My Best Friend {Dog & Human- Discussion Thread} v2

[carpe noctem.]

Ｔｈｅ Ｋｉｄｓ Ｃｒｉｅｄ Ｏｕｔ

Name Adairia Kaiser
Nickname Dair
Gender Female
Age 17
Sexuality Bisexual
Crush tb developed on Jayden
BF/GF n/a
+ Traits witty, brave
- Traits snappish, fierce
Fears Becoming attached to someone and them leaving,
Dog Currently Undecided

"Ｐｌｅａｓｅ ＳＴＯＰ ｙｏｕ'ｒｅ ＳＣＡＲＩＮＧ ｍｅ"

Adairia Kaiser is a fierce girl with a rough past. This has caused her to push herself into a tougher and more guarded person, making it harder for people to reach out to her even when she needs it. She isn't one to speak out about her problems, believing it's better to solve them out herself than actually confide in someone. She has a silver tongue when she wants to be pursasive, though its also as sharp as a blade and quite sarcastic. Still, there are times when she can be rather friendly, even humorous, it's just when personal questions are asked is when she's rather snappy. Adairia likes dogs, as they were the only stable thing in her childhood, a creature she could rely on more than her parents. Adairia's parents were always bickering,fighting and taking no remorse even when they knew that this would deeply affect their only child, Adairia. Because of this, she was removed from the household by child services with her bull terrier, Knowles. She was in and out of homes as a foster kid, deciding never to become attached to them because she would probably be just forgotten by them once they didn't want her.

Ａｎｄ Ｗｈｅｎ Ｈｅｒ Ｈａｌｏ Ｂｒｏｋｅ

Name Mercy
Nickname Merc
Gender Female
Age 3 and 1/2
Breed Husky cross
Crush open/pm
Mate n/a
+ Traits loyal, affectionate
- Traits untrusting ,hostile
Fears restraints/ being chained up, whips, humans shouting
Owner Currently Undecided

"Ｓｈｅ Ｃａｒｖｅｄ Ｔｈｅ Ｔｗｏ Ｈａｌｖｅｓ Ｉｎｔｏ ＨＯＲＮＳ"

Mercy is a dog with a heart of gold, though this is only showed to someone she trusts completely. To the rest, it's clear that isn't one to stand around to watch people fool around. She can be snappy, especially if you get off on the wrong terms. She will bite out of aggressive fear, and she can be pretty ruthless when it comes to that. She isn't good with humans, as she was raised her entire life to basically hate them. Still, if a human manages to break through and earns her trust, she is a rather sociable & affectionate lass, quite the companion. She's relatively good around other dogs, though it's wise not to test her or push buttons that shouldn't be pushed.
She was born in an illegal fight ring, taught to snap and bite at anything she could grip onto. She learnt that it was a win or die life, so went full out, as she knew that one wrong move could come at the price of her life. The place was confiscated when she was around three, and she brought here.

[violynnights]

@Aesthetic - I would like to accept you, and I will, but I'm finding it very hard to read your forms and the information there/backstories, as the sentences are all kind of mushed together. Would you be able to fix that just a bit for me? It could just be my phone, and let me know if that's the case, but proper punctuation is going to be a requirement of the RP, and I'd find it really difficult to follow if that was the normal style.
Hope you understand!
EDIT: Looking at it more, I think it's mostly because the commas aren't spaced properly, if that makes sense?

[carpe noctem.]

@Aesthetic - I would like to accept you, and I will, but I'm finding it very hard to read your forms and the information there/backstories, as the sentences are all kind of mushed together. Would you be able to fix that just a bit for me? It could just be my phone, and let me know if that's the case, but proper punctuation is going to be a requirement of the RP, and I'd find it really difficult to follow if that was the normal style.
Hope you understand!
EDIT: Looking at it more, I think it's mostly because the commas aren't spaced properly, if that makes sense?

Completely understand! I'm currently fixing any of the punctuation errors so that it looks much more tidy ^^

Edit;; I've finished up, do tell if you see any that I've missed

[dea invidia.]

Name:: Avalanche
Age:: 4 Years Old
Gender:: Male
Breed:: Rough Collie
&
Name:: Alison Blackwood
Age:: 17 Years
Gender:: Female
Sexuality:: Heterosexual

Accepted! Welcome back!
And thanks for letting me know. We probably wouldn't start for a day or two anyway (I kind of wanted similar numbers to when we started last time.
Also, I was going to ask in the first RP, but what would you say to Avalanche and Aurelia being good friends? Like they've been together for a while in the kennels or something?

Thanks, and that sounds good to me. She'll probably be his only friend for a whie XD

[Cherry.]

Dog

Name:: Toffee
Age:: 3 years
Gender:: Female
Breed:: Corgi

Personality:: She gets along with people very easily, once she hats to know them. It takes her a while to trust anyone, due to her background listed below, but once she gains your trust she is really sweet!
Positive Traits:: Energetic, sweet, loves almost any food. (XD)
Negative Traits:: Afraid of EVERYTHING. Also, it takes her a while to trust people.
Fears:: Vacuum cleaners, frogs, gum, sand, cacti, spiders, you name it, she's probably afraid of it.

Background/History:: As a puppy, she was badly mistreated by her previous owners, and grew up fearing everyone and everything, and trusted no one. She escaped the house one day, and was picked up by animal control, then brought here.

Crush::Open
Mate::Open
Pups:: None as of now

Human Owner:: - Leave Blank Until Chosen -
Extra:: Hope I can join! This looks fun!

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Human

Name::Brynn Taylor
Age:: 17
Gender:: Female
Sexuality:: ???

Personality:: Gentle, Kind, Nerdy, Shy.
Positive Traits:: Gentle, Sweet,
Negative Traits:: Shy, Nerdy,
Fears:: Bad grades, bullies, her mom.

Background/History:: She is abused at home by her mom. Sometimes she begs teachers to let her stay at school longer so she doesn't have to face her mom. For this reason, she is kind of outcast from others. She has a long scar running down her ankle from one of her moms abusive actions.

Crush:: Open
BF/GF:: Open

Dog Companion:: - Leave Blank Until Chosen -
Extra:: Hope I can get accepted!

Sorry, if these seem short, it's late and I'm a tad uninspired, but it would be great if I could join this fun roleplay!

[violynnights]

Completely understand! I'm currently fixing any of the punctuation errors so that it looks much more tidy ^^
Edit;; I've finished up, do tell if you see any that I've missed

Looks awesome! Both accepted! ^.^ Will add them to the front page in a minute!

Dog

Name:: Toffee
Age:: 3 years
Gender:: Female
Breed:: Corgi

Human

Name::Brynn Taylor
Age:: 17
Gender:: Female
Sexuality:: ???
Sorry, if these seem short, it's late and I'm a tad uninspired, but it would be great if I could join this fun roleplay!

Thanks for giving it a go @CherryLeaf, and we all understand having bad days and those with no inspiration, but honestly, there is so little to go on in the forms, it'd be really good to have some more story or something a little more explanatory in the backgrounds?
For example, its all well and good being afraid of everything, but why is she afraid of everything? Is there a cause for it specifically? How long has Brynn's abuse been going on, has anyone noticed?
Also, I notice question marks at the 'sexuality' bit- why so? Is it just you're not sure, or don't know what this refers to?
Let me know here or PM if you like, but I just don't feel I can accept your characters at this point in time.

[violynnights]

Bumpity ^.^

[heffalumps]

Is it possible for me to make a male human and another dog character?

[violynnights]

Is it possible for me to make a male human and another dog character?

Go ahead! ^.^
I was thinking we could start in a day or two, if everyone was up for it! And people can join after the fact, if they like.

[heffalumps]

Would you prefer I put them in a separate post from my other characters or is it fine to do it in the same one?