Rate The Character Above You V.6 (Rule Changes p.735)

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Re: Rate The Character Above You V.6 (Rule Changes p.735)

Postby Cruxich » Sun Dec 24, 2017 5:53 am

8/10 Actually, I genuinely love the choice of colors on here. The teal adds a bit of unnatural color to her and it's not too saturated or stuck out that it could divert your attention to it first. Overall, I love her but think she could maybe use a few accessories since she's plain. But, that's just me.

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She was a old oc I had for several years for Wolf's Rain, but I've fallen out of favor with that. Never developed her, but the raven necklace around her has the ability to heal any type of wound or revive a recently dead person, but the power is very limited and takes a long while to recharge. Also, she's blind in her right eye which is why it's grey.
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Re: Rate The Character Above You V.6 (Rule Changes p.735)

Postby Kestrell » Sun Dec 24, 2017 6:23 am

5/10
To me, the black ripped jeans/ "emo" look is very overdone and popular. Not really having much of a backstory also kind of makes me score lower because it's really not a super unique design.. But overall she really is a cute character and I do like the idea behind the raven necklace!

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Re: Rate The Character Above You V.6 (Rule Changes p.735)

Postby IdolDream » Sun Dec 24, 2017 6:43 am

    (Please take my ratings with a grain of salt. What I think shouldn't matter when it comes to how much you love your character. ♡ )

    10/10, AHHH, I really really love this boy a lot?? What a fancy child, I scream. His backstory seems really interesting and the fact that his skin is something that you can reach into/contains star material, is a neat concept. I'm also really in love with his color palette? It is really soft and nice, but has that contrast I am always looking for. The purple and blue undertones just work for me. His hairstyle is also something I'm always 100% down for on a guy, and I feel like paired with his suit/clothing, it lines up perfectly. I would actually 100% love to see this babe around more/to know more about them. I scream he is perfect to me. ♡


    Aashkeelay? On her page is her with a different hair color and I am still really unsure on which I like, so opinions on that would be great! (Please try to rate her on her concept and design, rather than just the fact that she's human/humanoid. ♡♡ ) Character design and art by myself.
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    Her page is here, though I literally finished her just a bit ago so, aside from a message I sent to a friend describing how I thought the two of them kind of originated and a bit of blurbs, it's kinda bare. Here is a tiny blurb on her now though, since I'm still developing her info.
    Her sister is Fahmwalay, who is a seer, but Aash is a beast tamer of sorts. She collects magical creatures and artifacts, in order to preserve magic and continue generations of magic. She has bred magical creatures away from extinction and has even brought a few back from extinction. She specializes in giant steeds (Such as the giant raven companion she bred for Fah), rare/extinct creatures, and dragons. Her sister is her everything, she gave her life up for her, not only once, but twice. She gave up her mortal being to save her sister (explained on her page), the two are extremely close and Aash will never leave her alone too long.
    She enjoys a challenge, loves it when one of her new beasts/steeds/creatures give her some spunk/guff, it just feels more rewarding to her when she earns their trust and loyalties. She is extremely claustrophobic though, and often sleeps outside as Fahmwalay's belongings are slowly creeping into her room, taking up too much space. She enjoys this though, as she, like her sister, has an overwhelming fondness for the stars. Her only fears are drowning, and losing her sister.
    Each of the crystals contained hovering in her spears magic, is a portal/key to the planes that she keeps her magical creatures/beasts in. The bigger the planes, the stronger the magic, and the greater number of creatures, the bigger the crystals. Once the crystals have reached "maturity" that means that the creatures can be released back into the world, safe for a breedable number. The same crystals are also kept on her outfit/with her at all times, as these creatures are too dangerous to be released again, or too rare/almost extinct. They require more attention.
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Re: Rate The Character Above You V.6 (Rule Changes p.735)

Postby Antipathy » Sun Dec 24, 2017 8:58 am

ten / ten. I love this character! A lot of work and love has gone into her. She is very unique + I love the story behind her. I love the idea behind her crystals + taming animals. Her design itself works very well! You did a fantastic job on this. <3
// ps: personally, I think she looks better with red hair. ^^

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This is Brood. They are technically sexless and go by they/them pronouns. They have a long back story that is not yet finished, so I'll summarize: they were originally from a planet where the roles of machines + humans were swapped. Machines actually built humans, not the other way around. It was considered an illegal practice to be implanted into a human body, but they decided to risk it anyway. They did get discovered and were forced to leave due to their crimes. Now they reside on Earth + try to live a normal life among humans.

They cannot speak a language - on their planet, machines communicated via static bursts, which humans, of course, do not understand. They taught themselves sign language to communicate, and later learned to write + recognize several languages. They are quite intelligent; more so than the average human.

I don't have a set personality yet, but here are some traits.
- Rude as heck
- Practical
- Emotionally unstable; prone to mood swings
- Tends to zero in on tech projects and lose themselves for several hours
- Will support you no matter what, though they are not the nicest about it

As they are still a work in progress, I would love suggestions !
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Re: Rate The Character Above You V.6 (Rule Changes p.735)

Postby pigeon3456 » Sun Dec 24, 2017 2:24 pm

8/10 first off i really like how developed their backstory is, it adds a lot of interest to the character. The personality is well done. My one major complaint is that the design is a bit boring. Maybe try to incorporate the characters personality more into their outfit? Overall though, a pretty good character.

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Re: Rate The Character Above You V.6 (Rule Changes p.735)

Postby Tricksters » Sun Dec 24, 2017 4:27 pm


      (please take all my ratings with a grain of salt, thanks!)

      8/10
      rating off of him meant to come off as a historical figure/actual human since you requested it n v n
      he's a very interesting and complex character, for sure. i do like his depth and how you explained his ties to his profession, and how that correlates with his outfit. unless is skipped over it, there seems to be a lack of mention on why he's so attached to the church, though. it would be nice to see that insight into his character past his meekness to the world away from his role in the church


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Re: Rate The Character Above You V.6 (Rule Changes p.735)

Postby HibiscusBlossom » Sun Dec 24, 2017 4:36 pm

10/10
ahh i just adore this guy! i love the toned down versions of the colors and i think they all complement each other really well,
i like how the red base pops against the blue, pink and yellow. his overall demeanor matches how you describe him perfectly, he's actually quite simple and very easy on the eyes. i just love this little guy!


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what about my fursona, tiny? i'm kind of looking for something to make her stand out a bit but im not quite sure.
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Re: Rate The Character Above You V.6 (Rule Changes p.735)

Postby cyrevan » Sun Dec 24, 2017 8:25 pm

8/10
She's adorable and I love the cat breed you chose.
I think something you could add is a pale cream-white tailtip and perhaps chest spot? I think that would put a little more contrast into the design. An accessory is also a possibility, but she seems like a realistic cat character so if that's what you want her to be, an accessory isn't needed.
Since she's your fursona, you could think about things that make you you, like hobbies or weird traits you have, and incorporate them into her design.
Other than that, I like her a lot, and the colors are very fitting.

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Re: Rate The Character Above You V.6 (Rule Changes p.735)

Postby chimeriae » Mon Dec 25, 2017 2:38 am

four out of ten --

i'm sorry to be harsh, but this guy just kinda looks like the standard edgy oc. i like his ear tufts and his raccoon tail a lot! (striped tails are my biggest weakness) and the pattern on his front paw compliments the tail's design nicely. maybe change his spikes into a dark brown colour, and get rid of the gold bordering his white underbelly. they look quite nice on him and make him unique, but the colour is a bit off. i'd also scrap the scars, tweak his main body colour to be more brown, and change the red to a more muted orange-y colour.

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Re: Rate The Character Above You V.6 (Rule Changes p.735)

Postby Elfie » Mon Dec 25, 2017 4:28 pm

    8/10
    The soft browns on this character are absolutely wonderful, the accessories and his alt hair style match, it all works perfectly! The only reason this little guy didn't receive a higher rating is due to some of the markings involved - I love the feathered edge as they're not just lumped on, however they're too bland for my tastes and don't complement his look, particularly the stripes on the legs.
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    He's slick, slippery and suave, definitely has the mysterious and sinister vibe going on. Despite having a home base he floats from place to place in search of eyes to add to his collection - eyes are the windows to the soul. He's trying to find a special type of eye for extremely personal and possibly nefarious purposes. . . And since eyes don't keep very long he normally gets them fresh, very fresh. His swords aren't for show. Keep conscious of your peripheral vision because this guy just might be lurking in it.

    Aside from possibly eyeing off your peepers he's a chill dude, laid back and doesn't cause unnecessary harm to others or his surroundings. He's clever and tricky as it comes with his appearance, and is ready to crack a joke at your expense. Don't depend on him though, he's all about self-preservation and will run if the heat gets too hot for his liking - even if he could handle it with some effort; but that effort is too much wasted energy for him.
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