rating: 6/10So don't get me wrong— I think this character is sort of cute. But I
have a few problems with it. I think the blue (ish) tips at the end of
the ears are abrupt— instead of just adding blue triangles on the ears,
try a gradient from purple to blue. At least, I think it would look better
like that. The body's design— the bare body, without accessories or wings—
looks a bit basic, and the only thing that seems to add to it is the little
glitter scattered about. The hair doesn't seem to actually have a style,
and I'm not sure if it's due to the art, but it looks like just a lump on top
of the head, like a filler of sorts. And in my opinion, nothing really stands out
about this character. It's just a winged dog?
Although, I must admit that I really like the look of the top portion of it's
wings. That pink-to-lilac gradient is very pretty, and the sparkles are a nice touch!
Rate Alistair?
I don't really have a full story for him yet, so any suggestions would be nice.
But my idea is basically this—
Alistair was created from an Ikigai Ishi who was made of stardust and dead planets,
and an Ikigai Ishi who was born on planet Earth.
He grew up on a planet far from Earth, called Stiaxel (stee-ahh-zel), however.
Yet, when he grew, he was sent to Earth on a mission to guide lost spirits of old to the stars,
where they belong. But Alistair is afflicted by wanderlust, and while lost spirits call to him,
he tends to be busy exploring a world he's never truly known.
art and design by ๔คเรץ❀ฬђเรкєгร, species by Junemusic and ๔คเรץ❀ฬђเรкєгร