Are you a writer or a poet? Come and share your creations with us, or discuss writing techniques with others
Forum rules
Please only post your own original work, do not post poetry or stories which were written by someone else.
by Hot Dad » Wed Sep 06, 2017 5:39 am
Karnande
............................................Eithos
Atta.............................................
Karnande Is the kingdom residing in west. A place covered in trees higher than we know. Thick vines and furn carpeting harsh rocks. The isle is known to be the Goddess of Earth's. Karnadelia (What the name Karnande derives from) is written only in books and scrolls, as head strong and bold. An adventurer that sees through darkness to wonders beyond.
She was the eldest of the three sisters - Attanim and Eithosal following after her. She got a long with the both for a long time. They worked in harmony to grow can care for the world we know. However this is the past, it is not the same as now, and a lot has since changed.
When the three sisters grew older this is when jealousy and cruelness shrouded their judgment.
Eithosal was strong, she is after all the goddess of sea and water. She took over land, crumbling it into her depths. For she felt she was the weaker party, left alone by the inhabitants of the ground. Who only wished to take what she would grow (Fishes, creatures and under water plants). She envied Karnadelia's popularity and praise.
In her resentment the water engulfed most of the earth, laying over more than 75% of the world. Attanim, the goddess of wind and breeze watched her sisters hostility from afar. She wanted no part in this, after all she had the entirety of the sky. Though she made no move upon them, they twisted her view. Believing her as feeling superior, and above the two sisters.
It was this slow lack of regard that brought these regions riven by feuds, to division. And Karnadelia broke away from her two sisters, as she felt torn in the middle ground of sea and sky. breaking away and creating an island. She rose spikes around herself and her isle, turning her back to the company of family.
Eithosal sent sharks, leqns, arkbhes, and creatures of thirst to surround the islands seas. Then Attanim left harsh winds, snow and hail. It is however free from brutish suspicious creatures which roam the lands of Atta and Eithos.
The story of the three sisters lays only in dusty children's books, and story tellers whisper it through bored ears now a days. The Kalons of this world no longer believe in this old folk tale. However, one still wonders 'what if', and if such bonds in life can be healed.
-

Hot Dad
-
- Posts: 2667
- Joined: Sun Oct 19, 2014 12:59 am
- My pets
- My items
- My wishlist
- My gallery
- My scenes
- My dressups
- Trade with me
by Hot Dad » Wed Sep 06, 2017 8:44 am
Setting:
For you readers, imagine life hundreds of years ago - the medieval times, but enhanced. There's no internet, no chicken smoothie, there's swords, duels, and magic.
Government:
As there are three main regions, there are three forms of government. However not refined. There is a criminal justice system however. If you commit a crime (Like defacing an ancient portal) you have the penalty of service. Cleaning, gathering food, building, etc.
These governments are as i say, basic. Approximate population of the world is sitting around 3,345,259. This is rising, but depending where you look. (K: 822,478, A: 1,063,788, E: 1,459,003).
Currency:
They use a small, bean sized piece of crystallized and sealed magic energy.
As crystals are practically the foundations of the earth, they are as common as grass. However, currency should have some kind of intrinsic value. If it's easily acquired, minted, or created then you're dealing with massive inflation. That is why it only has becomes of worth once its been cut, shaped, and sealed with energy.
Only the highest trained and selected mages are able, and allowed, to create the currency. They cast spells, which use a secret formula, over thousands of these small gems at a time. They must then be kept in a furnace - below their melting point, for 80 hours before the magic is sealed. They're then distributed out into the land.
Fakes are obvious, they don't hold the same hum of buzzing energy. Nor do they posses such light a glow.
War:
Seasons and months:
There are the same seasons known: Spring, summer, autumn, winter.
But different lands have longer and shorter of some.
There are also only four months, to reflect the seasons. Aol, Eol, iol, Uol. Aol is considered spring, Eol summer, iol autumn, and uol is winter. (They merely reflect vowels).
There is 200 days in each year here. 50 days in each month is what would be considered ideal. It does change for each region though. Karnande has less spring, and a longer autumn with summer showers that soak into golden and hazel wildlife. (25,50,75,50)
Atta barely has a winter or autumn, when it does the winds are low and the breeze will at most nip. (75,75,25,25)
Which leaves Eithos with has a longer summer and winter. The winter doesn't affect supplies however, as the waves are no stronger.
Traditions:
1st of Aol, Air Goddess day.
22nd of Eol, Night of the lights.
This night is said to be the one of the most magic. Here a full moon happens each year, in at least 2 moons. It also has the longest daylight hours.
But what is most amazing about this night - is the creatures that come out. From the sea rise jellyfish, that only glow under a full moon. There are untold numbers that cover the sea, making it look like a dream. They do not sting, so most teenagers and children, and wild adults, love swimming through and among-st them, as you can see everywhere you're going. It is the only night of the year the ancient sea ruins are visible under water. Some speculate who built it, and where they came from. But it's somewhat accept it that it is the goddesses family palace, now submerged and forgotten.
On land millions of fireflies wade through trees and plants, hovering over lakes and ponds, and showing the way through the current of air. Less common there are small rodent like creatures come out of caves and hiding and show off the lights and pattern that shines and glimmers along their soft fur.
It is a night where people unite and celebrate the beauty that life has to offer. Relishing in the wonder of their world though laughter, feasts, and festivity.
25th of Eol, Water goddess day.
25th of Iol, Earth Goddess day.
17th of Uol, Mountain blessings eve.
-

Hot Dad
-
- Posts: 2667
- Joined: Sun Oct 19, 2014 12:59 am
- My pets
- My items
- My wishlist
- My gallery
- My scenes
- My dressups
- Trade with me
Who is online
Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 5 guests