Rate The Character Above You V.6 (Rule Changes p.735)

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Re: Rate The Character Above You V.6 (Rule Changes p.735)

Postby IdolDream » Sun Sep 17, 2017 9:23 pm

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9/10, -wheeze-, I actually really like this character, even though I tend to stray away from more canine designs?? I really rally love the soft, really appealing grey tones and just the over all soft look of the character. I also love the tiny add on about looking after young birds, it gives them a softer personality as well, and such a cute quirk. I also really like that the halo is silver/white rather than gold, since it matches better and blends easier. the only tiniest thing I can personally find myself not liking as well right now are the two dots(?) on the chest. They just feel ever so slightly out of place to me personally. However, it is literally like, such a small thing. Overall, I really like this character and hope to see them more often!

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Re: Rate The Character Above You V.6 (Rule Changes p.735)

Postby redhorizon » Mon Sep 18, 2017 2:22 am

10/10 - I at first kind of hated him, but at a second glance, he has a really nice design and concept actually! I love the tongue and the wings and the sort of goopy quality... I can't find anything wrong with him!

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Re: Rate The Character Above You V.6 (Rule Changes p.735)

Postby Asa Willow » Mon Sep 18, 2017 2:32 am

9/10

First of all, the design immediately caught my eye! The blues and greens go nicely together, and I think it's an excellent choice to put with the black and off-white. It's refreshing because usually a "demonic/monsterous" or otherwise fallen-from-grace character design is usually a cliched mix of reds, grays, and blacks, so I really do like all of the colors. Secondly I'm a big fan of skeletal structures on living creatures, (I even have a couple chars like that myself) so it's a huge plus in my mind. The only things that bother me are small things, like maybe the spiky cheeks.

As for the backstory, I love how it puts a unique spin on the whole "fallen angel" (or this time, fallen god) trope. The fact that they have companions is a really cool idea!


6/10
Let me start by saying that I love the shade of green used, and in combination with the grays/whites it looked pretty nice, color-wise. That being said, I can't say I'm a huge fan of the ring-markings. I'm more of a natural-ish marking fan, so it's just my opinion! It may also just be that I just think there's too many markings going on at once, because honestly I wouldn't mind just a few rings, maybe more strategically placed? Overall though, it's certainly a unique and intriguing design.

Ramaru?
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Re: Rate The Character Above You V.6 (Rule Changes p.735)

Postby tuft » Mon Sep 18, 2017 5:25 am

8/10
what a cute character!!
I love the simplistic style of him and his scarf! however, I feel like the gold could be diluted a bit since it clashes with other colours.
Also, I hear of that story a lot ^^' maybe try to add more detail or orginality?

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Postby primcval » Mon Sep 18, 2017 5:35 am

    nine / ten
    what a beautiful character! I have always been a sucker for red panda designs, and she's just so pretty! love the glasses <3 I would suggest adding a bit of personality/backstory to help make the character come to life. depending on age, she could possibly be a teacher?

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Re: Rate The Character Above You V.6 (Rule Changes p.735)

Postby bvrd » Mon Sep 18, 2017 5:43 am

5 out of 10
the colors are really nice, got a soft spot for blues tbh.
tho the blue markings on the body aren't to my liking same goes for the things on their head above their tail, not sure what they are really. in all honesty they're really cute, loving the tufts on their ears and the grey is a nice touch.

Agatha? they're a squirrel monkey who enjoys stealing jars of peanut butter to eat from villagers.
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Re: Rate The Character Above You V.6 (Rule Changes p.735)

Postby WalkingContradiction » Mon Sep 18, 2017 6:02 am

Ooooh what a lovely character! I love the natural colors I find them very soothing and the whole peanut butter stealing thing is adorable! I would love to hear more of a backstory, over all a great character 101/10


What about Dolus? She is a mythical fox creature that lives in a different realm of reality where there is a god or spirit for everything. She posses a magical goose feather that is half shadow half light, with this feather she has power over life and death. She gained the feather by stealing from Nex one of the gods of death. She is god of trickery and fraud. She is very sly and doesn't care very much about others, only for herself. She enjoys practical joke that sometimes go too far... Her mother Malum, the god of Evil, didn't care for her and thus she learned to care for herself, in whatever means possible. (I drew her and came up with character design) Image
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Re: Rate The Character Above You V.6 (Rule Changes p.735)

Postby friday » Mon Sep 18, 2017 8:59 am

7/10
I like the design for the most part except the spots on the rump and paws. I think they would look better darker. Also the pink is a little too bright and would look better more muted/brown/reddish in my opinion as it would match the more natural color scheme. I like the swirl on her face a whole lot. The character development is interesting and fits the design well.

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Re: Rate The Character Above You V.6 (Rule Changes p.735)

Postby fishstix. » Mon Sep 18, 2017 9:03 am

5/10?
Very simple design, but I do like the art!
I also think that purple eyes were a good choice for a werewolf with purple fur : )
Paolo is also a really cute name :oo

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Re: Rate The Character Above You V.6 (Rule Changes p.735)

Postby Firielle » Mon Sep 18, 2017 9:14 am

6/10

Unfortunately I'm never really a fan of these very light colored characters. They're a bit hard for me to see, and their markings kind of get muddled when drawing and shading them.

I do like the color combination! Perhaps adding a lighter underbelly around the thighs and on the bottom of the tail will add a bit more detail to it. Maybe darker markings on top of the back as well, or coloring in the triangular stripes with another color might add to them ;v; Love her name as well!


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