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A Cato doodle by Kenobi.

Artist Kenobi. [gallery]
Time spent 30 minutes
Drawing sessions 2
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A Cato doodle

Postby Kenobi. » Sat Jul 22, 2017 8:10 am

I used a wing tutorial.
It turned out pretty ok I guess. For my drawings at least.

Options and constructive criticism appreciated.
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Re: A Cato doodle

Postby Soll » Sat Jul 22, 2017 8:33 am

Crit;

I think the wing that is closer to the viewer looks fine, but the one closer to the back is way too dome shaped and needs to have a most bone-looking shape to it.
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Re: A Cato doodle

Postby Kenobi. » Sat Jul 22, 2017 8:42 am

^ Thank you, I tried to follow the thing the best I could, but I agree that it looks weird =)
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