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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Chara Dreemurr » Mon Apr 04, 2011 2:35 am

I think the sounds are what makes it freaky.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby lkjhgfdsamnbvcxz » Mon Apr 04, 2011 3:42 am

OK, so I'll tell you what happened to me and my family a few years ago. It's not too scary, just really weird. 100% real.

I live in Poland. Me, my younger sister & cousin, my father, aunt and uncle were all going to my grandmother's house in Toruń by car. We stopped by an old place, something like a small town for tourists (I have no idea how to say this is English), where were houses with straw roofs. There were some fun activities to do there, like shooting with bows to targets and moulding dishes out of clay. The owner of this place was a very old man, with a gray beard which was so long that it almost touched the ground. He was wearing a shirt with some strange signs on it. My sister and cousin, they both were 6-7 years old then, got bored of moulding dishes quickly and started playing with the man - they were casting spells like "Abracadara, a crab's leg, you'll turn into a frog!" (it was in Polish, of course). The man was imitating animals which my sister and cousing "turned" him into. He also casted a spell... I remember it clearly: "Tonight, you all will turn into bats!". Of course no one took it seriously. After some time, we left the "town", got back into the car and continued our journey to Toruń.
When we arrived, it was 20 o'clock. We were tired and had to go to bed. Our grandma's apartment was very small and had only five rooms (including bathroom and kitchen) and two bedrooms. Me, my cousin and sister all slept in one small bedroom with two beds. My grandmother - in the second bedroom. My father and uncle slept in a different apartment next to ours (it belonged to my grandma's friend who was away and agreed to lend it to us), because there wasn't enough space in just one tiny apartment.
When I got up in the morning, I realized that I am in a different room! I asked my grandma what happened. That's what she told me...
In the middle of the night, some strange noises coming out of our room woke her up. She came there to check what's going on and saw something like a huge butterfly tangled in the curtains. It was flapping its wings very quickly and screeching loudly! One closer look showed that... it was a huge bat!! The creepy thing was that the window was opened - and she didn't open it in the evening! She got scared and called my uncle and father, sleeping next door. She told them to come in quickly, but they got angry at her for waking them up at 3:00 and put away the phone. They thought she was kidding. So, she called them once more. This time, they finally came to us. They were really shocked! They released the bat and watched as it flew away somewhere. Then, they moved us to a different room (we were all sleeping and not aware of what was happening). After all this action, they told grandma about the old man and his spell. My grandmother was really shocked, too: she lived in this apartment for 50 years and there have NEVER been ANY bats around her area...

Weird! (we were lucky not to actually turn into bats! XD)

Oh, and sorry for my English, you know, I am still not perfect at writing in this language xP
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby .::Fallen~Spirits::. » Mon Apr 04, 2011 3:45 am

Thats really wierd with the pressure in the chest thing because that happend to me four times in my house up in penslyvania. It started when i took my first trip there.we only had four beds and they didnt have blankets so we used towles.(that doesnt have to do with anything.) and the house was real crappy so we fixed it up.at night i had to sleep close to the closet with one really creepy dress.at night i let out a small cough,due to my chest witch hurt(sry i cant spell) and i felt like i couldn't breath.(and if you read the other story i posted about the grim reaper in my room in NJ then this will make sense.) i opend my eyes but couldn't see anything but then the reaper walked out of the closet.(this may be hard to belive but it is true.)and i felt like screaming cause the last time i saw it was about two years ago and i thought it was a dream.when i tryed to scream nothing came out so i said "go away......i dont need to die." in my head and everything was gone.the next year i bought my friend stephanie up with me.we slept in bunk beds and she was in the same exact spot where it happend to me.the next moring she woke me up,terriphyed,and was crying about somthing was chocking her and she saw a black hooded figure.the next year i had my friends tyler and kali over.tyler slept on the reaper bunk(i called it) and i couldn't sleep.okay i have a crush on him so i stayed up.soon i heard a cough.i looked over and didn't see anything so i layed down again.but soon i heard a small yelp and i jumped out of the top bunk and over to kali.she woke up and said she didn't see anything,so i ran over to tyler.he let out a small help so i started to yell GET AWAY FROM MY FRIENDS GET AWAY FROM THIS PLACE GET AWAY!soon after tyler recoverd and my parents didnt wake up.the next day kali slept on that bunk and didn't get hurt but dreamed of a ride we just had gone to called the reapers revenge and she said all the people were real instead of actors and all where looking at ME.
Shiprecked in a sea of faces,
Theres a dreamy world up there,
Dear friends in higher places,
Carry me away from here,
Travel light,Let the sun eclispe you,
Cause your flight is about to leave,
Theres more to this brave adventure,
That youd ever belive,
Birds eye veiw,
Awake the stars cause there all around you,
Wide eyes will always brighten the blue,
Chase your dreams,
And remember me,
Cause sweet bravery,
Cause after all those wings will take you up so high,
So bid the forest floor good bye,
As you race through the winds and,
Take to the sky.

I used to be Cynderx3 But now Im Fallen~Spirits

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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby indefinite. » Mon Apr 04, 2011 4:56 am

Cloudy-Wolf wrote:
.:dragonfly:. wrote:Ok, I will post one of mine now ^.^ that was a pretty good one.

New Doll.

A young girl named Molly went was walking down the street with her mother when in the window of a shop a beautiful doll caught her eye. Molly behed her mother to buy her it and of cours. She did. Molly brought home the doll and played with it all day. When night came, Molly left her new doll at the bottom of the stairs before she went up to bed and quickly fell asleep.

A couple minutes later Molly woke up to the sound of a voice.
"Molly I'm on the first step"
Molly was alittle frightened but she fell back asleep.

A couple minutes later Molly woke up to the sound of a voice.
"Molly I'm on the Third step"

Molly was more frightened but she fell back asleep.

A couple minutes later Molly woke up to the sound of a voice.
"Molly I'm on the Sixth step"
Molly was very frightened but she pulled the covers over her head and fell back asleep.

A couple minutes later Molly woke up to the sound of a voice.
"Molly I'm on the last step"
Molly was shaking with fear she closed her eyes very tight and sat there with the covers over her head.

A couple minutes later Molly hear the sound of a voice.
"Molly I'm on your bed."
Molly looked out from under the cover to see her dolly standing on the edge of the bed.

"Molly I'm going to kill you."

In the morning Molly's mother went in her room to wake her. She discovered the blood smeared bed and outside the window was little Molly hanging dead from the tree. The doll sat on the window sill smiling her evil smile.


Only that scared me. *looks around at stuffed animals and dolls* darn, I'm in trouble. :shock:


My way is different.

One day a little girl named molly was walking past a doll store. She saw a big and beautiful doll house and she went inside to see it. She opened it up and found a doll sitting. She asked her mom for it and she said yes. She took the doll home and set it on the kitchen table . Molly and her mom went to bed.

Later that night Molly heard voices " molly I'm on the first step. Molly I'm on the second step. Molly I'm on the third step."
She went to her moms room and said " mommy I'm hearing things"
" it's just your imagination so go back to bed"
Molly went back to bed and she heard it again " Molly I'm on the fourth step. Molly I'm on the fifh step. Molly I'm on the sixth step.
She went to her moms room and said "mommy I'm hearing things"
" it's just a bad dream now go to sleep"
Molly went back to her room and heard more " molly I'm onthe seventh step. Molly I'm on the eighth step. Molly I'm on the ninth step"
She went to her moms room and said " MOMMY I'm seriously hearing things"
" go to bed and don't get up again molly"
Molly went back to bed and she heard more" molly I'm on the tenth step. Molly I'm on he eleventh step. Molly I'm on he twelth step "
She was about to go to her moms room when she remembers she had to stay and she heard more" molly I'm in the hallway. Molly I'm bythe bathroom. Molly I'm by your moms room. Molly I'm in your moms room. Molly your mom is dead."
She ran to her moms room and saw her mom beaten and bloody. She wasn't breathing. Moy ran back to her room and hid under he covers crying. Then she heard more " molly I'm out of your moms room. Molly I'm by your room. Molly I'm in your room. Molly your dead"
And Molly was dead
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby lkjhgfdsamnbvcxz » Mon Apr 04, 2011 5:27 am

cynderx3 wrote:Thats really wierd with the pressure in the chest thing because that happend to me four times in my house up in penslyvania. It started when i took my first trip there.we only had four beds and they didnt have blankets so we used towles.(that doesnt have to do with anything.) and the house was real crappy so we fixed it up.at night i had to sleep close to the closet with one really creepy dress.at night i let out a small cough,due to my chest witch hurt(sry i cant spell) and i felt like i couldn't breath.(and if you read the other story i posted about the grim reaper in my room in NJ then this will make sense.) i opend my eyes but couldn't see anything but then the reaper walked out of the closet.(this may be hard to belive but it is true.)and i felt like screaming cause the last time i saw it was about two years ago and i thought it was a dream.when i tryed to scream nothing came out so i said "go away......i dont need to die." in my head and everything was gone.the next year i bought my friend stephanie up with me.we slept in bunk beds and she was in the same exact spot where it happend to me.the next moring she woke me up,terriphyed,and was crying about somthing was chocking her and she saw a black hooded figure.the next year i had my friends tyler and kali over.tyler slept on the reaper bunk(i called it) and i couldn't sleep.okay i have a crush on him so i stayed up.soon i heard a cough.i looked over and didn't see anything so i layed down again.but soon i heard a small yelp and i jumped out of the top bunk and over to kali.she woke up and said she didn't see anything,so i ran over to tyler.he let out a small help so i started to yell GET AWAY FROM MY FRIENDS GET AWAY FROM THIS PLACE GET AWAY!soon after tyler recoverd and my parents didnt wake up.the next day kali slept on that bunk and didn't get hurt but dreamed of a ride we just had gone to called the reapers revenge and she said all the people were real instead of actors and all where looking at ME.


Is it real? If it is, the place must've been really haunted, then...
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby 00000000 » Mon Apr 04, 2011 7:32 am

askalka wrote:
cynderx3 wrote:Thats really wierd with the pressure in the chest thing because that happend to me four times in my house up in penslyvania. It started when i took my first trip there.we only had four beds and they didnt have blankets so we used towles.(that doesnt have to do with anything.) and the house was real crappy so we fixed it up.at night i had to sleep close to the closet with one really creepy dress.at night i let out a small cough,due to my chest witch hurt(sry i cant spell) and i felt like i couldn't breath.(and if you read the other story i posted about the grim reaper in my room in NJ then this will make sense.) i opend my eyes but couldn't see anything but then the reaper walked out of the closet.(this may be hard to belive but it is true.)and i felt like screaming cause the last time i saw it was about two years ago and i thought it was a dream.when i tryed to scream nothing came out so i said "go away......i dont need to die." in my head and everything was gone.the next year i bought my friend stephanie up with me.we slept in bunk beds and she was in the same exact spot where it happend to me.the next moring she woke me up,terriphyed,and was crying about somthing was chocking her and she saw a black hooded figure.the next year i had my friends tyler and kali over.tyler slept on the reaper bunk(i called it) and i couldn't sleep.okay i have a crush on him so i stayed up.soon i heard a cough.i looked over and didn't see anything so i layed down again.but soon i heard a small yelp and i jumped out of the top bunk and over to kali.she woke up and said she didn't see anything,so i ran over to tyler.he let out a small help so i started to yell GET AWAY FROM MY FRIENDS GET AWAY FROM THIS PLACE GET AWAY!soon after tyler recoverd and my parents didnt wake up.the next day kali slept on that bunk and didn't get hurt but dreamed of a ride we just had gone to called the reapers revenge and she said all the people were real instead of actors and all where looking at ME.


Is it real? If it is, the place must've been really haunted, then...

Personally, I don't believe in hauntings - like with mine, I'll say that there's a reasonable explanation; you're dreaming. Simply enough.
I felt my "ghosts" when I were tired - too tired to actually feel tired.
Cynder saw hers when she had just woken up - or it could very well be a dream. So, if we say that there are more stages, between the REM state, sleeping state and the state where you are awake. And you could easily be dreaming the same thing over and over again. I - for an example - have the same nightmare almost every night. And I don't think it's impossible to make others believe that they have dreamt the same thing. It is so easy to manipulate with other people's minds, that it's almost ridiculous.

Über bummer to all who believe in ghosts and doesn't like that theory, but this is what I believe.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby .::Fallen~Spirits::. » Mon Apr 04, 2011 7:43 am

well im not kidding.its true.ive seen it and felt it and im not kidding
Shiprecked in a sea of faces,
Theres a dreamy world up there,
Dear friends in higher places,
Carry me away from here,
Travel light,Let the sun eclispe you,
Cause your flight is about to leave,
Theres more to this brave adventure,
That youd ever belive,
Birds eye veiw,
Awake the stars cause there all around you,
Wide eyes will always brighten the blue,
Chase your dreams,
And remember me,
Cause sweet bravery,
Cause after all those wings will take you up so high,
So bid the forest floor good bye,
As you race through the winds and,
Take to the sky.

I used to be Cynderx3 But now Im Fallen~Spirits

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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby 00000000 » Mon Apr 04, 2011 7:49 am

cynderx3 wrote:well im not kidding.its true.ive seen it and felt it and im not kidding

I've also seen and felt my "ghosts" - heck, I've been "hugged" by one in my sleep. But I've also seen and felt myself getting eaten practically every night as a kiddo, during my nightmares. I've also felt the cramps you have, when you dream that you are falling down from a high place.
And that is exactly why I wrote it. Be cause your mind makes you think that you've seen, felt, heard, smelled and tasted it. Everything that's going on with your body, is connected to the brain. Therefore, why shouldn't it be possible to feel things in their sleep? Just think about it.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Pika~Kirby » Mon Apr 04, 2011 7:51 am

can not read it
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Chara Dreemurr » Mon Apr 04, 2011 1:32 pm

Mikas wrote:
cynderx3 wrote:well im not kidding.its true.ive seen it and felt it and im not kidding

I've also seen and felt my "ghosts" - heck, I've been "hugged" by one in my sleep. But I've also seen and felt myself getting eaten practically every night as a kiddo, during my nightmares. I've also felt the cramps you have, when you dream that you are falling down from a high place.
And that is exactly why I wrote it. Be cause your mind makes you think that you've seen, felt, heard, smelled and tasted it. Everything that's going on with your body, is connected to the brain. Therefore, why shouldn't it be possible to feel things in their sleep? Just think about it.


Dogs seem to be replaying their day in their sleep. ^____^
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