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Postby recherché. » Mon Mar 05, 2018 11:14 am

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Name; Neve.
Gender; Female.
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Art + Cropping; Vanillasaur
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Punished Goddess ❄ History and Personality

Postby recherché. » Mon Mar 05, 2018 11:16 am

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`Neve's biggest part of her history is her twin sister, Arella, with whom she had been very attached to the
point where they were nearly inseparable. Whenever she was in any sort of danger her sister was always there
to protect her. Oftentimes, the two of them could be found hanging out at the stream while Neve used her still-
limited knowledge of her abilities to create little shapes of ice from the water and throw snowballs at each
other. Those were the memories that she missed most deeply. Snow angels and snowmen, anything you could
do with snow, they did together. They were a duo that did everything together and always stayed with each other
no matter what. Neve and Arella would just laugh about dumb things and joke together while playing with their
food, and occasionally play pranks on each other. Neve's childhood were filled with her happiest moments, and
she cherished them. On hot summer days, they would just sit in the house with fans blowing, eating the frozen
goodies that Neve created with syrup and ice; her favorite treat to share with her sister. They had some harsh
times too, like the time Arella laughed at Neve for getting stung by a bee, and the time Neve accidentally covered Arella's bedroom in snow and ruined everything in it. But there wasn't a single sign of hatred nor jealousy yet. The two were still as close as ever and still had so much love to share. Years went by with no problems whatsoever, until it became apparent that only one of them could succeed.
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Punished Goddess ❄ Continued

Postby recherché. » Mon Mar 05, 2018 11:28 am

And then Neve started being overlooked when they grew up, which bothered her greatly. In everybody's eyes, Neve was the mere shadow of the golden goddess, completely eclipsed by her sister’s brilliance. All she had ever hoped for was to have a little bit of attention, but it seemed that could never happen with the dazzling sister of hers that was always around. In all honesty, she just wanted her sister out of her life. However, many would have seen Neve's feelings of being overlooked as exaggerated because she definitely had attention- just a normal, run-of-the-mill member of society comparing herself to a sister that was someone. Neve’s memories of getting along with her twin sister started to fade as the two grew more and more distant, to Neve’s dismay. The collapse of what had been hurt her so much. She kept getting abandoned by her friends in pursuance her sister, who in turn was taking away the attention that Neve so desperately craved. Whenever they would have company over, her father would always be swept into a five minute exaltation about Arella and then unenthusiastically introduce Neve, which pushed Neve further into resentment. This went on for years, and she had become tired of being outshined by her own sister. This caused Neve to act on her wildest impulses, getting to the point where she could barely control herself anymore. The fact that her sister just abandoned her tore her heart into pieces.
All Neve wants now is to have her sister back now that she understands her mistakes.
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Punished Goddess ❄ Abillities

Postby recherché. » Mon Mar 05, 2018 11:37 am

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Neve is in total control of her powers now and she definitely loves them, but it wasn't always like that.
It all started when she was younger and slowly learning how to control them so she could take her father's
place when it came to controlling the weather, but her jealousy ruined that. The word that she would use
to describe how she felt about her abilities in the past would be horrid because they never worked out for
her. She was always doing things on impulse instead of thinking before using them like how she was taught.
While she was learning to use them, she upset the gods of the enchanted forest by lying about her sister's
banishment and acting as if she didn't know what happened. Fortunately, the forest gods saw past those lies
and knew about Neve banishing Arella, but they gave her a chance to speak the truth and she continued to
lie as Neve's rumors of Arella leaving on her own and abandoning her goddess duties continued to spread.
Since lying was forbidden in the God Codes, she was sent to live in isolation in a forest as punishment.
As Neve was the daughter of the god of weather, she had other abilities waiting for her in the future, but
as punishment for lying about her sister, those abilities were also stripped. While in isolation, Neve practiced
and practiced at mastering her abilities so she could return to her village and return everything to normal. And
that's exactly what she did. Managing to return back to her realm with her abilities, she was immediately
recognized. The one sentence that completely set her off and changed her whole attitude, "I know you! You're
the kid who brought shame to your family and our village!" Neve wasn't happy, so she had to redeem herself.

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Re: Punished Goddess ❄ Continued

Postby recherché. » Mon Mar 05, 2018 1:46 pm

Neve really couldn't believe that's how she was remembered? As the girl who shamed her family? This was greatly upsetting to her. But she couldn't dwell on the statement since everybody around seemed to be in shock that she was back and even more powerful than she was before. Her aura was definitely more intimidating than it was when she was a child. At the moment, Neve didn't have any intentions of taking over the village, but once she noticed that all the attention wasn't on her, she couldn't handle it. She wanted people to acknowledge her presence so she did just as she should; blanketing everything in thick ice. The other gods didn't think anything of it because they just decided on ignoring Neve and waiting the ice out, but unfortunately for them the ice wasn't leaving anytime soon. They started growing weak and hungry without any food to eat, so they had to beg Neve to unfreeze everything, which she gladly did with their promise of submission. Now, this goddess rules upon the village in peace and harmony, but her heart still remains broken from the loss of her sister since the one thing she can't do is bring her back from the mortal world.
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Re: Punished Goddess ❄ Instant Regret

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