Forum rules
Oekaki posts must follow our Rules for the Site and Forum,
including the Oekaki Rules and Art Rules.

Having trouble using oekaki? Check out the Oekaki Guide or send in a help ticket.

Doberman by Zeruko

Artist Zeruko [gallery]
Time spent 19 minutes
Drawing sessions 1
5 people like this Log in to vote for this drawing
Post a reply

Doberman

Postby Zeruko » Sun Mar 20, 2011 4:51 am

Do you think I am improving?
User avatar
Zeruko
 
Posts: 862
Joined: Thu Nov 12, 2009 11:25 am
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me
Top

Re: Doberman

Postby The Last Raven » Sun Mar 20, 2011 4:54 am

I like it. Looks pretty good. May I offer some constructive critizism? The body is a bit long for the rest of it. Maybe lengthen the legs and make the head just a tiny bit bigger. :) Pretty background.
──-────────────────────
❝ raven|she|adult ❞
────────────────────-──
███░█████████████████ █
░░░░░░░░░░░░░░░░░░░░░░░
Image
Image
Image
███░█████████████████ █
──-────────────────────
❝ hi! i’m a long time player
who loves to hoard chameleons
and anything else that tickles my fancy.
i am a huge nerd and love to cosplay!❞

────────────────────-──
███░█████████████████ █
Image
Image
Image
Image
███░█████████████ █
░░░░░░░░░░░░░░░░░░░
──-───────────────
❝coding credit pascal
collection dream❞
ImageImageImage
───────────────-──
░░░░░░░░░░░░░░░░░░░
Image
Image
───────────────-──
░░░░░░░░░░░░░░░░░░░
Image
░░░░░░░░░░░░░░░░░░░
───────────────-──
███░█████████████ █
User avatar
The Last Raven
 
Posts: 39897
Joined: Sun Feb 07, 2010 10:57 am
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me
Top
Post a reply

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: Google [Bot], LokisTrick, Macaanto, Roxie Fluff and 2 guests