Rate The Character Above You V.6 (Rule Changes p.735)

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Re: Rate The Character Above You V.6 (Rule Changes p.735)

Postby IdolDream » Fri Dec 22, 2017 5:19 pm

    (Please take my ratings with a grain of salt. What I think shouldn't matter when it comes to how much you love your character. ♡ )

    6/10, Mmm, I really like them as I tend to prefer humans/humanoids, especially more fantasy based ones. I am in love with his patterns on his body and the muted palette, it really works here. And the little antlers are a cute/nice touch. Though, I personally feel as though his clothes are bit, mm, I don't want to say bland, but more muted/modernish(?) with the rest of his design. I wish his clothes were a bit more fantasyish or complex, but that is of course just a personal clothing choice for me. Though, I am in love with his eye color and the little bottles around his waist, I think that they give him quite a bit of charm. All in all, he is a really good character and I like him a lot. ♡


    Aashkeelay? On her page is her with a different hair color and I am still really unsure on which I like, so opinions on that would be great! (Please try to rate her on her concept and design, rather than just the fact that she's human/humanoid. ♡♡ ) Character design and art by myself.
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    Her sister is Fahmwalay, who is a seer, but Aash is a beast tamer of sorts. She collects magical creatures and artifacts, in order to preserve magic and continue generations of magic. She has bred magical creatures away from extinction and has even brought a few back from extinction. She specializes in giant steeds (Such as the giant raven companion she bred for Fah), rare/extinct creatures, and dragons. Her sister is her everything, she gave her life up for her, not only once, but twice. She gave up her mortal being to save her sister (explained on her page), the two are extremely close and Aash will never leave her alone too long.
    She enjoys a challenge, loves it when one of her new beasts/steeds/creatures give her some spunk/guff, it just feels more rewarding to her when she earns their trust and loyalties. She is extremely claustrophobic though, and often sleeps outside as Fahmwalay's belongings are slowly creeping into her room, taking up too much space. She enjoys this though, as she, like her sister, has an overwhelming fondness for the stars. Her only fears are drowning, and losing her sister.
    Each of the crystals contained hovering in her spears magic, is a portal/key to the planes that she keeps her magical creatures/beasts in. The bigger the planes, the stronger the magic, and the greater number of creatures, the bigger the crystals. Once the crystals have reached "maturity" that means that the creatures can be released back into the world, safe for a breedable number. The same crystals are also kept on her outfit/with her at all times, as these creatures are too dangerous to be released again, or too rare/almost extinct. They require more attention.
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Re: Rate The Character Above You V.6 (Rule Changes p.735)

Postby zelos » Sat Dec 23, 2017 5:15 am

      10/10 ;; I really like her design, and I like the red hair a lot better than the purpleish-pink. Her backstory is very interesting, as well. I'm so weak for really well thought out fantasy characters.

      My new girl? Her tentative name is Lyric, but it might change. She's a sorceress who is really into stargazing, astronomy, and space in general and practices nature magic or something? She feels a deep connection to the stars and is able to, in a sense, predict the future by reading them? Not down to every last detail, but she can sense when something bad may happen, when a calamity is near or something. She likes to seclude herself from society, though she likes small woodland creatures.
      (If you've ever played Pokemon Mystery Dungeon Red or Blue, she's a little like Xatu.)
      She still needs to be fleshed out, so any ideas are appreciated!

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Re: Rate The Character Above You V.6 (Rule Changes p.735)

Postby kittykore » Sat Dec 23, 2017 7:27 am

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10/10 Holy heck, I LOVE your oc so so much I can't find anything against them!
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Now no one ever said Victoria was a good person, sure she used to be years ago but that was a long long time ago. Victoria is mischievous, she claims that she loves to mess with people just to see their misfortune. She can be helpful but that's only when she gets something out of it. She's very vain Victoria believes she's a work of art and no one can compete with her, she didn't have this big of an ego before what had happened between her and Isaiah. She's overall insane, she doesn't know whats a healthy relationship or what's normal in a loving person, she loves to be in and cause risky situations just to see what unravels. Victoria is a flirt, she likes to think she can be anyone's girl just from a single smirk, she always has that sultry smirk on her face and some thick eyeliner on. She is one to be manipulated and tricked into something grim very easily, while she tries not to have this happen it's impossible really. Victoria thinks she isn't good enough if the one who "owns" her leaves her, due to Isaiah she feels like she's more of an object then a person, it's rather sad really. Victoria cries too much really and can't really control it, it's more of a thing that happens randomly, she's scared of a surplus of things but it gets really bad. She claims she's angelic but she's more like the devil. Victoria is cowardly she acts like she's tough, but she runs at the slightest view of danger, excluding Isaiah. She's weak-willed, she doesn't fight for herself, she's spineless really, she's the damsel in distress all the time and doesn't really take care of herself. Victoria is also self-indulgent, she does what people say out of fear they'll attack her or do worse. She can be very selfish and won't give a dime to anyone who needs it, though she doesn't have any money to begin with, what is being said is that she's very greedy. Victoria is resentful mostly towards Isaiah, she can hold grudges for a long long time and it's someone fail to realize really. She's obsessive, when she want's something or someone she'll stop at nothing till she gets what she wants, it's incredibly toxic but she doesn't seem to care. Victoria is a naturally jealous person, if someone has something she doesn't then she wants it, this usually adds to her obsession with things. Finally she's foolish and submissive, she's scared of what people will do to her if she says no so she naturally submits, it's due to Isaiah and what he's done to her but she denies being either despite both being very obvious.
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Re: Rate The Character Above You V.6 (Rule Changes p.735)

Postby miku » Sat Dec 23, 2017 7:32 am

    8/10
    This character is really cute! My only suggestion would be to add other shades of purple, but she looks great as she is though.
    *hands Victoria a tissue*


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Re: Rate The Character Above You V.6 (Rule Changes p.735)

Postby NeonB » Sat Dec 23, 2017 10:44 am

9 / 10!

This is a super cute character! I love her color palette, and how it's pretty realistic! I love her simple apparel, and how it adds a bit more to her character and personality. I'm not a huge fan of animal characters, so I'm probably not the best person to judge this character, but I still think she's a cool character! I don't really notice anything that shows how she lives in an apocalyptic world, though. but other than that, I think she's great!

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Casimir grew up in a small village called Eastrun, where she trained to be a healer. She lived there with her wife and daughter for a while, until a strange sickness started spreading around the small and close-knit town. It was relatively unknown, and a cure was far from being developed. In most cases, it wasn't fatal, but it would leave the afflicted bedridden and in need of constant care. It spread quickly through the town, affecting nearly everyone. There were some, such as Casimir, who seemed to have a strange immunity towards it, and those few set their goal to healing others. Casimir's family wasn't quite as lucky. Her wife was the first to show the symptoms, then her daughter. Sadly, her wife succumbed to the sickness, leaving Casimir alone to support their daughter, who from then on could not support herself. Ever since then, Casimir has been struggling to view the whole situation as being no fault of her own. She's constantly working to find a way to heal her daughter, all while trying to forgive herself for what she views as her own negligence. Now, she and her daughter live in a small cabin not far from a nearby town, Casimir still diligently struggling to support both her family and her goal to find a cure for her daughter.

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Re: Rate The Character Above You V.6 (Rule Changes p.735)

Postby mongrel » Sat Dec 23, 2017 11:39 am

AHh I've been waiting to rate this girl for a while now
11/10
I absolutely love her!! Her design keeps a natural element while at the same time being unique and allowing her to stand out. I love how you took suggestions people gave to you earlier on and put them into her design, such as the bands (unsure what to call them?) around her hair. Her backstory is gorgeous and heartbreaking, and she's definitely an interesting character.
Wonderful all around. <3

So I'm thinkin about my gal Anatasia
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So I don't really have much on her, because I'm sorry to say that my Kalons are underdeveloped and deserve more love. But anyway!
She's a real sweet girl. She grew up separated from society because her parents were kinda wack. Because of this, she's pretty weird. She barely knows how to talk to people or keep conversation, especially with what's going on in the world. She tries as hard as possible to be nice and make a good first (and lasting) impression on people. Anatasia's very much a daydreamer, and collects her thoughts in weird ways, such as objects in funky-shaped glass containers, or paintings that weren't painted with paint.
Also, please keep in mind that as part of a closed species, her design is not subject to change. Thank you. <3
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Re: Rate The Character Above You V.6 (Rule Changes p.735)

Postby Elfie » Sat Dec 23, 2017 2:33 pm

    7/10
    A good character concept and design wise, I'm particularly drawn to her backstory and how it correlates with how she behaves! It's nice to see a personality with reasoning behind it even if it's only a snippet.
    Design wise she does lack in visual appeal, her markings are overly busy with no "flow" as the overlay makes her look a tad messy. The choices in colour blend in with each other too much for any one element to stick out. The edits are nice however and I adore the ears and horn, they go well with her personality!
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Re: Rate The Character Above You V.6 (Rule Changes p.735)

Postby bnom » Sat Dec 23, 2017 3:40 pm

7/10
i do love kia's, and the overall pattern on the fur is very pretty ^^ although the blue eyes are a bit odd looking, and the nose and the hair colour seems a bit off because they aren't really fitting. but the hair design/cut is quite nice.

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Re: Rate The Character Above You V.6 (Rule Changes p.735)

Postby bear » Sat Dec 23, 2017 6:57 pm

    oo i really like the design! i love the grey base and the darker stripes, it's super pretty * v *
    and the screen is really interesting (even though it's a concept that's super common these days), but it suits really well!
    8/10

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    He also has an option of white in his hair, which I like to think is his natural hair colour but he dyes it the darker black. (feel free to suggest names!!)
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Re: Rate The Character Above You V.6 (Rule Changes p.735)

Postby Lifora » Sun Dec 24, 2017 3:31 am

10/10
I love how its simple but not to simple!! its an amazing design.

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