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Postby dolly » Wed May 10, 2017 2:41 pm

name: Apollyon
gender: male
Marital status: Husband of Aeryn
Status: High ranking healer
Home: His medicine tent/where ever Aeryn is
Pet(s): A brightly colored owl that can follow him into dreams
Weapon of choice: He does not fight with weapons, only heals but if he really has to throwing knives
Build: Small and lean
Motto: "It is never to late to do the right thing."
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Postby dolly » Wed May 10, 2017 2:42 pm

I could never fully recall the events of that night, nor how I even ended up there in the first place. For all I knew I was born there or abandoned by my parents but never the less, I began there. Let me set the mood for you. It was a dark and stormy night, the kind of night you'd see at the beginning of a horror story. The rain was heavy and the wind was howling. And then there was me. A small defenseless kit with determination to outfight the storm. I though, was sadly mistaken if I actually thought I could out fight it. Now believe me, I tried, oh I tried so hard. Alas the wind knocked me down and before I could get up I was hit. It was huge and heavy. I can still imagine the pain I felt of that night, it was worse than anything i'd ever felt to this day. I would lay there for what seemed like hours, sobbing in the pain of it all. I cried for someone to help but no one was around to find me. Before I could do anything else I saw a flash of light and... boom! Down unconscious. In the moments before I knew I was dead, I mean how could I survive with injuries that bad and painful.
It was generally a surprise to me what followed that. I awoke after what seemed like days, maybe even years, to be told I had been laying there asleep for hours in the middle of a horrible thunderstorm. The strangest part was, I didn't have a scratch on me, besides my wings. Those were more than broken. I was being carried through the forest, towards a small village full of concerned kalons asking to many questions to understand. The two who brought me avoided them like the plague and went straight to there home where they laid me down to rest.
When I awoke I was greeted by them and my new siblings. They introduced themselves one by one. Summer and Cora were my new mothers and the ones who rescued me and their children Nimue, Neal, and Killian were my new siblings. They were both more than kind, they provided me with a place to stay, fresh and delicious treats, and clean, tasty water to drink. My siblings were a different story, they were great don't get me wrong but we'd constantly get into your typical sibling fights and quarrels.
The youngest was Nimue. She was my best friend at the time. She taught me about the kingdom, she made sure I was doing okay, she'd tell me about the boy she was crushing on. She talked to me about the strange glowing halo my horn emitted but neither of us could pin that mystery down. Believe me, we searched for hours on that question alone. Neal and Killian always seemed close to each other, it felt awkward to try and push in and start a conversation with them. Especially cause they'd end up attack me, in a loving way of course, which gave me a real spook even after the hundredth time.My mothers on the other hand, I couldn't ask for better. Summer cared for me like I was one of her own and Cora never failed to make me happy in tough times, which were often with the town having a large dislike for me.
The town was not so much though. Ever since the day I arrived rather hard to explain horrible events began happening, it would storm for hours out of the blue and end as quickly as it came, constant dry spells after leaving most of the crops to wilt, and some much worse incidents between townsfolk. It may seem silly looking at it now but they blamed me for it all! They'd say the day I came that storm came and since then these unfortunate incidents began occurring. How absurd that was honestly, but I still believed it deep down.
Every day i'd ask my self the same question - "Am I causing this?" and each day i'd say "No, it was just a coincidence." and carry on. If I told myself that enough I though just maybe I would begin truly believing it but alas, no such thing happened. I started feeling that may be true, maybe just maybe I am a walked, breathing curse. I didn't fully believe it was true until it got to the breaking point. The point you never want things to reach.
My 20th birthday was coming up, faster than any of us could imagine. I was a whole two decades old this day! It would have been nice if only it was only that. Alas like always it went south, faster than we could have imagined. Early morning we rushed to the docks to find Killian who had presumably been kidnapped by pirates. We searched until nightfall for him but we ended up empty as always. With grief in our hearts we headed over to the ceremony where things started going even worse. Lighting struck the building, thieves raided and looted everything we owned led by Rossa and Roxanne of the Underground Kingdom, one of the 5 allied kingdoms, and you can't have a party like this without a murder. 5 killed, 17 injured by Rossa and Roxanne alone.
This was more than the breaking point. The day I turned 20 everything we loved and cared about was just gone. My mothers begged, cried for them to leave me alone. They had lost one son today, don't make it two they'd cry but the townsfolk didn't listen. They powered through them like bulls, taking me by the neck and dragging me off across town. They instructed me to do one of two ridiculous options. One, run into the distance and never look back or two, die. My family begged for them to stop but they didn't. If I made an honest choice, I would have ended it. Better for everyone right? But knowing my family wouldn't like that I had to leave them... forever. "Goodbye", i'd tell them with tears streaming down my face. I ran as fast as my legs could carry me, I left everything I loved behind me.
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Postby dolly » Wed May 10, 2017 2:52 pm

Now alone with nothing to care for I was in a hopeless circle, jumping from town to town hoping to find a family like the one I lost. They could never be replaced, no matter how hard I tried, and I knew this. It didn't matter though. A part of me was missing and I needed to fill it. However, their was also an issue with this plan. I now had a reputation as a "god of great evils" more or less so anywhere I went I would be forced away, like how the town forced me away from the ones I loved.
Every time I knew what the outcome would be, I would be shunned. I just hoped that one time, just one time, it would be different. We've already learned by now that isn't how these stories go, I was the villain in their eyes and somewhat so in mine as well. I had nothing to really try for, my family was a world away and I was stuck wishing to be with anyone. I hadn't had a real conversation since the night before my birthday which was years ago at this point, well it most likely wasn't but it sure felt like it.
I felt like a ghost, like a soul separated from its host. I drifted from place to place wishing for someone to speak to, for only a moment of time with others. As the first full moon of my departure swung into place I hoped no, I prayed for a second chance, a moment of talking with another. The area was silent, you could hear someone drop a pin. Suddenly I felt extreme pain, pain I had only felt once in my life. The accident. I saw the same burst and just like that, I was out cold. It all felt the same to the accident. I once again feared somehow some way I had died.
I was awoken by the burning sunlight of the next day, or at least I thought it was the next day. I carried on with my normal routine, travel to the next town and arrive by nightfall just to be shunned by them as well. It was a hard trip to make daily but I could never be in one place for more than a day. This night though I experienced something I had never had in months, I entered without being kicked out.
I was free to speak or do anything I wanted in here! No one raised a paw to remove me from the area? What had happened? Did my wish work? What did the wish do to me? So many questions but so little answers. I went to the drinking well to get a sip of cold water to sooth my mind for a moment but everything I asked moments before was answered. Looking into the pail I saw it, I saw me. I was a totally different kalon. My face was dark as night, even in this light. That was how this was happening.
But like all villains stories, I was quickly let down once again. Two problems with this plan. For starters the form only came during the night and second, my luck followed me in both forms. It didn't take long for them to make the connection and with my time spent in the village I was down at least 5 more villages to visit. They knew I was near and would never let me. What was even the point?
If changing myself wont event give me a moment of peace what will? Nothing. After thinking on this topic since I started my run I had finally concluded a viable answer. Nothing could give me peace, it was clear as soon as I began. I have wings but can't even use them for gods sake! And like that I was gone. Erased myself from anyone.
I moved to the badlands, a place where no one went. A place where i'd never hurt someone with my horrid luck again. It was only me, myself, and I. It wasn't lonely, I had spent so much time like this but then I was being kicked from villages at the time. I convinced myself alone was the only way to go, the only person who would love me is me. I was my own enemy and best friend at the same time. I was the one hurting myself and helping myself. I wasn't though. I was only living in a pit of self loathing.
I had to make this better. I made a pact to myself that day, I would use my anger to find a way to more or less control this curse. I would use my sadness to boost myself up. I would be the me they'd want me to be. I would be the one worth of my family. With a goal at heart I spun myself a new life. A life I could make or destroy. I would not fail this time. I spent days and nights fighting to be the one they all wanted me to be, to become a hero not the villain. It would be difficult, I knew this mighty well, but I would accomplish this eventually.
I did as I said and learned the things to do, ways to turn that luck into something helpful to others. The luck was only against me, it hurt things I loved or wanted. It was simpler than I realized to turn it in my favor. What was the use of this skill though if I had no one to use it with? What was the points of even learning this if I am only around me?
That was simply it. Before I knew what I was doing I smuggled myself onto a boat and sailed towards a new life once again. I sat under the boat dreaming of this new life, my new friends. Oh the wonderful kalons i'd meet there. I had no idea where I was actually going per say... but I knew it would be far from the rumors. I laid my head down to rest up and before I knew it I was asleep.
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Postby dolly » Wed May 10, 2017 2:52 pm

I wasn’t in the mood to ask questions though, I immediately set off to find this land where I would be happy. It wasn’t easy but I managed to figure out where it was, the central city. The largest city in all of Vanhory, the place where the queen lived. I had fear the rumor would have reached here, it was the heart of the kingdom after all, but I went in anyways. I was created with welcoming faces in a time of need which I graciously accepted.
I had found my happy land and began my new life, my better life. I made my home on a hill, difficult to get to if you didn’t know where you were going but simple if you did. My new life was complete but it was still missing something. I couldn’t place my finger on it till the longest time. It was helping. I had spent the first years of my life hurting the ones I loved most the least I could do was help those needing someone.
After the boat ride I had discovered I could more than change my dreams, I could enter others dreams. I learned this after many towns folk sought me out for the reason of “I was in their dreams” even though they had never seen my face. We could both describe what had happened in perfectly matching detail. This shook me like it would anyone, I was apparently a dream walker.
I was able to help others by day and figure out who by night. I was making a name for myself as a great healer, someone who knew you were hurt before you did. This place truly was a place of happiness and more than what I had seen with that beautiful lady. I was able to do the impossible, change fate.
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Postby dolly » Wed May 10, 2017 2:57 pm

Incase the story was not clear:

How do they feel about it?: He feels like it gave him a second chance and helped him realize his true meaning.
Why does it happen?: Because he was blessed/cursed with a second life.
How does it happen?: It happens when he is exposed to darkness. If he was in a dark room it would adjust to night form inside of it too. It also changes when he sleeps.
Are they cursed, were they born this way, or maybe even blessed?: He was blessed with it.
Do they have powers?: He gained healing powers and when in night form can control the dream world in any and every way (change the dream, travel through them, catch dreams, etc.).
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