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My gallery · by **September Rain** » Sun Jun 25, 2017 8:48 am

What can I improve on? Instructive criticism wanted!

My gallery · by **Grian** » Tue Jul 25, 2017 10:19 am

possibly try to make the legs shorter as no animal has legs that long unless they are a deer or giraffe,,, ;v;

My gallery · by **September Rain** » Tue Jul 25, 2017 11:18 am

Thank you! I shall do that

My gallery · by **aztecs** » Sat Jul 29, 2017 5:21 pm

OKAY HONESTLY THIS IS AMAZING but i feel as if you could improve on the lineart, like work on maybe getting it to be more clean and smoother? like faster strokes, retrying again and again if you need to, etc, etc. BUT SERIOUSLY I LOVE HOW WELL PUT TOGETHER THIS WAS AND THE COLORS ARE AMAZIN

Artist	September Rain [gallery]
Time spent	2 hours, 26 minutes
Drawing sessions	6
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