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Re: ★ Create A Clan Fanclub V.3 ★

Postby Katrione » Wed Aug 30, 2017 5:44 pm

I'm starting school tomorrow so I won't be on until 2:40-3:00 PM PDT
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Re: ★ Create A Clan Fanclub V.3 ★

Postby Arya22 » Wed Aug 30, 2017 7:39 pm

@deimos

I really like the third picture for Mikestep, and I might be going with the second for whisper!
But now I see the pictures, I remember they're not a really the kit pictures. I found on the site the same kittens, but in a position that makes them look a little older. But now they grew up, your pictures are a lot better!
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Re: ★ Create A Clan Fanclub V.3 ★

Postby Dinolil1 » Wed Aug 30, 2017 7:47 pm

‘’Ready.’’ Smallpaw sighed at last, scrambling up to join him. Without another word, Smallpaw squeezed her eyes shut and waited for Starclan’s mystical presence. Stonenose was silent, save for his heavy breathing. Would Starclan grace his apprentice with their blessings? Had he taught her enough? Smallpaw seemed far too young to become an apprentice and Stonenose was tempted to shake her awake but he didn’t, not out of fear of Fritillarystar’s anger or Starclan’s fury; but out of knowledge that this was the path that Smallpaw had chosen, and walk it she would.

At first she was greeted with nothing but the void unending. Fur bristling with fear, Smallpaw was worried that something had gone wrong; that Starclan scorned her and her prophecy-less knowledge. Maybe Stonenose had made a mistake making her his apprentice and Starclan was punishing her with a nightmare for it, but luckily this was not the case. After what felt like eternity, a large calico tom approached Smallpaw quietly. She looked at his ragged ears and the many scars that criss-crossed his white fur, wondering how many battles the solemn warrior had fought and why he was the one to bestow her name.

‘’Greetings, I am Rippedear; Are you Smallpaw?’’ He rumbled, looming over the shy apprentice. ‘’Yes, sir…I am indeed Smallpaw.’’ She replied, trying to keep the nerves out of her voice. This wasn’t what she’d expected but if this was to be her name-giver than so be it! Rippedear nodded and continued. ‘’Very well, I dub thee Small___* in honour of your ____*’’

Smallpaw dipped her head respectfully, watching as a starry crowd stepped out of the shadows. Their eyes glistened with admiration, but Smallpaw didn’t care; she was too busy searching their ranks for her brother. ‘’If you’re looking for Ternpaw; he’s not here.’’ A grey tom murmured, blue eyes wistful and wise.

‘’Greynose is right; Ternpaw hasn’t found his way here.’’ Murmured a motherly brown tabby. ‘’I’m sorry, dear.’’ She murmured, watching the crestfallen apprentice. ‘’Why? Why isn’t he here?’’ Smallpaw exclaimed loudly.


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Re: ★ Create A Clan Fanclub V.3 ★

Postby kiro,, » Wed Aug 30, 2017 7:56 pm

I need some help, I'm having insane writers block and I don't know what to write about. I want to have Squirrelpaw flirting with Cinderpaw for a bit and a moment to show the kits personalities. But what should I do with everyone else? Thanks in advance for any help!
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Postby deimido » Thu Aug 31, 2017 2:03 am

    @katrione - let me know when you get the first chapter(s) up! i'd be real interested in reading it. and yeah i think the names & ranks look fine, i've never seen a rank used like the sirens before, so that's gonna be interesting to see how it works. good luck with school by the way!

    @obscenesymphony - glad we could help out in a way! and i love what you've done with your archive so far, mudclan sounds real great. ;'0

    @lost thoughts - rip to that character and those are nice names, i like magpiefeather the most out of the two. ;w;

    @arya22 - i'm happy you're satisfied with the pictures, i might still go hunting for whisperleap though. xD speaking of whisper, the image you linked to her doesn't work. :'0

    @dinolil1 - what you have is great so far, however knowing ternpaw is having problems getting to starclan is sad. (but its a good way to keep the identity of his murderer a mystery haha) if anything, i guess i just have a problem with the word 'prophecy-less'? maybe replace that with 'lack of prophetic knowledge'? if your alright with some minor criticism anyway if not just ignore this rip

    @adiebaby11 - maybe you can squeeze the squirrel/cinder flirting AND the kits in the same post? perhaps the apprentices are meant to babysit the kits and you can focus on whatever the kits are doing and sprinkle in some apprentice interaction as well. you could write about mousestar and silverheart too?? i think he'd like to know how she's doing as a mom, seeing as he cares for her in a way.
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Re: ★ Create A Clan Fanclub V.3 ★

Postby Arya22 » Thu Aug 31, 2017 2:06 am

@deimos

Whoops... I don't know then.
And maybe, I was really satisfied with Mikestep but not so much with Whisperleap for some reason? Thank you!!
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Postby deimido » Thu Aug 31, 2017 2:10 am

    happy 400 pages, guys!

    @arya22 - i'll keep looking then! i'll probably PM you some potential images later?? my computer's real laggy right now and i'm afraid if i decide to look any images up its gonna die on me quick haha.

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    @everyone - i feel like working with genetics again, if anyone's interested in what kittens some couples in their clan would make let know! i'm also down for doing this with canon warriors too lol

    i'm also working on my cac prefix list again, so if you guys could direct me to your latest posts that'd be wonderful! i've also been considering adding a section there that lists what cats with these prefixes look like, but i'm not sure that's a thing i want to do yet.
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Postby requiem, » Thu Aug 31, 2017 2:21 am

        any feedback on my latest post? especially silverdash's death?

        @deimos
        i think i already asked you but what would be smoke X dove's kits be like?
        also maybe magpie X tiger?
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Re: ★ Create A Clan Fanclub V.3 ★

Postby Katrione » Thu Aug 31, 2017 2:48 am

@lost
Acornpaw nooooooo, he was so young!!! *chokes on tears*

Why can't doveflight answer any questions about her pregnancy?
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Postby requiem, » Thu Aug 31, 2017 3:04 am

        @katrione
        i know, i know...poor little silverdash ;-;

        foxstar told her to not say anything as her mate is the medicine cat and he's unsure whether he's okay with it or not. unfortunately his decision is going to be a bit rushed as cats are going to go see the kits and be like: 'they look awfully like smokeleaf...wait'
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