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by Skoomacat » Tue Aug 22, 2017 10:23 am
tnis was my first attempt in advanced but it's been moved to intermediate
I saw that coming
It wasn't as good as all the other drawings in advanced
I tried though but I am still pretty disappointed in myself
I have so much to fix
This whole drawing was a failliure from the start
Thanks to all them people who had nice comments and constructive criticism c:
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by The Worst Username » Tue Aug 22, 2017 10:28 am
Hello! Can I give some advice? The face looks really good; I bet you draw a ton of headshots. But her body is a bit odd: her dress is quite large in comparison to her head and arms, and that little part around the chest area that stabs out looks strange to me. Her face is also really detailed, making everything else look a bit simple in comparison. Overall, though, I do like her expression and the color palette you used; it's quite pretty.

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by Skoomacat » Tue Aug 22, 2017 10:31 am
The Worst Username wrote:Hello! Can I give some advice? The face looks really good; I bet you draw a ton of headshots. But her body is a bit odd: her dress is quite large in comparison to her head and arms, and that little part around the chest area that stabs out looks strange to me. Her face is also really detailed, making everything else look a bit simple in comparison. Overall, though, I do like her expression and the color palette you used; it's quite pretty.
Thank you for the feedback!
(I do have a lot of trouble with backgrounds)
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by ~Tornado~ » Tue Aug 22, 2017 11:26 am
First of all this is really pretty!
But I don't think it's ready for advanced and I wouldn't really let that effect you much, advanced drawings usually have a lot of details and a strong understanding of shading and anatomy and such, this is really nice and I love it. But more details and some studies on shading, choosing colors and anatomy will help.
Keep working okay! Don't try to make a drawing just for the sake of it being in advanced, when you have the drawing for the board you'll probably know.
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by Skoomacat » Tue Aug 22, 2017 11:37 am
~Tornado~ wrote:First of all this is really pretty!
But I don't think it's ready for advanced and I wouldn't really let that effect you much, advanced drawings usually have a lot of details and a strong understanding of shading and anatomy and such, this is really nice and I love it. But more details and some studies on shading, choosing colors and anatomy will help.
Keep working okay! Don't try to make a drawing just for the sake of it being in advanced, when you have the drawing for the board you'll probably know.
Yeah your right
Im gonna see if I van get a mod to put it in beginners
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