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back/muscle practice by raccoon bandit

Artist raccoon bandit [gallery]
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back/muscle practice

Postby raccoon bandit » Sat Oct 07, 2017 2:04 pm

    trying to get better at anatomy/poses on the fly
    no reference :o
    censored the bootayyy just in case :p (even tho it's not v graphic i promise!!)

    comments/crit are really appreciated! I'm trying to get better so if anyone would like to offer some advice, I'd really appreciate it!!!
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Re: back/muscle practice

Postby mina . » Thu Oct 12, 2017 3:49 am

I'm very bad at anatomy sooo I wouldn't be one to judge, however, it looks really good from my pov.
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Re: back/muscle practice

Postby Obsessed » Thu Oct 12, 2017 3:59 am

      I really like that back (and dem legs), I think proportionally and anatomically (especially for being freehand :clap: ) it looks great! I guess the only sort of advice I could offer (and trust me, I say advice loosely, because I'm awful digitally) is with regards to the shoulder blades, which have a naturally triangular shape that tapers down and would change the way the muscles bunch and the outline thereof. Your art is really incredible tho ♥ So please ignore me if this isn't helpful in the least because I don't doubt that this'll be nothing for you 'cause you've got mad skillz and your pose is great (^_^)
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Re: back/muscle practice

Postby miilk » Thu Oct 12, 2017 5:36 am

Honestly, this is an amazing piece, the artwork is very beautiful and pretty spot on. The only thing I would criticize you on are the arms. Something about the build isn’t right or looking as natural as it should be. I would recommend looking online for photos of how they are built mussle wise and work off of that. Other than that, it really is spot on. I like the sketch a lot c:
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Re: back/muscle practice

Postby raccoon bandit » Thu Oct 12, 2017 7:44 am

Osho wrote:I'm very bad at anatomy sooo I wouldn't be one to judge, however, it looks really good from my pov.

Thank u so much!!! ;;v; I love u oshooooooo <3 (all you’re not bad at anatomy at all pshhhhh)

Obsessed wrote:
      I really like that back (and dem legs), I think proportionally and anatomically (especially for being freehand :clap: ) it looks great! I guess the only sort of advice I could offer (and trust me, I say advice loosely, because I'm awful digitally) is with regards to the shoulder blades, which have a naturally triangular shape that tapers down and would change the way the muscles bunch and the outline thereof. Your art is really incredible tho ♥ So please ignore me if this isn't helpful in the least because I don't doubt that this'll be nothing for you 'cause you've got mad skillz and your pose is great (^_^)
      o
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Heheh I LIVE for calf muscles tbh :p
Thank you so much for the feedback!! It’s really helpful actually! I will definitely keep that in mind from now on!! I have to study up on back muscles a bit more, so focusing on shoulders next time or even doing a study dedicated to upper back muscles will have to be on my list! Thank you so much again for your feedback and kind words aaaaAA <33

Corgi Sploot wrote:Honestly, this is an amazing piece, the artwork is very beautiful and pretty spot on. The only thing I would criticize you on are the arms. Something about the build isn’t right or looking as natural as it should be. I would recommend looking online for photos of how they are built mussle wise and work off of that. Other than that, it really is spot on. I like the sketch a lot c:


Thank you so much!! Oooh okay! Yeah, I definitely need improving on arms (porporton, positioning, etc.)! I will also have to check out some photos. Thank you so much <333
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