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Re: Dear Journal (The Diary Of An (Almost) Normal Dog.)

Postby ZombiePoodle » Wed Mar 16, 2011 9:04 am

Dear Bob,

So...where was I? Death at the sight of my very hot, very famous new boyfriend?
Yeah, that sounds about right.

He smiled at me, and I smiled back at him. I walked up close to him, shuffling my feet a bit.
"Hey," I said, glancing up at him as he replied.
"Hey." His smile had turned into more of a manic's grin. Y'know, like when someone's crazy, and instead of denieing their insane-ness, they don't just accept it, but welcome it?
Yeah, it made me a little edgy, and I scooted past him to put my pack away in my locker.
I stepped back, slamming my locker shut, and turend to see him still standing there, just watching me.
Flames corroded my cheeks and I'm sure that he had to have saw the redness of them, even through my fur.
Nick reached out to take my paw, but I pulled away, glancing down the halls aprehensivly.
"What's wrong?" He asked, looking more than a little hurt.
I winced a bit. "Well, I just don't know...What if everyone found out we were...we were--"
"Dating?"
"Yeah...and, well, I don't want to be going around the school, everyone would stare and they'd talk about us...and...well, I already have to be the principle's daughter."
"Yeah, but your mom's cool."
"I just don't like being the center of attention, and Rella...oh don't even get me started, she freaking asked you to the dance. You know that we are like...mortal enemies, right? She'd gnaw my head off!"
Nick sighed, "Okay, I suppose we can try to keep it a secret, but it will probably come out eventually..." He warned.
"Thanks." I fluttered my eyelashes a bit, and we walked down the hall to wait for the rest of our friends in the private room where we ate lunch.
We talked for a bit, when, finnaly, Emmie, Clair, and Cody burst into the room. What surprised me was that Tyler walked in with them. Hmmm...that kinda scared me. Ex-crush.
Okay, not completely ex, he was still pretty cute in my eyes, but...oooh, now I feel disloyal to my boyfriend for writing that...thinking that.
Anyways, Emmie immediately ran over to us and wrapped me up in a huge bear hug. I could have sworn that she squeezed me so hard taht I died for a second.
Y'know that saying, 'squeezed the life out of me'? Yeah...Total fail.
"So is it true!?" She pulled away a bit, "You two are dating!? Omaigawd, I'm soooo happy for you! Congratulations!"
I pushed her away and glared at Cody, who answered my glare with a shrug of his shoulders and a pitiful excuse, "We needed something to talk about, it was boring on the bus."


Arrrggg, I'll finish this later Bob,
Time for dinner!

~CAR...
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Re: Dear Journal (The Diary Of An (Almost) Normal Dog.)

Postby ~Night and Darkness~ » Wed Mar 16, 2011 9:31 am

OOOOOOhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh :x you should make her beat the ...HE double hocky sticks out of him :lol: JK
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Re: Dear Journal (The Diary Of An (Almost) Normal Dog.)

Postby ZombiePoodle » Wed Mar 16, 2011 12:27 pm

Ohhh, should we?
*grabs a hockey stick* We'll beat the H. E. double hockies out of him in styleee...

Sorry, craziness...And I keep getting interupted before I can finish...

Dear Bob,

Sigh...Again, where was I?
Always with the interuptions...
Umm, so Cody told everyone that me and Nick--Okay, don't consult me on my grammer, it's awesome. Never better. Me-an Nick. pfft. Nick and I, (happy now? You darn book...) were dating.
Including my still/kinda crush, Tyler. Gaash this is pretty confusing...
So I pushed Emmie the rest of the way off of me, relieveing the elephant+ten ton truck weight off my chest.
"Gee Emmie, it's not like I'm getting married, or having a pup, or something absurd like that!"
Nick chuckled, "There goes your idea of keeping it a secret"
"You were going to keep it from us!?" Clair howled, just as I exlaimed,
"Not them!" In astonishment.
Have you noticed yet that I like dialog? Well, now you have. And if you don't like it...get lost.
Now I've probably jinx-ed myself, and I'm going to lose you somewhere Bob. I can't live without you, don't leave me alone! Sorry, I'm just so dramatic.

Doorbell...
ANOTHER INTERUPTION.
I think I will die if I don't finnish this...
I've already put in three entries!
Oh wait, it's Nick...maybe I can live without finnishing this entry...Or I'll just have to finnish writing in you later, okay Bobby?

~CAR.
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Re: Dear Journal (The Diary Of An (Almost) Normal Dog.)

Postby ~Night and Darkness~ » Thu Mar 17, 2011 1:21 am

LOLOLOIOLOLOLOLOLO :lol: :lol: :lol:
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Re: Dear Journal (The Diary Of An (Almost) Normal Dog.)

Postby ZombiePoodle » Thu Mar 17, 2011 7:45 am

Dear Bob,

So I don't get interupted while writing again, I think that I'll write the last part (of my friends discovering my new relationship) real short.
Finnaly I can finnish telling someone what happened...even if you are just a book.
I'm crazy...But let's set aside those diffences for now...
So...Emmie asked if it was true...blah blah blah...Oh, wait, you wanna skip that and go ahead to when Nick interupted me? Ahhh, all in good time my dear journal, all in good time.

"It's not that big a deal..." I tried to explain as my friends all crowded around us, asking a billion plus one questions.
"Not a big deal? NOT A BIG DEAL!?" Emmie raged, "You're dating Nick, the totaly hot, singer dude!" She didn't seem to notice that she called Nick 'totaly hot' even when he said:
"Oh thanks Emmie, glad you think so." And smiled. Since when did his smile become so irrisitible?
Gaah, I'm losing my mind, wasn't it like...just a couple days ago that I turned Nick down because he was somewhat stuck up? He's fine with all the fame and celebrity stuff...gosh, I'm different than that. What if the press found out about our dating? It'd be all over the news! I could live with that....Speaking of the press though, I wonder how Nick got away from all the reporters and them?
I'll have to think about that, maybe ask him.
Anyways, Tyler was being quiet...
Crazy, don't even think about Tyler, let alone write anything...
Think tacos, rainbows, ponies, lolipops...candy, anything but Tyler...

The bell rang, and then school was in process.
We didn't get much time to talk about much, even at lunch, because og my paranoia...

Then at home, I got the surprise of Nick comeing over.
Oooh, and mom doesn't know that we're dating yet...I should probably tell her, but I'm not so sure myself.
What happened with Nick? Oh...nothing really, I'm so paranoid that I made an excuse for not going out to some movie or something with him.
"Sorry," I'd said, "I've got stuff to do, do you think we could schedule it for later?"
"Yeah, later would be fine."
"Okay, call me sometime."
"Right, see ya."
and then he left...

I'm not sure about this whole boyfriend/popstar thing...
It might not work out Bobby, I definately have some doubts.

~CAR
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Re: Dear Journal (The Diary Of An (Almost) Normal Dog.)

Postby cswolf. » Thu Mar 17, 2011 7:57 am

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Re: Dear Journal (The Diary Of An (Almost) Normal Dog.)

Postby ZombiePoodle » Thu Mar 17, 2011 8:02 am

Ahhh, no it's fail. >;\
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Re: Dear Journal (The Diary Of An (Almost) Normal Dog.)

Postby cswolf. » Thu Mar 17, 2011 9:02 am

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Re: Dear Journal (The Diary Of An (Almost) Normal Dog.)

Postby ~Night and Darkness~ » Thu Mar 17, 2011 9:16 am

LOl I love this...this is like looking into my journal at home....I love it!!!!! :D :clap:.....btw its so not a fail :thumbup:
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Re: Dear Journal (The Diary Of An (Almost) Normal Dog.)

Postby booklover789 » Thu Mar 17, 2011 11:33 am

I'm in love with the story-line. (Though I don't think Cam should be with Nick....I'm not exactly a fan of his. :( )
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