FLYBOY wrote:It's recognizable as an otter, so that's good! A lot of suits of less common animals look too much like dogs or cats, but I could tell this was an otter before I read the caption.
I'm not a maker so I don't really have any tips for changing/fixing things, just some things that jumped out at me -
The upper bridge of the nose/eyebrow on one side looks a little bit asymmetrical, I don't know how practical it is to fix that but it would probably look better if you can!
Also, the cheeks look a little undefined, for lack of a better word? Exaggerating the proportions of the cheeks a bit can make a lot of fursuits look super cute.
And the smile line of the mouth could probably be a little more defined? But I'm not sure how that will look with fur.
Again, I'm not a maker, so these might not be the most constructive comments, whoops. But hopefully it helped! It looks really good overall. You said it's your first, right? Because it looks amazing for a first head ^^
Alrighty!!
So, 1st: I don't know if I'll be able to fix the fact that it's a bit asymmetrical, but I can definitely try to!
2nd: Hmm, true true! However I think currently the puffiness of the cheeks fits the character
(drawing of the character can be found here)3rd: Haha, about that, it's actually not supposed to necessarily be a "smile" more of like, when you make the oooo sound-does that make sense? xD
4th: Not necessarily my first suit, I've made one before (partial), however this is going to be my first FULL suit :3
And lastly, thank you so much for the criticism! Even if you're not a maker it especially helps because you have the view of a customer, and in the future I actually wanna try doing commissions c:
EDIT] Forgot pic, of character, here it is.
