Oh my goodness! The drawing is so fabulous and detailed. How can you draw so good on computerrrrrr?! XDDD (I always rush too much or want to give up because I'm tried of looking at the screen. XD)
And the story is su su su coooooooooooooooooooot. Seriously. I LOVE IT. XD Ghirahim sounds so cute, looking at birds and stuff. ^.^ Fi and Ghirahim would be a cute couple. <3