- Hello everyone; I’m a bit new here!
I’m nev, or naomi; just posted my form on the other thread!
I recently wrote a poem, and I’d love some people to read it/critique! Should I post it here, or show it to whoever is interested through PM? <;
LeiaWolfe wrote:Hello everybody!!
What did I miss? XD I'm in Japan now for a holiday so I couldn't reply to anything whilst on the plane from Australia-Singapore-Japan.
But Japan has actualy inspired me about what to write next - for example-
-It has a chilling sort of cold that runs right through everything and makes it cold
-It has cupboards for blankets that you can hang out/sleep in (a secret portal in a book?)
-The overall style of Japanese houses (some paper walls etc. - you might be able to walk through them in a book to another destination?)
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This kind of thing, lol.
Oh, and I was at Singapore airport for a couple hours too
-Beautiful and creative decorations around the place (could write this for an unusual destination the character has never been to)
-A humid sort of weather
-Everything is a city! (Again, maybe a strange destinaion the character hasn't seen)
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Soooo yeah. Am I taking this too seriously?
middle earth. wrote:LeiaWolfe wrote:Hello everybody!!
What did I miss? XD I'm in Japan now for a holiday so I couldn't reply to anything whilst on the plane from Australia-Singapore-Japan.
But Japan has actualy inspired me about what to write next - for example-
-It has a chilling sort of cold that runs right through everything and makes it cold
-It has cupboards for blankets that you can hang out/sleep in (a secret portal in a book?)
-The overall style of Japanese houses (some paper walls etc. - you might be able to walk through them in a book to another destination?)
-
This kind of thing, lol.
Oh, and I was at Singapore airport for a couple hours too
-Beautiful and creative decorations around the place (could write this for an unusual destination the character has never been to)
-A humid sort of weather
-Everything is a city! (Again, maybe a strange destinaion the character hasn't seen)
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Soooo yeah. Am I taking this too seriously?how did you find singapore airport? XD
LeiaWolfe wrote:Wait, what? Is the poll suggesting people are already off holidays now?
Spotted.Newt wrote:Does anyone have any tips for describing movement? I have a dance scene I want to write, but I don't seem to have the words.
Lovely poem Naomi! I am usually partial to poetry so thick with symbolism that it is hard to say for sure what is real, but I enjoyed reading your poem. I particularly liked the wording you chose in the second column. I shall read it again in a bit and then say more, as is my custom with poetry, to find my deeper takeaways. First impression: lovely.
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