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by Pyromaniacal » Tue Sep 05, 2017 1:51 pm
7/10 - I quite like his design, and it is very appealing, but there's not much obvious character in it - if I didn't know, I would have no idea that he was a mechanic. The accessories that are there are very generic and ones I've seen on many other characters before. However, his colors are very nice looking and go well together, and his markings are quite interesting! imo a good character that just needs a little more work. As far as names go, I personally prefer Kasper, but you can choose whichever you wish!
Kayoubi? He's a half-monster paranormal fanatic who has completely shut out all of normal society in his quest in tracking down and trapping ghosts. Quite eccentric, he rarely ventures out in daylight, and if one tries to speak with him he will not return them anything that remotely resembles normal conversation. Reference and art by Yasuo-tyan on dA.
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by L0TUS » Wed Sep 06, 2017 1:28 am
9/10
mmm this design is so pretty. i absolutely love the lil horns, the scarf, and the stars. the heterochromia is a nice touch as well—you don't see it very often. the x in one eye and the red pupil in the other are cool features—i actually didn't notice them at first. this character has a lovely color scheme as well. i think you should make the color of the ears match the skin tone rather than the hair color (as i foolishly thought they were bananas at first, whoops). also, i think you should make him look a bit more evil/monster-like, because at first glance he just looks like a nice lil guy in a sweater. this character is so nice though, he definitely stands out and he's very unique.
• Bumble | Male •
—Honey is his favorite food
—He is often very forgetful
—His friends say he is "sweeter than honey"
—Very calm and shy
—Curious
—He loves flowers, sweet foods, and sleeping
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by deathbell » Wed Sep 06, 2017 1:34 am
8/10
Really cute character! Bumblebees are one of my favorite insects so I'm slightly biased. I think the flower crown is really cute and the overall design and feel of the character is pretty unique. I think if the yellow were just a little brighter he would pop out a little bit more, but otherwise, I think he's super cute.
Vex?
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Vex is very upbeat and happy most of the time, always bubbly and looking to make friends or have someone to talk to. She's a bit sensitive and sometimes has trouble taking things too personally, whether it's criticism, jokes, sarcasm, etc. She also has a large temper if aggravated enough and will go out of her way to show her distaste towards someone or something. Despite that, she still has a huge heart and cares very deeply for those she's close to, though sometimes she can be blinded by her admiration for others.
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by cyrevan » Wed Sep 06, 2017 3:21 am
6.5/10
I have nothing against simple designs as all of my designs are pretty simple but I feel like she needs a few markings to really make her feel complete? She looks very plain without clothes on. If there was an accent of a different color on tips of the hair and the tip of the tail, I think that would fix that!
I really like the species however and the clothing is pretty cool as well and matches well. The colors are nice too.

This is Burr, a redesign of
an old character.
I'm thinking of making the new version FTM trans since I don't have any trans OCs, but I'm not sure yet!
The species is a fox-raccoon hybrid with some traces of ermine. (in case you're wondering, hybrids like this are not rare in the universe my characters live in).
I still need to develop the new Burr some more!
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by flowercatt » Wed Sep 06, 2017 5:17 am
6/10. This character is nice, but neither the color scheme or patterns are very original. It kinda looks like one of those characters that pop up when you Google "oc's" (too harsh?). Anyways, I like it but I feel like they could be even better with a few small changes. I also really like the eye color
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this guy i just made? i don't really have a backstory for them yet. here's what i have so far;
they used to be more colorful and lively than they are now. they had more colorful plants growing on them, and the plants were healthy and beautiful. the forest they lived in slowly started to die for an unknown reason, as well as themselves. after a while, they managed to stay alive, but their beauty was gone.
Theyre a huge WIP so any name/gender/backstory/design suggestions would be appreciated! all by me
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by nice » Wed Sep 06, 2017 6:16 am
5/10 they're cute but their design doesn't seem to really flow together? the mushroom seems random, along with the leaf on its foot, and i feel like the purple eyes don't really fit. maybe add more spikes and flowers on his body? i do like the backstory though!

wheezy?
this is his original design (by bear), i gave him a little revamp so i'd love to know if there's anything i should change?
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by Cruxich » Wed Sep 06, 2017 8:28 am
6/10 This is a pretty cool oc, but I've seen the headless concept used so many times. Design wise it's a bit too simple and basic for me, but I do like the stitches here and there, along with the heart things on the tail and chest. The dark colors on the leg don't fit in well though, and I think they would look better if they were the same color as some of the black on the tail, or a lighter/darker shade of the red color the paws are.
If? By killer-pineapple

If is very curious and playful as a newborn, emitting squeaks and chirps when she is happy. Despite her large size, If is harmless and would never hurt anyone on purpose. Aside from that, she is simple minded so If doesn't have a complex personality. The orange jelly like substance is sticky and slimy, being able to be formed into things like extra limbs. The eye that can move anywhere on the body is a weakspot, so her porcelain head helps provide some defense. It can shatter though if damaged enough.
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by nyoovi » Wed Sep 06, 2017 8:44 am
7/10 - Going off design alone, If is a bit simple, but still has a design that is pleasing to the eye. I'm a sucker for blacks with oranges to be completely honest. The red spot on the head seems a bit out of place? Personally I would make it yellow to kind of even out the design a bit, if that makes sense.
Now! Going off the lil tidbits you gave us, I really really like If oml. A very original design and concept, so I've gotta give you a 10/10 for creativity! <3 Definitely a favorite, if not dream character of mine cx
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