She looked at herself in the mirror, all dressed up, supressing a sigh before putting her shoes on and walking out the door.

As Chayse walked down the hallway, she walked past her brothers room who gave one look at her before chuckling humorously.
"And where are you going?" He asked with a sheepish grin. She raised her eyebrows at her foster brother, hoping he would get the message. His smile vanished instantly. "Chayse, you know I love you, but no way."
"Oh come on Jacob, let me come with you!"
"No, you know why you can't. People will recognize you." he looked at her with all seriousness and she just looked back with a glare.
"Okay, I did not get dressed up like this just to get declined," She stated fiercly before continuing. "I be good. I'll act normal, I won't set anything alight. Please, this is the only chance supernaturals will have to be normal." He brother ran a hand over his head whilst biting his bottom lip with thought.
"Alright." He said finally and within the next 10 minutes they finally walked out the door. Her dad didn't bother putting up a fight. When they rounded the corner to the party, Jacob looked at Chayse for a split second before walking in, Chayse by his side.

Word Count: 1042


[A reply in this roleplay.]
Please include an introduction:

Well, hello.
My name is Wing, but you can just call me, well, whatever you want really.

Mainly, my genre of RPing is mainly human, but I have done animal RP's in the past too, so I am quite happy with either one of them.I like to roleplay [mostly literate - advanced] realistic scenarios, such as a romance or teenage college, war, fighting, music or something along those lines. However, moreover the realistic style, I do prefer the more fiction styles of writing. An example of this is humans with gifts. Or Assassins, apocolypse, hybrids, new worlds, pirates, wolves and other great things. Anything but Twilight in general. That is a definite no coming from me, but it's just my opinion really. I do enjoy making RP's over just joining them, and they're always bursting with color, or well, creativness.

In general, I help out with lengthening your one liners or so, into a paragraph/s. To do this, I will help you add more description, details, and grammar/punctuation to your posts. Help come up with little twists and quirks that fit into the story of the RP you are in. I can also help [if wished], with creating plots and characters. I have a couple of awesome techniques that I used that may be of help to you too. This will help bring out that spark of creativity and uniqueness that every roleplay longs for. Together, we will bring in all of those long waited for ideas ad turn them into something great!

If in need of help or tutoring hit me with a PM, I am happy to do private tutoring as well!
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I used to be 'Wing'
A million miles away
Your signal in the distance
To whom it may concern
I think I lost my way
Getting good at starting over
Every time that I return

I'm learning to walk again
I believe I've waited long enough
Where do I begin?
I'm learning to talk again
Can't you see I've waited long enough
Where do I begin?
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Re: ---The Chicken Smoothie Roleplay School---OPEN

Postby *Skylar The Plant* » Tue Apr 12, 2011 4:30 pm

I want to Enroll!


Username: *Skylar The Plant*
What level would you say you're at?: Intermediate
What is your Strong Point in RPing?: Possibly my characters, they can be fairly unique, though if not that it would be
What is your Weak Point?: Displaying emotion and using larger more detailed words.
What do you want to improve on the most?: Emotion
What Type of Class do you wish to attend?: Rotation
Have you made Any of your own RPs?: Yes I have: The Walk Into Darkness, My Life, My Way, C o c k r o a c h Waltz, Never Neverland, [Co-owned by Tanited Blood] School Of Rockstars and A Fluffy Sort Of Fandom
Do you RP Animals or Humans?: I roleplay both, but I prefer to roleplay humans. Though if it's a unique sort of animal I don't mind.

Please give us an exmaple of a usual RP post from you:
*Skylar The Plant* wrote:
Kihao

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Up to his knee's in cold water, Kihao scrambled through it, a sharpened stick in his hand, his teeth biting into his pale lips as his crimson eyes narrowed carefully. His bare feet were perched carefully on a submerged rock and he tightened his grip around his make-shift spear. A small sigh escaped him as he watched, his eyes flashed as he saw movement, long and thin, a wicked grin covered his face and his hand flashed forward, the spear making a splash as it hit the water and pierced the shadow.

"'Bout damn time" Kihao hissed at himself, his white hair was pulled back into a un-neat pony tail with a vine as the hair tie, he frowned slightly and pulled his spear out of the water to gaze upon the fish, he smiled smugly, it was a good size and texture. He lightly began to struggle his way back to the bank, the current pulling at his legs, threatening to pull him back into the water, he let out a sneeze, feeling quite cold as he pulled himself out of the water and onto the bank. He lightly stood up straightly and stretched his free arm in front of him and cracked his shoulder, he blinked a few times, his dirty crimson eyes narrowing, everything was still a slight blur, being bad sighted in a place like this was never a good thing. He pulled his spear closer to himself and gazed at the fish, admiring what he could see of it, a blur of light gold scales and huge things that blurred into a darker more vibrant colour of gold.

Kihao admired his catch for a few more seconds before he lightly slung his spear over his shoulder and kept walking back into the deep undergrowth, his eyes narrowing as he watched carefully and warily, his teeth clenching as he creeped through a large broard leafed bush. Have they left yet? He asked himself and grit his teeth warily as he made his way back to the camp. His free hand ran through his snowy white hair and he let out a small sigh as he kept walking. His bare feet had small cuts on the soles from fishing in the dirty creek/stream, he put on a sour expression eager to sit down and rest his feet. He lightly brushed his hand down his bare chest, he was very pale, just bordering on being muscular and thin. A small smirk was on his face as he finally reached the camp, he felt like his fish was quite fine, though he looked around, squinting his eyes to try and to see if anyone else was there, he sighed, feeling quite fed up with having to squint. He lightly hooked his fish and pulled it off the spear, getting a squirt of blood all over his hands, he cringed at the warm wet blood all over his hand, he hated the feel of that and found it disgusting.

"Feral little fish" Kihao growled moodily and narrowed his eyes at the golden fish before quickly walking carefully and sitting down on the ground, placing his fish in front of him to admire it more. His crimson eyes narrowed softly and a small smile lit his pale and drawn face, he looked quite tired, he stretched his arms above of his head in a stretch and yawned, blinking a few times, he knew he couldn't go to sleep right now, their was too much to do. He relaxed his broad tense shoulders and then reached toward the fish, examining it with his fingers, feeling the death wound he had made going through the back of the fishes head, he sighed, it was a good place for a wound, it wouldn't affect the meat of the fish at all.

"Hhmm" Kihao hummed and then lightly put his fish to his side, still felling quite proud of himself, hough his eyes narrowed warily he let out a huff and slumped his shoulders. He brushed his fingers through his snowy hair, making sure it wouldn't go over his eyes, making his vision more obscured then it already was. A lightly bit the side of his cheek and scratched his cheek at the same time, finding waiting quite tedious, he was tempted to eat his fish, or at least hide it, he almost too proud of it to eat it.


[Written in reply to The Hunt]
I am a Contemporary artist, majoring in painting and sculpture.
You can check out my work here: https://www.instagram.com/sky.l.art/

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Re: ---The Chicken Smoothie Roleplay School---OPEN

Postby WalkerNom » Tue Apr 12, 2011 9:53 pm

I am so happy to see so many people enrolling already! Personally, I didn't think that anyone would be interested to learn, but the thing is, it won't be boring I promise! I plan to join as a teacher as soon as I have some time on my hands!

@Zmija; I don't think teachers will have to enroll as students as well...I think that the teachers will learn with their students from time to time.
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Re: ---The Chicken Smoothie Roleplay School---OPEN

Postby Smamm » Wed Apr 13, 2011 7:38 am

Zmija;;
Yes, you may enroll to join other classes as well as teaching your own. |3

Everyone else, accepted! Adding you to the front!
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Re: ---The Chicken Smoothie Roleplay School---OPEN

Postby SnowFlies » Wed Apr 13, 2011 7:40 am

I want to Enroll!


Username: Snow Watcher
What level would you say you're at?: Intermediate
What is your Strong Point in RPing?: Probably emotions, I'm not really sure >.<
What is your Weak Point?: Character forms (mostly), detailed words ((again, I'm not entirely sure))
What do you want to improve on the most?: Different personalities of characters
What Type of Class do you wish to attend?: Rotation
Have you made Any of your own RPs?: Old RP . . . died ages ago viewtopic.php?f=28&t=118684
Do you RP Animals or Humans?: Humans mostly, in the past most of the RPs I joined are hybrid related.

Please give us an exmaple of a usual RP post from you: (Most recent post)
Dom Cobb ran his hand through his hair in nervous habit as he watched his spinning totem, this job could get him home, he might be able to see his children again. Then again, being the horrible possibility, he might not. As he watched the small spinning object,he only hoped that these thoughts were part of a dream, that he wasn't a wanted man and that when he woke up he would see their faces again.

And then the spinning came to a stop.

The young man let a quiet sigh escape him as he closed his eyes. He could only hope. It was the only thing he could do.

"Cobb, are you okay?"

He looked up and his gaze travelled across the room to an old friend who was sitting in a white plastic chair, leaning back in it but not far enough to topple over. Dom forced a small smile at the British colleague. "I'm fine Eames," he nodded slightly in reassurance, to Eames or to himself he didn't know. He looked upwards at the high ceiling before finishing his sentence, "just thinking things through."

Before Eames could say anything else the sound of a key turning in the lock rung out through the warehouse, and the British man glanced at his watch. "It's half seven, I presume one of your chosen crew is here." He stood continuously rubbing a poker chip as he watched the door.

"Those aren't going to breed you know."

"How would you know?" Eames sent him a pointed look before his gaze travelled back to the door as it opened. And then of all people Eames didn't expect to come through the door was Arthur. A smug smile was on the Brit's lips as Arthur placed down the case on the table, it seemed like he hadn't noticed Cobb and himself. "Cobb? Did you mention to me that I would be working with this stick in the mud?" Eames was now standing a mere meter away from Arthur, his insult counting as a "hello".

"Arthur, it's good to see you again." Cobb nodded towards him as a formal greeting compared to Eames' one. A few minuets later another person came through the door. Dom remembered her name was Narkissa, he found that out while asking her to join the team. Apparently she was a good chemist, which was why he went to her, it was just what they needed. "Narkissa, welcome. This is Arthur our Pointman, and Eames our Forger." He gestured to each of them in turn, while wondering if the two were going to get into an argument any time soon. It was probably a good idea that the two of them should say hello to her as Dom could see she seemed a bit shy, it would hopefully make it easier for her.

Now the only people left were Ariadne and Andrea, and the only question that could be asked was where were they? Well it was obvious the two of them were late, being it 7:45. The discussion of the job would have to be postponed until the two arrived.
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Re: ---The Chicken Smoothie Roleplay School---OPEN

Postby Aғтɛя Ɩ Ғαℓℓ » Wed Apr 13, 2011 9:46 am

[Finished my form!]
I used to be 'Wing'
A million miles away
Your signal in the distance
To whom it may concern
I think I lost my way
Getting good at starting over
Every time that I return

I'm learning to walk again
I believe I've waited long enough
Where do I begin?
I'm learning to talk again
Can't you see I've waited long enough
Where do I begin?
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Re: ---The Chicken Smoothie Roleplay School---OPEN

Postby Smamm » Wed Apr 13, 2011 9:52 am

Wing;;
Thank you!

Snow Watcher;;
Accepted! Thank you for joining!

I think we have enough enrolled to start a class or two. |3 You all like human roleplays, so maybe we could decide on what genre of human RP you like best and start one or two up? |3
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Re: ---The Chicken Smoothie Roleplay School---OPEN

Postby dessia » Wed Apr 13, 2011 11:10 am

I want to Enroll!


Username: schapin1
What level would you say you're at?: (Beginner/Intermediate/Experience) Beginner...I've never Rp'ed before!
What is your Strong Point in RPing?: Well, I use lots of details when I write...
What is your Weak Point?: Introducing places and characters into a story
What do you want to improve on the most?: My weak point
What Type of Class do you wish to attend?: (Rotation/Stereotypical) Rotation
Have you made Any of your own RPs?: (Please link us if you have.) No
Do you RP Animals or Humans?: (If you have a preferance for a certain type of RP, please tell us.) Either is fine.

Please give us an exmaple of a usual RP post from you:
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Re: ---The Chicken Smoothie Roleplay School---OPEN

Postby VesVes » Wed Apr 13, 2011 1:23 pm

I want to Enroll!


Username: The Egyptian Hyena
What level would you say you're at?: Most likely beginner.
What is your Strong Point in RPing?: Creating my characters, and writing their profiles.
What is your Weak Point?: Post length, for sure.
What do you want to improve on the most?: Definitely the quality and quantity of my RP posts.
What Type of Class do you wish to attend?: Rotation.
Have you made Any of your own RPs?: Not that I remember of.
Do you RP Animals or Humans?: Animals, especially hyenas and big cats.

Please give us an exmaple of a usual RP post from you:
(Quoted from Running Wild: An African Savannah RP)
Tumbleweed whooped her hyena call to no one in particular. She was merely curious if anyone will answer. And to see if they have any food with them. If so, I want some. I am still hungry, and there's no vultures in sight. She whooped again, a steady woooo-uuupp.
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Re: ---The Chicken Smoothie Roleplay School---OPEN

Postby Smamm » Thu Apr 14, 2011 9:42 am

Both accepted! Adding to the front!
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